XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Raptor rider]

Simple and cute

~~REVIEW~~
ok so here is another friday flood, thing, notbad this one was pretty good i thought, i like the idea of {DINO's} this one seemed to lack some backround work wich would have been a fantastic finish to it the dino and rider were abit light so maybe some sorta darker backround might have worked somehow, or even a rainbow of colors would have been nice, now these themed ones are nice im guessing an idea from the art forums and such, its not a bad idea the same {THUMB} kinda thru me off but in anycase it was decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some backround work might also be another good idea for this particular piece, So i suggested to the others >> Since this is like a theme {FLOOD THE PORTAL} Why not have a description in the authers comments about that, kind of gives the viewers who dont know about it an idea and such.

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[Flood the Portal 8 - Dinosaurs]

Nice use of color

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so im not too sure what {FLOOD THE PORTAL} is but guess its make one theme by a number of users? as a tip to improve on that idea i suhhest you all put it in the comments, might even draw more attention to the other pieces, as for this one, its very colorfull and a good dino in the middle seems rushed and somewhat simple like, its not bad its kinda neat actually, i would love to see abit more {TEXTURE} in the dino but from what it is , its pretty good if you ask me, so to better improve on this maybe some more texture on the dino skin, and an update on the authers comments. anyways good stuff as always.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Since this is like a theme {FLOOD THE PORTAL} Why not have a description in the authers comments about that, kind of gives the viewers who dont know about it an idea and such.

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Spags responds:

Flood the portal is an activity that the art forum does once a month where everyone uses the same thumbnail in their piece so that the portal all has the same thumb if enough people participate.

I realize that this dinosaur is rushed, I had to make him in like 40 minutes, so you're pretty spot on there. I agree that a texture would have been nice, or at least some more detail.

Thanks so much for the constructive feedback!

[Don't Run, We Are Your Friends]

Nice work

~~REVIEW~~
ok so nice job on this the {GREEN} is looking awsome perfect color on this guy, and i like the little red color details aswell, the {BRAIN} was great but im thinking, you should have had some red in the darker green shaded areas maybe it would look better that way, other then that the colors cameout very well, the {EYES} are perfect they are really just popping out at you wich i really liked so nice job there, This almost seems like the type of work you could put up on a dress-up game in flash so theres something there, so anyways tips for making this piece better, add a differant color in the brains darker shading. other then that its pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add a differant color in the brains darker shading.

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[King Tiger]

Impressive colors and design

~~REVIEW~~
Really like this and the color you got going i personally love anything with the use of {PURPLE} so this seemed to comeout very well, and with black it seemed to workout ok i thought, the lil touches of yellow or gold was working as extra so really nice touch with the colors here, some little {EFFECTS} like glowing of the eyes could have been used, i think in this situation it would have worked great if you ask me, something to try out for another time, but besides that tip it was a good piece, also another tip for making it better might be to add some backround work but not really needed , just a tip for making it even better then it already is.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few tips for making things better, with some glow and even some backround detail, other then that it was a good piece

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[Counting Shiplights]

Love the detail and theme

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice work on this and i am loving the {BLUE-THEME} and not overkilling either but you have some very nice detail in this like with the design within the hat, im thinking that design should be lighted grey or something, but anyways you have a good drawing has a good persona about her, so i can see ehy you like her, the little details in this is what works out the most, so verywelldone on those parts, if i was to suggest anything to make it better i would say some backround work, but i understand its about the character, so anyways great stuff i enjoyed this great character of yours and look forward to seeing some more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i wrote about some backround work but understanding its just about the character work.

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[Mother's Day]

Nice flower

~~REVIEW~~
Nice rose here the sketch and black and white style is pretty good, you should think about redoing, the rose but running it though paint shop pro or even photoshop so you can run this with some {COLOR} dont get me wrong its good but with some of the added color would make it much better, the sketch it self is good work great shading and nice detail, the rose part itself could use more shaping around the edges, the leaves came out great almost perfect, but anyways great job, so a few ideas of making it better are adding some color, some shaping around the flower edges, other then that it was ok, anyways nice piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Round out some flower edges, and adding some color would be great touch for making it better

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CaOmDaYn responds:

thank you for the detailed review! i definitely need work on this one yes it was done in roughly 10 minutes, and i do agree color would do a lot for it. But i have never been one to work with color, pencil and pen are what I do. Thank you tho! :)