XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mother's Day]

Nice flower

~~REVIEW~~
Nice rose here the sketch and black and white style is pretty good, you should think about redoing, the rose but running it though paint shop pro or even photoshop so you can run this with some {COLOR} dont get me wrong its good but with some of the added color would make it much better, the sketch it self is good work great shading and nice detail, the rose part itself could use more shaping around the edges, the leaves came out great almost perfect, but anyways great job, so a few ideas of making it better are adding some color, some shaping around the flower edges, other then that it was ok, anyways nice piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Round out some flower edges, and adding some color would be great touch for making it better

~X~

CaOmDaYn responds:

thank you for the detailed review! i definitely need work on this one yes it was done in roughly 10 minutes, and i do agree color would do a lot for it. But i have never been one to work with color, pencil and pen are what I do. Thank you tho! :)

[Out of the Dusk]

Decent skyline

~~REVIEW~~
Another nice piece, i love this one with the sorta {BUG} the red eye is a focus point, so im thinking, you should have made the red eye much more {BRIGHTER} or a much more {GLOW} the backround {CITYVIEW} was very impressive and you could also make it abit Cloudy and misty give the city a more mystery style city, just a few ideas that would make this much better in my oppinion ofcourse its already a good piece, i suggested these ideas because maybe they will help, but this was a pretty good one on its own, but besides all that it was pretty good and i was glad to see this and hope to see more of your work pretty soon, anyways nice job once again

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighted red eye and some misty clouds, are just a few tips.

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