XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[could it be true love?]

Interesting lovers

~~REVIEW~~
Now here we go, i love zombies and this was another decent ones from you, the {BLER} was a nice touch i thought, and you can kinda see some thought bubbles in the backround, the color and shades is dim wich seems to fit well its a very grungy look, I like that fact that you put more then just one zombie and there seems to be others but very very faint, thats ok too, i think you could have done a little more with blood, maybe they just came from lunch and have some dripping fresh blood?? well its an idea anyways, but none the less this was another impressive piece by you, as improving i suggested a few ideas, that would show more of the details, with fresh blood and all, but other then that it was alright, anyways once again nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some fresh blood could be showing?

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dommi-fresh responds:

well its done now so no room for improvement

[fei lung (LEGEND!)]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
And here we have another great piece by you, as always great stuff, There is alot of line work in this one, cool and shows alot of the detail, and shows his action pose, would have liked to see the {PANTS} not all black but maybe lighter and with some shades in it or even some of that nice line-work in it, And with the white backrond kinda gives it a bland feel, so maybe some sorta backround would sufice, maybe some fighting place or even other fighters in the backround, you could even show some beat up fighters to really show he means busness, but really this was a nice pice and was very welldone, so awsome job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awsome linework here maybe with some backround you could show a more full piece,

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dommi-fresh responds:

thanks mate another awesome critique

[Take Me Out Of Here.]

Very impressive

~~REVIEW~~
This is an impressive art piece here it sorts tells a story of something here, like maybe end of world and people have left or some attack on the world, who knows but you give off the idea that something crazy has happend, the {DETAIL} is very nice detailed and good effects like the {SPARKLES} and stuff, now as it does tell a story i wouldnt mind knowing more in that aspect, maybe if you had like an old sigh showing something that happend or even an old newspaper of sorts would be a nice touch aswell, the colors you used are dark works well with the picture, i love the waves and such you gave it that real life like feel, very nice indeed, as to improving well more to the story would be a start, but really other then that it was very impressive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more detail on what is going on, more to the story if you will

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[kermit the mob frog]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was amusing this looks abit bland though as this was the only part, would have really loved some {BACKROUND} to this art piece, it would tell more of the story, maybe you could have added a scene were there was one of the other puppets running away, might make for a more funnier part but thats just my opinion, have some colored backround would seem to work aswell, and i wouldnt mind some more standoutish colors , as for the drawing its actually very good and simple which is also a plus, I really like the gun on the ground making you guess the killer or even suicide, but once again you amaze us even with you older works, keep it up, i look forward to more of your drawings and art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work to give more to the story or adding some solid color would be a nice touch up

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dommi-fresh responds:

well bloody hell i never thought people would still be looking at the first one i ever did!

[200th DRAWING ON NG]

Newgrounds galore

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is is awsome, kinda like whats on the newgrounds, frontpage, but to see how you did your own style, here shades are not as deep as your other work, I like all the differant characters here and your own little style you put on them, the {BACKROUND} was sorta so-so, an idea might be to add some sorta maybe {CITY} since you see that in alot of ng stuff like the banner and stuff, but i thought something could go back there maybe even something just a tad light like that so that it doesnt take away from your main drawing of characters and such, and these are just a few ideas to think about to improve on something already awsomly done, anyways nice job on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work like a city drop, some blood or more gringy looking spots here and there wouldnt hurt.

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dommi-fresh responds:

incase you haven't noticed backgrounds aren't usually my thing

[fakebook and twatter]

Very impressive

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one was very impressive, i like the awsome shades you have some deep texture in this one, and the {DRAWING} really seemed to comeout neat here, almost like a little story comic ext, the facebook Theres alot of stuff in the drawing, wouldnt mind if things were spaced out somewhatm also love the colors used seemed to really work off eachother with the greens and browns, An idea to give a more visual on the book maybe a glowing eye of sorts would be nice, just an idea though, and in the lower left and roght corners of the drawing could use something maybe something seems bland in that area. anyways decent drawing, and i look forward to seeing more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A good drawing here, maybe some spacingout of stuff, or if you like that style fill in the bland spots, and give the {BOOK} a more focus point as suggested the eyes or even some bloody teeth, anyways nice work.

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dommi-fresh responds:

i wanted to keep the colour bold and bland like their crappy logos.

[Creech Fanart]

Its a decent drawing

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually not half bad, now the {DRAWING} itself is decent well done, now wish there was some color added in there, would have been a plus, even if just a small portion here and there, sometimes just the outline is even awsome if colored and the rest black and white, but you can see some nice little detail in there which is always a nice touch, sometimes its hard to see the detail also because of all the dark shading but again its an ok piece i thought, you have filled the whole board there that is great but everything is so close together, maybe spreading out stuff just a tad, so more of the fine detail can be seen, regardless of all that, its pretty decent, and i look forward to reviewing more of your work in the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spreading out stuff abit more for more visual detail, adding a touch of color would be another touch up,

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[Down with sound]

Yellow is cool

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is a nice piece here, very yellowish which is nice, and the theme, now im getting the idea this is more like an Audio theme it looks like but i could be wrong, i like the very {CLEAN} look you gave it, it is fresh and clean. and you have some nice shading in there aswell, a very welldone peice of artwork here, i still feel with the simple idea that you could have gone abit more though, like say with the {BACKROUND} not sure what the theme was but if it was say audio related you could use the backround to reflect the theme aswell, its not bland, but still could use some sorta reflecting theme there, and i love the yellowish feel and theme so with a final thought this was very impressive and very creative, so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more theme reflecting to the art piece for the backround.

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[Rusty Shackleford]

Nice work

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was very impressive, the color texture is very deep, not a bad thing, i love that you have added some backround to reflect off the koth, i personally think the colors are too rich and deep though, maybe give it some lighter tones as to reflect the cartoon style abit more, also on his {FACE} i thought you made it look too muscly like he is a body builder of sorts, the character you are drawing was more {SCRONNY} looking and skinny, kind of weak and such, the hat was a nice touh fit right in and i enjoyed it very much nice job all around though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the face was too bulky, and the colors are too deep , tone it down abit explained above

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