XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[soda spill]

This was interesting but i like

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is a nice and simple image here, but it does need some "DETAIL" it can still have that "SIMPLE" feel but it does need a tad detail like say the cup it could totally have "COKE" along the side of it and all, or what you could do is make up your own logo of some sort, abit of design and some texture to the simple colors used and such would really bring this out, but still keep its simple side and feel to it, now the backround looks to me like this scene takes place at the movies so maybe some posters should be back in those empty slots or something along them lines, well you have a nice drawing here just needs abit of detail here and there nice work though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few details such as some added posters in the backround, maybe a soda logo on the soda and more depth to the colors more texture if you will

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[Neytiri]

Wow pretty good

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this is pretty good, the quality is really top notch, this is kinda crazy because i just saw the movielastnight so this is still fresh on my mind and you have a very good likeness here the backround is notbad either, i do wish you made it much larger though. as for hte backround is seemed out of focus allthough that may have been what you were going for, but i think having some other related stuff from the movie like more forrest backround would also work, maybe even some other navi in the backround or even go as far as having one of those flying creatures to go the extra detail there, well just an idea or two there and i think it would give the image much more life and such. anyways nice work here keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More backround characters and or creature could help to liven up the image

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JoshSummana responds:

Yeah the background was supposed to be blurred cos in the reference there isnt a lot of forestry either, its a rock face with a bit of growth and then a waterfall on the right. But I wanted Neytiri to stand out as the focal point, so thats why there are no additional Navi or creatures - and plus thats not a review - thats just you saying what you want in the picture..."having one of those flying creatures to go the extra detail there"...its not in the reference/promotional movie poster so I didnt add it.

I just had a look at your work, and not being a dick, but I thought you would be totally amazing if you are willing to easily judge other peoples work...?

[Cold Symbol]

This was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this was notbad, kinda bland in some points but you are right about "BLUE" working well for this, you may want to try a "RED" version or even have the letters Red and the backround blue or even vice versa, i find red has a great feel to it especially if its the deep reds and such, And as for the lettering, it had some nice detail but i think you need to give it much more shine then what you have there, maybe if it was red you might beable to implement that abit more, so regardless its a pretty neat art piece, but with a few fixes as i suggested here it could be even better, so good luck. and hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some differant colors either for the letters and backrounds i suggested a deeper red, and amore shine effect aswell

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HeavyTank responds:

Hm, okay, and thanks for leaving a review (although you have thousands :D).

[Supernova 2]

ok the 2nd one

~~REVIEW~~
Now this seems abit better "QUALITY" then the 1st one, but its still missing something ill explain in just abit, im actually thinking that if you were to "MIX" the two styles it might make for an awsome version, so like the first one had a great "WARP" feel and this one doesnt, this one is more of like what would be at the end of the warp so if you mixed the two i think you would have a pretty awsome one, as for this one its pretty good i like the brighter feel and it just has some better overall quality to it that really shines thru, that center piece needs to be somewhat larger, and everything in the outer areas seems too bland you might want to spice that up abit with some stars and specs around, but other then that its notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like versions 1 and 2 and mixing the two would make for a neat version 3, add some stars in the bland spots so it doesnt seem so plain

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[Supernova]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well i must say you really like this "LIGHTING" style of art, and dont get me wrong so do i, this was another good one, i dont know if its your best of works but its still pretty impressive, this one kinda reminds me of what the star ship enterprise goes thru in warp mode, but anyways, i like all the stars all around, but im thinking the "STARS" themself should be somewhat smaller and have more warp to them as this is like a warp and everything should be in super warp speed, just a thought on my end though, I also think the "CENTER" area should be more brighter to reflect something special in the center, give it that super bright feel like some of your other works have, but with all that said i like what you have here, keep up the decent work, i look forward to reviewing more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested make the stars smaller and with more warp speed feel to them, also make the center more brighter

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Shikhs responds:

thanks

[Divine Temple]

Love the light

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is neat, this really reminds me of a "CANDLE" lit up in the backround and the light is really reflecting off from that and somehow you got this as of a result? heh i dont know really but it resembles a candle lit up in complete darkness you seem to have captured that perfectly somehow, i really like that, as to improve on this? well maybe some outer lights around here and there, maybe even a lit up border somehow, but not sure how that would come about, but regardless this is pretty impressive so i enjoyed it and will checkout your other stuff soon, so good luck on your next entry, and may the "LIGHT" be with you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some hidden backround lights or even a lit up border or frame

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[The Wintermood]

Oh wow i love it

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was really neat, even abit dark i thought but wow you have really impressed me with some awsome texture and so much detail, i went ahead and added this to my faves list so props to you on an awsome piece of art here it is as i would call it "BRILLIANT" I love your fine detail like the hair, and also props to you on the little glow effect in the backround, that was a very nice shot there, I did however think the "BLOOD" could have been much better, maybe make the blood more "THICKER" well its just an idea anyways, well hope my review helped in anyway, regardless you have some awsome detail in this, keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained some thicker blood would be nice, just an idea though

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[ABSRACT Crture-Under the Ocean]

Nice

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is another nice bright one from you thanks for making the request, and glad you listened to me, now this one you have here is pretty differant but i still like it, and i do see what you mean about the eyes and mouth, the "EYES" have a really neat look to them, might have been nice if you put a little star in the middle of the eyes or something to give it that more eye look, but overall it does look pretty neat, and as for the mouth maybe give it some stars or shapes that make it look like teeth some sharp ones, heh just an idea anyways, but all and all its another neat pic with the neat brightness and awsome colors i liked from the last one, feel free to request a review anytime and ill be glad to review any of your work, so i look forward to more of your stuff soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well like explained, the eyes could use a more center points, and the mouth could use a teeth type of thing.

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Shikhs responds:

thanks man thanks for the review

[Board]

Love it needs color

~~REVIEW~~
WOW now this is cool, i really love checkerboards and chessboards, i have done a few myself, and this was pretty good, it could really use some color though, red and black or something like that it would really present itself much better allthough the fans seem to really like this, or what you could do is add some color in the backround only that might make for something differant, im also thinking it would look nice with maybe some chess piece or even a checker piece, i like the faded paint you gave it, but again it needs color to really bringout the image alot more, so as explained maybe a falling chess/checker piece would be a nice touch, i dont ming the black and white but atleast ad some color

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some color ofcourse even if its just a part of the image, then you could add some props in there like a checker piece and or a chess piece

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[Mysterious Stranger]

Oh wow

oh wow this was really fantastic the reds have a deep colour, and then you added a nice shine to the reds in the right places, i also love how the bottom cape atleast i think its a cape, tails off it was a nice little feature you have, and now for the "CIRCLES" that was a nice effect making it a more uniqie image here very neat and deep colors all around really made this into a fantastic piece, overlooking the image several times theres somany nice effects from the circles, to the deep reds, and the mask and no head, it was just awsome and i had a pleasure viewing this, i plan to checkout more of your work.

Improving on this would be hard as you already have alot of great stuff so i would leave this be, anyways nice job all around

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