XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shoreside Sunset]

Very nice

I really like this but think you should ad some sun light across the ocean kind of like a decending beam or something to give that real effect of the sun seetting or something you have some really lovely colors and really make for a good art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a beam of sunlight across the ocean.

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[purp]

Very nice work indeed

So first off congrats on the front page work there that deserves a big congrats and a pat on the back so congrats on that. And now onto the artwork I love purple and I think you could have gone with some deeper purples even meshes of purple and the lighting behind your character could be brighter with some sparkles here or there let the light really shine off of it creating more mixes of purples but anyways nice character design. And once again congrats on the award it's anwell deserved award for such an awesome piece of artwork and with all that said I had the pleasure of reviewing this awesome piece keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects and more purple mixes

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[DN Chars Fan Art]

Oh cool

And another nice piece with multiple charcters all well tunes all well designed and ready for a party some of the backround lighting effects could be brighter and the colors could be sharper but for what you have it's pretty good and I like the outcome of this it was pretty good if you ask me so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some fresher colors and brighter lighted areas

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[Space Girl Z]

Cool

Well nice work a lot of hot pink here and I really like the sun glasses and the style she has going on you should really make those glasses shine and glare off that would be my suggestion but regardless you have a nice character the background could be detailed also but again this is fine on it's own

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround detail and shine up the glasses

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[paz]

Very nice

So first off great art here very beautiful and nice character design I like all the backround and all the lights even in her hand those are the little things that really make a piece like this sore into greatness you have already made this great. Now as some points of suggestion those lights and auras could have more of a neon glow about that and the one in her hand have it really glow and shine beyond normal just to give off the element effect. So just a few ideas you may like and they may or may not work but they are suggestions. That may just enhance this piece but regardless of any of that you have an amazing piece here and I look forward to more of your stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects can go a long way

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immaboreddude responds:

Thanks for sharing your opinion :), I actually tried that but if I add more lights it will distract a lot from the main part of the drawing (the girl).

[Air Elemental Lady]

Nice work

And once again I come onto your beautiful art work here this was a good character design her face seems a little flat maybe there's some emotion that could be put on her face and the blue squrly lines could have more of a glow about them. Besides those improvement points you have impressive ideas here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow suggestion and more emotion in face

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ToxicMaiden responds:

Thank you for your input! More emotion in her face would definitely help.

[Voh-Om-Em-Tu #2]

Very good detail

You have an eye for detail and you have shown that here today I love the black and white with some tid bits of color I think with the blood you can take it one step further and have blood dripping out would be a nice focus point on things here very nice piece of work though I like your style so keep at it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some dripping blood would be nice

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[Booty Beatrice]

This is cute

And here was something cute I am loving the white and pale color use the blank backround could use some detail though. And I would suggest have her hair pink color and the rest leave as is so that it all stands out with focus but that's just one idea there's alot. You could do to improve onto this nice piece of artwork

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try some pink hair

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[Marcy Nickles]

Cute and crazy

And here we have a cute and crazy character nice name too you gave her tons of character and that brings her to life with all the fancy props and color she really stands out and she could be used in many flash series so very nice character design here no changes at this time it's almost perfect

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned no changes here you know character design very well

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[Noir]

Love this

Well here was something really nice I love the reds and oranges I wish there was more light effects used especially common from behind that window or curtain it would really make this art piece as a whole standout even more the character was very good too maybe more shadows under the character too I would even put in a candle that lights up room as well but this was a nice piece you have here and really nice use of color that comes out well other then what I have already suggested you have outdone yourself with a beautiful piece of artwork here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light coming from behind the window or curtain even adding a candle for more lighting effect could be nice too

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DocLew responds:

Thanks a lot!! I'll certainly think about your tips! I'll do better next time :)