XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.04]

Very nice again

And once again we have another great rendition to the story, i actually do love this story and like to see whats going on, and i must say in this particular one you gave the comic some more pazazz so it all kind of worked out for the best, The larger frame boxes are nice and seem to work aswell, so nice job there, maybe if the "CORDER-FRAMES" were colored it would be even better just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My only suggestion this time is to have the frames colored, but even if not its pretty good as is.

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.03]

Very nice

So the story continues on and the action gets started and such, i like how you give a big shot here at first then go into more detail frames afterwards, a good change in events here in the comic, and im starting to really get into this, one thing i really love about this whole piece is that its has that whole old style and such, anyways nice job. hope to continue to see how everything turns out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmm not sure i like what you have here, maybe more artwork out and over the "FRAMES" would be a nice change.

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.02]

Like a great Splash

This was like a great splash, and you put it up like a splash of fun and entertaining view shots, allthough again i wouldnt mind seeing some more of that mix of new and old ideas from the comic world but you have done an awsome job here, some deeper colors wouldnt hurt either, but regardless you have a nice comic going on here, so keep up the good efforts and i do look forward to seeing more of what you come up with.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright good stuff as all theother comics, a mix of new and old would be nice, some deeper colors and shades aswell.

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.01]

These are always cute

Cute and sexy is what these are, good old style characters, and old style comic phase aswell, you have really, made it feel like it was and is a comic, now i wouldnt mind seeing some new style comics mixed in with the old here, now thats just an idea, but you do have something good here, and i was pleased with the outcome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some more in your face scnes kinda like they do withnew comics now.

[Elk's Deathwing]

Awsome piece here

well awsome piece here and i see that this one was "FRONT-PAGED" congrats on that and that was very well-deserving of a front page award, the fire like dragon is pretty awsome, nice detail nice form and love the design on this, this really does look like a flame dragon and you putup top quality with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well to be honest i think you have outdone yourself and have an awsome piece here so no changes are really made, maybe some more fire like texture on hid "FLAME" but thats about it.

[Doom!]

Hmm interesting

Not sure if this has anything to do with locks but it was a rather nice drawing and the color was alittle light but still nice looking, and this kind of tells a little story with whats going on and such, but for the mostpart you have something decent here and i hope to see more of your work soon, i wouldnt mind seeing more fresher colors though, anyways good job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Why not run this thru paint shop pro for some freshened up colors or schems would be a nice addition.

[Die Hank]

Very nice work here

The detail ismad good on this the dark colors the blood the shades and even some grungy feel to it so you have done a nice job here and i can see that you have put the effort in the detail shows from top to bottom, You have outdone yourself on this piece and i have really enoyed this, i will have to check out the other version aswell, i wouldnt mind seing some more "LIGHTING" effects from the light above might make for some good use of lighting and darkening.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This could do with some more lighting effects from the light above might make for some good use of lighting and darkening.

[Demon of Habit]

This was differant

ok so you do have something differant here, the "CHARACTERS" are nice, the colors are funky and i got a good luagh from the quote so nice efforts there, good detail on characters, im not familuar with what these characters are realted to and all but i did find it amusing and maybe in the end thats all that matters, as for improvments maybe make the canvus musch larger that way you can add more detail to your piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Onlything i can see getting some work is possibly making a larger canvus area for more added touches of detail.