XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Last Of The Real Ones]

Wow amazing

So this was pretty amazing work here, the box has a nice glow about it seems like you could have it glow even more and show the glass glare comming off of it, but regardless this was pretty amazing work you have here some really nice details in this piece.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the box has a nice glow about it seems like you could have it glow even more and show the glass glare comming off of it

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eatslugs responds:

Thanks!! I'm still a beginner so I really have no idea how to make that effect, but I'll study more to do a better job in the future :)

[Metal Gear Girl #7: Sahelanthropus]

Very cool

So this was a very nice metal gear piece sexy and shiny and you cant expect any better then that, the backround could use more to iot but you have a great character design here some very nice work here Love the detail on this I would suggest some backround detail and more shine on the gear, anyways nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would suggest some backround detail and more shine on the gear

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DashXero responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I haven't forgotten your review of TX-55 and D (all of the existing Metal Gear Girls were made at roughly the same time). If I make more of them, I'll keep that in mind.

[Game Character Design- Allegheny and Kaida]

Some nice characters

So this was some nice characters here great poses and some decent color, the backround could use a tad bit of color or details maybe a backdrop theme of sometype, anyways great work on these cute characters here it was a nice job here so make more soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the backround could use a tad bit of color or details maybe a backdrop theme of sometype

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['Game Jam at the Ruins']

Very nice

So this was very colorful here, looks like a great time here and lots of color element and some great character designs here making for all one great poster like piece here some very nice work here, I look forward to even more stuff like this one anyways nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes it was a beautiful piece

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[Taming the gigatoad]

Very nice

So this was some nice work here I love this large and in charge character you have here some really nice detail some more lighting effects might have been nice but overall this was some really nice work great detail all the way around hope you make more like this sometime soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe some more lighting effects.

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-1]

Some good action

There is a lot of suspense going on in this one you have some nice creatures and characters and there was some good suspense in this particular issue I love your comic I even started one of my own so thank you for the inspiration, anyways great comic keep up the good work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes it was pretty awsome.

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cecameron responds:

Thank you so much for all your kind comics, and good luck with your own comic!

[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-2]

A Brilliant Comic

Another great one here, wish these were a tad longer maybe a frame or row of frames longer So I found this to be a "BRILLIANT-COMIC" you have here, I like the direction this one takes and you really make some fun things happen in this one and thats what I have enjoyed about this "WEB-COMIC-ENTRY" you have presented here so really nice job on this one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
wish these were a tad longer maybe a frame or row of frames longer

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-13]

Nice Web comic

A nice web comic you have created here this is something I for sure would love to see more of as this was a "VERY-INTERESTING-COMIC" you have here, and I do look forward to much more of what you "BRING-TO-THE-PORTAL" especilly if it was anything like this entry.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes as you have some nice work here a fantastic comic here.

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-18]

Comics Are Nifty

Very nice there was not much dialog or text bubbles this one, A nice comic vibe here with a strong buzz too, really good flow of the comic with some quality, you have a nifty comic here with some "GOOD-IDEAS-ROAMING-AROUND" on this one, So nice style here and it was unique "THIS-PARTICULAR-ONE" was really nifty and exciting.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
there was not much dialog or text bubbles this one

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-10]

A decent Comic entry

Great visuals here your use of color and each frame just comes alive, you should possbly make some animation based off of your comics, You bring An exciting comic element full force with a A unique comic submission here and its a pleasent and delightful entry so this was a pretty nifty comic entry here lots of fine details that stand out and thats what I have enjoyed about this and hope you make more soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you should possbly make some animation based off of your comics

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