XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cosmic Dream]

Very impressed

Now here is something that really stuck out to me its these types that are really nifty and something kind of differant, But i really enjoy finding stuff like this on the portal. So this is one of my new fave art pieces here on the site, you have done a great job on this one, the black and white style is perfect, the lines and sketchs are also superb, i was taken back with this whole piece and was pretty impressed with everything you had here, so for me this was a top notch piece of art, maybe a touch of color like the moon or something but overall this was awsome. And as i come to a close here, you have done well, you have suprised me and have an outstanding piece of art here, you have for sure got me doing a double turn on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so i would like to see if i have any improvment details, and if i do ill post what can be changed here, allthough you have a pretty decent piece here. I wouldnt mind seeing one area or some spot colored while the rest is black andwhite that would be something differant and such, but other then that you have a good piece of art here.

[Game_Menu]

Notbad at all

Very nice work here and some nice effort aswell, allthough i wouldnt mind seeing some more effects throughout it was a pretty good piece of work, so keep making fantastic stuff like this. I like what you have done here, you have something interesting with lots of colors, i dont understand the text but guess its something, the lightning was good aswell, the backround was pretty neat too, Would have been nice if the colors were more "VIBRANT" maybe even the "LIGHTNING" somewhat more brighter, but other then that you have done very wellon this piece, and it was a pleasure. Now i was really liking the work you put out here today it was something that put some nice effects and elements together, so it was a good piece of art, And i do look forward to more of your work here soon enough.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here is where ill suggest a few ideas if i have any, you already have some good work here so probably wont need much, but if anything ill try and pin point a few areas of needing some attention. Now as for improvments i have suggested some possible lightning, and maybe more brighter and vibrant colors but then it all depends on your ideas aswell.

[Feed the Masses!]

Lots of color

So sometimes its kind of hard to judge someones art, but sometimes you have too, i think you have a wonderfull piece here but again could use some more efforts and better details, maybe a few changes but not much, anyways notbad. Alright so there was some nice things about this one, there was some nice things about the color allthough i thought that there could have been some brighter and even more "VIBRANT" areas of color, like the part of the stuff comming out of the mouth, and the "BACKROUND" was too simular as the main drawing so it all was too blended in, so maybe a differant backround would be key. Alrigh you have something good here i like the artwork that you have presented here now i wouldnt mind seeing some more efforts but sofar you have done a decent job here and i do look forward to more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slight improvments are always a plus especially with artworks, i may not be a pro at art but i do know a few things so hope you may look into some of the ideas and advice i may post up here, but besides that good luck. There was some issues with the backround and color that could be changed and or worked on.

Erbmaster responds:

Thanks for the tips!

[Fat demon]

Very interesting

Nice demon you have here the "TEXTURE" and detail is very welldone and i like the feel of it, as it looks like its looking at something and so thats good and you showed the emotion with the eyes, very impressive, the texture is impressive as is the line and shade work. so here was something very impressive and glad i had a chance to check this out, great work great detail, and most of all greatpiece of art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think the "EYES" ould use some glow or color shine possibly.

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.05]

Nice effects

Alright so this was even better then all the rest, i especially like the first "FRAME" because it had some nice effects with some good glare that was some nice detail you should do more etails like that throughout the series or other stuff you have, but anyways its a good comic series and would love to see more of this, anyways nice work here and hope there is much success from it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing much except some better detail and such.

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.04]

Very nice again

And once again we have another great rendition to the story, i actually do love this story and like to see whats going on, and i must say in this particular one you gave the comic some more pazazz so it all kind of worked out for the best, The larger frame boxes are nice and seem to work aswell, so nice job there, maybe if the "CORDER-FRAMES" were colored it would be even better just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My only suggestion this time is to have the frames colored, but even if not its pretty good as is.

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.03]

Very nice

So the story continues on and the action gets started and such, i like how you give a big shot here at first then go into more detail frames afterwards, a good change in events here in the comic, and im starting to really get into this, one thing i really love about this whole piece is that its has that whole old style and such, anyways nice job. hope to continue to see how everything turns out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmm not sure i like what you have here, maybe more artwork out and over the "FRAMES" would be a nice change.

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.02]

Like a great Splash

This was like a great splash, and you put it up like a splash of fun and entertaining view shots, allthough again i wouldnt mind seeing some more of that mix of new and old ideas from the comic world but you have done an awsome job here, some deeper colors wouldnt hurt either, but regardless you have a nice comic going on here, so keep up the good efforts and i do look forward to seeing more of what you come up with.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright good stuff as all theother comics, a mix of new and old would be nice, some deeper colors and shades aswell.

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.01]

These are always cute

Cute and sexy is what these are, good old style characters, and old style comic phase aswell, you have really, made it feel like it was and is a comic, now i wouldnt mind seeing some new style comics mixed in with the old here, now thats just an idea, but you do have something good here, and i was pleased with the outcome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some more in your face scnes kinda like they do withnew comics now.