XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spider-Man]

Love it

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty decent, i love anything spiderman. so this was pretty decent i especially like the backrounds as you added a multiple of colors that really seemed to come together and that was pretty neat, and it doesnt take away from the character of spiderman, and even some good sketches, here, good use of color nice linework and good detail, so while this was just a tid bit on your end, good piece cameout even better, so as for improving maybe addeven more color in the backround but other then that this was neat stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
abit more blending of color like with the backround but its pretty good aswell.

[Tree Of Lies]

TV's everywhere

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad and i like the idea, i could have sworn i seen this someplace, the whole idea of all the tv's piled up on one another with little quates, but anyways as for your piece this was pretty good pretty basic and light on the colortines. it was a very dark shadowed drawing so made it hard to really see the tvs, and what each one sad, also i would have thought there might be abit more glow to them aswell as around your character, the idea is good but some more lighting effects are in order. anyways decent piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
nice work here could use more lighting effects and more sharper visuals on the details.

TheN0mad responds:

thanks much buddeh, not many people give as good a review as you do :)
and yeah i need to work on my lighting and perspectives alot more

[Chick Drawn On An iPad]

I like the color tone

~~REVIEW~~
hmm this was not bad has a simple yet colorfull tempo here, maybe abit more added color in the backround, but seems with the ipad and that app its still pretty decent if you ask me, maybe some more details here and there though, and like i said some more color, for that extra bit more for an overall better outcome, now i like the soft shade of color but maybe some outter darker ones would be another idea for improving on this one, but other then that this was notbad at all, so untill your next piece of art keep on the awsome work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested some ideas for a better outcome like, more backing, more colors, and some other darker inking somehow.

[Matt from Epic Battle Fantasy]

nice detail

~~REVIEW~~
nice job on this one, the detail is fantastic its pieces like this one i really enjoy alot of focus points and lots of detail, maybe abit more shading on skin-tone must of took you awhile to get all this together but still for the mostpart it was pretty fantastic, so the only issue its not really an issue but for the extra measure, just some extra shading on skin, i will have to checkout some of your other work, anyways untill next time keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some extra shading on skin-tone

["Mercy" The Final Cut.]

Very nice.

~~REVIEW~~
ok so after seeing your other piece i thought i would checkout some more of your work, and this one i must say is pretty awsome if you ask me, now while its mostly in black and white thats an ok option but as you say nothing more can be done but i think a colored version, maybe not all collered but some, just even a tad, and i know her weapon is somewhat coloered but still goes with the black and white style, i would even go as far as have more glow and shine on the bacround so there is more glare comming from it, but other then that this was pretty good i thought.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few ideas above, some lighting effects for the moon, some color options and such.

johngoldenwolf responds:

Thank you very much, and glad to hear your a bit of a follower.
I'll take your advice into consideration if I decide to do a redux of this concept.
In truth this is the forth rendition of this concept over the years.
THe other tghree have either been lost or sold.

[Pantoran Jedi]

Pretty nifty

~~REVIEW~~
ok very impressive with this one, now it has a mixture of starwars and avatar in the mix, the backround was too simular in color though with the skin tone maybe a differant backround tone, so that it doesnt mix in somehow, she needs abit more detail on the boots maybe more black type, and some shiny stuff on legs wouldnt hurt either, other then that it was pretty good. maybe also give more focus on the moon aswell more brighter somehow, anyways this was pretty good if you ask me but could be better, anyways untill next time, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
change the backround somehow as the skintone and backround were just too simular,

johngoldenwolf responds:

THank you. :) Most appreciative of the critique.

[Na]

Nice use of color

~~REVIEW~~
I just love the use of color in this one and you presented some good "SHADING" also like the color with hair eyes and eyebrows, that was kind of a nifty idea, also great job on using the whole canvas allthough some of the backround you could have used, and one last point that may or may not help but ill throw it in there anyways maybe some extra shading on the skin tone for the extra detail but doesnt seem like it needs it, anyhow its a great portrait. anyways keep up the decent art works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some extra shading on the skin tone and maybe a touch of backround in the bland backround spots.

~X~

Grigoro responds:

Now I know what's wrong with this picture.
Big thanks to you :)

[Dark Hand]

Decent art piece

~~REVIEW~~
Good hand bloodies at that and thats an eye so that was pretty cool you did give it the whole feel of creepy and as a desktop that was a neat idea, now im thinking you could add abit more there too much darkness, maybe if it were two hands it would be ok but needs something more, maybe more blood even and the dark blood you have is pretty good if you ask me, because the desktop icons would still be ok over that backround, maybe even some sorta borders would work. anyways good art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be larger in scale, and more blood splatters around, even a border would work.

~X~

[Determination]

Pretty decent

~~REVIEW~~
The character were was well done i like the "LIGHT" feel of stuff, light tone colors and inked even that, now the backround was ok but i thought you could have done something more then just white maybe some backround seen or if you want the "WHITE" go with some sorta mystic clod in the backround that way it doesnt take away from the actual character but also gives the whole canvas used, i wouldnt mind seeing more shades aswell in the jacket you can still give more shades while still keeping it on the light drawing feel.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a few suggestions to improve are some sorta backing besides the white maybe a coud, and possibly darke shading on the jacket

~X~

[Self Portrait]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, the faceial features look pretty good, just a portrait but lookd pretty good now there could be improvment in alot of areas for one making the whole portrait much larger, maybe even adding some shades in theskin tone, but everything seemed to be right on with those small changes, could be much better and have a better outcome, so overall i liked it and it was a decent job, so nice work here i do hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above, a larger creation base, and some more textute and shading in skin tone,

~X~