XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Why Have a Lone Face?]

Very pleased with this

~~REVIEW~~
So i thought i would review this glad to see you submitting more art, guess i scouted good heh, but anyways love the colors and how you blended the colos like from the lower leg and so on, the Yellowish goldish color for the horse, was interesting its super bright kinda like the simpsons cartoon characters, color i thought maybe you would have toned it to abit darker and all, but not really a big issue, but regardless it looks pretty impressive, Now as for the backrounds? i couldnt tell is that just an image or some other form of work? its a fiiting choice either way and there seems to be a "BLURR" effect right around the tree which i thought was pretty neat, so nice job there, I wouldnt mind seeing the horse have abit of texture in the yellowish, but again not a big issue, so how can this be improved, im not sure you seem to have everything in the right place good colors, The sunlight could be a tad brighter just in the back there, im thinking maybe the tail and or black parts could have some texture aswell but not much, unless you are going for the whole cartoony look then its fine, but anyways this was nice to seen and nice to see a good artist scouted here :) anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some texture in tails and skin, and maybe but not needed brighter lighting from the sun in the distance

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[All Mine]

Fresh lookingg

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm lots of nice detail here, first of all the character design is very welldone it has personality, lots of great use of color, even some decent backround coloring to match that up, a few things i noticed might not be that big of a deal, but like with the backround it matches up too much with the character clothing, maybe a differant shade of that simular color might work?? and the "FRAMES/BORDERS" was a nice touch but maybe it should be more "YELLOW-ISH" as to match up with the yellow details of the character, now thats something i could see working well together, and now your character a well designed one as i mentioned i personally think it has too much detail and too much focal points, like the yellow points, the glove the eye glasses and so on, Now really i enjoyed reviewing this character of art its well designed and you have an eye for detail, i mentioned a few tips in hope it helps if not then you have done a fantastic job already, your artwork is one of the few i seen with actual frames/borders so nice job there i always ike to see that, but anyways nice work here and look forward to seeing much more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As above a few tips i thought would help, some color of changes with backrounds and even border/frames, other then that it was pretty impressive

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[Sly Cooper]

Decent but could be better

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad of a drawing you have here, now there can be some improvments on a few areas, but first off i like the shades and effort that was put into this, and also noticed you put in angle, and what i think it busting out of the window, so there alone you have given your art piece some :ACTION-SCENE: which is really always neat to see in still art, now i do think you could present that better, like when he is busting out the window, now i did notice you did have some wind streaks which is neat but you have to give it the effect that he is really flying out so fast so a few more noticble streaks would sufice, also as for the breaking out part, now if its glass have glass chucks and pieces just flying everywhere might help and give more for the effect of the action scene, Now as for your character drawing it was notbad but could use some refining more improved line-work and character designs tend to take more effort and time, the shades look really good, and i am thinking if you put this through like photoshop and or paintshop pro bringing in some color and even effects like lighting and deeper colors, but anyways you can run some colors through this so it has a more satnding out look and with color it looks much better, well hope you found something from this review, good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few ideas like shattered glas, more wind strokes, some color, and effects, and more refining of the drawing itself,

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[The Reviving Light]

Another Fantastic planet

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so i checkedout the other one and now im here, this was simular to the last one, but this one is actually abit better, it seems to have a "SMOOTHER" feel and more better glow around the globe, also all the colors seem to glow and light up just right, now there does seem to be something in the middle, cant really figure that one out, but it looks pretty neat, so nice job there i really like the little touches here and there that really made this a much better piece then the other planet, now if i can suggest anything like the other planet piece i would say add some stars and even a shooting star in the space backround and again like the other one maybe a planet or two in the distance aswell, all these little extras will really give it that feel as one is there, something to think about if ever doing simular stuff, i would even go as far as to add maybe a sun in the backround with a super bright lightness to the main planet here at hand, but anyways this was really neat and i enjoyed it, hope to see more real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
kinda like the other one this needs some backround props and things like stars.

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Shikhs responds:

Thank u

[Insanity]

Love the texture

~~REVIEW~~
Love this art piece, it has a very nice texture from the paints/pencils im thinking more pencils? but anyways this little piece you have here really seems to tell abit of a story, now at-first i thought it was paintings in the backend there but as i looked at it much more it looks more like the window to the outside world which really made much more sense of it all, now he has a mask and just his hair showing off which was neat and good use of colors aswell as great textures, as to improve on this, i would work more on that window or bars you have back there give it more of a cleer look as to it looks like bars, i was un-clear there at-first so that might be something to work on or in a future painting, but really you have an awsome piece here and i was pleased to see it great stuff indeed. so just fix a few things as suggested its not even something that needs changing just my point of view.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
not much but maybe make the window look more like bars or something of that matter.

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KannibalKim responds:

yea i do have to work on it. It looks weird because of the waxy coating the colored pencils give off. but when i figure out how to get rid of that, i'll take another pic :D

[Dead Sun]

Nice could use more though

~~REVIEW~~
this one was interesting, i like the glow of it and the lighting effects, allthough you could have used more of the lighting effects to represent it more, now its called "DEAD SUN" so there is probably not much life in it but i think if it has some life, you should have some flames in there left just a tad here and there, like a flame that is almost out and maybe it could blend with the blue aura around it aswell, just something that would spice up this piece abit more, and now as for the "BACKROUND" if this is a dead sun in space you should probably do a little something with it, like some stars and a space feel hey even a "SHOOTING STAR" wouldnt hurt or maybe even other "PLANETS" in the distance, these are just a few ideas that might help. you have to really fill in all areas so it gives the viewer the feel of really being there, now you have the lighting effects down and an idea, it will all come together in time so good luck and awsome piece once again.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few ideas i mentioned above i hope that will help like, some backround starsm planets and so-on and even some flames around the main planet aswell.

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Shikhs responds:

Thank you

[STick Star War]

A battle of energy

~~REVIEW~~
Wow now here is something really interesting and i love your lighting effects style and you mixed it with other kinda art, thats what i was talking about with your other stuff that has just the lighting style, now the "STICKS" would not be my first choice on other mixture of art, but it seemed to fit well, the only thing i didnt like on this would have been the "BLUE" beams that was around the stick to the left, but other then that i was impressed especially with the backround and all the colors it made it a really complete art piece, now also this could have used even more lighting effects as this was a "BATTLE" so really think of the battle and give all this energy around it, so then making it really feel like the battle is taking place, so i liked this it could use abit of fixing up but also is ok by what i saw, anyways another good piece here hope to see more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few fixes could take place such as, some more lighting effects, and maybe a differant choice of character but its still an ok piece.

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Shikhs responds:

Thanks