XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Art Block]

Unique and differant

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is something really differant, i like this, you used your {IMAGINATION} with this one and you presented something that tells a small story wich is always nice to see, the backround is {BLAND} though, you should have added more to it besides the black more of whats going on maybe some more boddies? hanging something that really tells more of whats going on, now the rest is awsome each little thing is something differant from the other wich is why i liked it, and you went and made something differant from just the normal, wich is why i also added it to my faves list, now as for improving i already mentioned more detail in the backround, besides just a black but if you insist on just the black then why not try the {SMOKE} or cloudy effect in the black backround, just a thought though, anyways nice work here on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The backround needs some work, and maybe more brighter colors on the tube and ray from gorls head more brighter like its an element or something.

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[Ugy]

Decent could have more detail though.

~~REVIEW~~
Interestings character you have here its differant and neat, the character itself is differant, so decent work there, good color tones, and shades, and creative ideas here, the downside to this would be you didnt add enough on the detail side, you should have detailed the character more, maybe some tattos, more scratches and scrapes here and there, and also more stuff in the backround like some other characters and stuff to show more is happening and stuff, just a few tips that could have gave this that much more, Also the {COLORS} were more basic then anything else, some more blending of the shades would be nice just something more then just the basic. other then that i thought it might be ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some blending of color and such, more going away from the basic, and more happening in the backround.

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Mosamabindrawin responds:

Thanks allot for the review/advice!
I would have added more detail but this is most likely going to end up as a background character- but if i choose to make it a main character ill definitely be adding more detail thanks!

[JUNGLE LASS]

another great piece.

~~REVIEW~~
And here we have another cute one with a female not much of that i seen from you, but you always seem to give it that touch, like the little {SMIRK} on the face almost like a disney feel there heh, and love the touch of blood on that hatchet like sword, and she is like jumping so you gave us a view of some of the detail points like what seems to be a tattoo, kinda small, but still ok, i would like to see more of these small detail focused on more so that you can bring it out more, there is show of some battle in the girl, but wouldnt mind seeing more battle wounds and stuff, but still as this one is its preatty awsome stuff, maybe the hair should be more redish? give it that dark feel more like alot of your style is, but anyways its a decent peice once again.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Darker hair as i mentioned, also closer detail on stuff like tattos and such.

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dommi-fresh responds:

tattoo would have been cool good review dude! one of my favourites from you

[the GREEN knight]

Nice detail, nice character

~~REVIEW~~
Nice work here, kinda like a Castle crashers guy it seems, the colors were dark and dingy but that seems to be fitting aswell, the details are all there as usual, I love the paper backround another thing i thought that seems to fit the piece, allthough a backround scene wouldnt hurt, Maybe even adding a {FOCUS} point like making the Arrow tip red or a bright color, then maybe have a {GLOW} or {BEAM} coming from the eyes would be another awsome idea for focus points, just a thought though, Now this art piece got frontpage very nice indeed on that, would love to see a battle with two characters even if there is no {BLOOD-SPLATTER} haha anyways nice job keep up the awsome art pieces.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra color effects like focus points dealing with an arrow tip colored or even a glow from the eyes

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dommi-fresh responds:

i am doing all the knights in a similar style so the all fit adding a background is not gunna work

[bed time babe.]

Nice detail

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so here is another nice art piece by you, now this one was abit more on the cartoony side and thats perfectly fine. i love the {DETAIL} of this one though, and the overhead view was even better so nice touches on detail and veiwm even love the body under the bed hehe, girl is cute and sexy, i think you should have a few marks scratches even blood splatters all over here not alot so as to not over do it but seems if she has done in lots of people she is bound to have a few cuts, but thats just more of a detail point, for the mostpart its well done, wouldnt mind more {CLUES} on the floor of more kills? hehe anyways this was another top notch piece ill keep on checking out your awsome work, anyways untill next time keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More clues more parts laying around, and another detail point would be more cuts and slashes here and there but not overkill hehe

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dommi-fresh responds:

what is it with you and blood splatters? i like violence alot but sometimes less is more.

[Two]

Artistic.

~~REVIEW~~
ok now this was very neat, a very artistics view here, i love that its paint and not digital art, and you can really tell with this one, i liked this one so much i made it my faves, but anyways the front face is great what caught my attention on this one was the red and blue hair but color does that to me, I think as a small detail improvment you should have made the eye colors reversed kind of a {YING/YANG} effect, but its still impressive, now also would have liked to see more of a body and some backround there but must say this was still impressive, and glad i had a chance to review this, ill keep checking on your other stuff as its very artistic so awsome job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color change on the eyes so its reversed i suggested like the ying / yang effect. and maybe some more fuller shots aswell.

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InsertFunnyUserName responds:

Thanks. Yeah, I could have done a bit more with the background. The reversed eyes is an interesting idea, also.

[Ghost Motel]

Awsome effects and color

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice indeed, now i know all too well about this as i had some part in working on it but from a vewers point i will say this, the colors are right on, the Font i suppose could have been better, and the dark parts on the hat was due to just learning paintshop pro all them years ago, but still its nice to see you finally put it up, am waiting for more of the ghost motel stuff we have planned, So things that could have been improved on but couldnt be helped back in the day would be, josephs hat too dark at the crese, and the font is ok but maybe a little less shine on the lettering, the fog above is ok, would like to rework the whole thing again, i may just do that, anyways it was a pleasure seeing this, nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned, more fog effect all around, less shine on the wording and maybe even a slightly differant font, and on the ghosts hat it was an error of too dark spikes.

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[Alien Muse]

Bored fellow.

~~REVIEW~~
Ok well notbad on this one it is very {SIMPLE} and subtle thats not a bad thing, the mountains could get lonely i suppose and bordem hits in, so you did hit it right with his/her expression and all, you gave it some light and basic colors and feel for that matter, i yhink one issue i do have would be that you should show more of the mountain and such, everything is pleasent i think you also need another focus point something that shows how bored he or she may be, the paint style looks fresh and stylish, but again you should show more of the art like a full on art piece, anyways nice job on this cant wait to see what else you have for us, anyways keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spread the mountains out more to show more of that bordem, and also show more focus on that maybe some anamal has more fun like a snall rodent or snake even.

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InsertFunnyUserName responds:

Hm, I hadn't thought about that. Thanks for the review.

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Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Oh wow, this looks very good, Now with this art piece alone you have me very interested, in this comic so i do hope you finish it, now from this piece you have gave alot to focus on and think what could be happening or will happen, you left lots of props and lots of action so thats cool, and nice work on the details with each character and element in here, wouldnt mind see more blood splatter around maybe walls bed etc, but really i look forward to seeing more from you on this one, as for improving the little details are working keep up with that, maybe more blood next time. anyways it was a pleasure once again, hoping to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More blood splatter, and more key points of detail.

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dommi-fresh responds:

didn't want to over do the blood.

[silver scream]

Decent but could have more

~~REVIEW~~
Nice work on another Zombie something you really seem to enjoy and thats not a bad thing, i like this one cause you really gave it that {GRUNGE} look and you also aged him, kinda reminds me of zombies from the one and only George romero i think thats how his name is spelt, but anyways it is a poster as you seem, but the backround would look more poster like if you added some more to that backround besides just the wording, it just seems too {BLAND} back there and seems like you could spice it up with a number of things, maybe some blood, or brick wall or anything really but needs more to it and that would probably be the only points of improving i would think, its decent though just a tad bland.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So the backround was bland i suggested above some ideas maybe adding a brick wall, maybe some based color that works well with the wording or maybe even some other wording in there, so a number of things could be added to make it a little less bland and more poster like.

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dommi-fresh responds:

posters are meant to be eye catching and a complex back takes away from that.