XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Portrait of a Meek Woman]

Very nice texture

I like this because it's beautifuly done the texture on the skin and clothing even the detail in the hair was pretty good I thought it was the gradient backround that I thaught you could have done much better as it was just kind of bland maybe a pattern of some sort maybe some detail in there even a stronger burst of light

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more effects and or detail from back end of this

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[Advent Calendar]

Oh #543

Wow I should really look at these in order but I will say that these are still fun and entertaining some good humor and the characters always great to see in there different styles of adventures and whatnot but anyways nice work here the white borders are cool wouldn't mind a new color or design once in awhile

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some nighty new borders

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[Fairy Trapper]

Wow this was pretty

And you made something very unique and a nice flow of uniqueness on this with all sorts of great color and little details that really bring this alive very nice work indeed and would love to see more of your fine works

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This was perfect in my eyes

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[Queen of Light]

I like

Well iuat say this was pretty good paining and I like how you had her eyes closed as the queen of light you should have a beam of light from behind her so it brightens up everything around her it would be a nice effect but for what this is you did a fantastic job and the paint style is pretty awesome

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A beam of light from behind her

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[Sylvanas]

Wow

Wow I love this drawing a good character kind of reminds me of a hunter from Diablo 3 but love the linework here and the black and white is cool but you should really do this in color or parts of her in color even the background could be a base color but besides all that this was a beautiful piece of art so keep up the brilliant work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color

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[Hermione Granger]

Notbad

Notbad on this the hair looks like if it needs more shine to it or something like on the top of her hair putting a shine streak would be cool and maybe more emotion in her face would be nice too I like what you did here though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine in hair and more emotion in face

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[Hogwarts]

Beautiful piece

I love stuff like this it's a beautiful setting of a castle off in the distance and really nice work on here and I love what you have done with shadows and light I would love to see more lighting effects beaming off the tops of the castle but you have done an amazing job here and I would love to see more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects

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[Nuka-Cola Ad]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I think some of the color meshes could have been better like the backround could be more darker and meshed with deeper textures the logo was cool and I like the twist you have put on this based off of coca cola it was all great stuff and I have enjoyed your work here today make more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround and texture detail needed

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[A Crystal Warrior and His Pet]

Nice

I like this here I love the blue crystal on this I think those blue crystal parts should be more glowing and shining with sparkles and such they will represent a magical power but besides that this was actually a really good design you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the blue stuff sheield hair sword glow bright and have a sparkle

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[Practice drawing]

This was cute

So another cute piece of art here colorful outfit I love the texture in the grass this visual seems like it's missing some sort of tree or trees maybe ad some palm tree to it it would also make for a good background setting but anyways the girl is cute and you did well on this art piece keep up the amazing work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad more of a backdrop like a palm tree in the background

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