XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Last Rain]

Nice work

Alright so this is something neat where you have shown some different elements to express different events here and some are good and some could be details more, but sofar i like what you have done here. So i am getting alot from this piece here, the rain the short circuits, the splashing of the rain aswell, it seems to all come together in a moment of relaxation for this character, there are some things i thought you could work on though such as, the short circutts could have a more glow to them and whatnot. And so here is the end of my review but i did enjoy the different elements and such that brought this piece out, some little changes as mentioned could improve on this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
OK so through-out this review i have suggested a few areas and things that can be improved on the key points of improvment are below again for your use, and i enjoyed your work and hope you make more stuff like this. the short circiuts could have a more glow to them more lighted areas there and maybe evenputting some moon in the backround will give it more of a dark feel in the backround.

['SproutBrain-O-Saur']

So art is a tricky thing but i like what you have here as it was pretty nifty and interesting in its own kind of way so i was glad to have the opertunity to get some words down for a review on this one. This was something odd and unique, o good creation at work and great use of creativity with this one, i think it could use a few lighting maybe on the eyes and such but other then that this was pretty good. Alright this indeed was something unique, didnt expect it at first but was pretty inpresive and has a unique touch and feel for that matter, i like your direction with this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so after viewing this art piece a bit it was notbad but i think i may have a suggestion or two that could improve on it or atleast touch it up in some points so give some ideas a shot and here is what i thought up. Adding some slight lighting like with the eyebals would be a plus.

[smoking]

Interesting

A good piece of art here, it has some nice elements about this, allthough i could see it improving but i will touch on that later, but you do have some nice style here on this piece. This reminds me alot like Grand theft auto art like from the vice city seriesm this one was really working with the light and darkness, maybe in the backround you could have some sorty of smokey backround for that mystery that might come from the backround, and i wouldnt mind more lighted glow on the cig, but overall a good piece here. So how to end this with a decent piece you have here you have shown the effort the style and the detail, and it all shows in your finished product, hope to see more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now this here is, just an improvment area but seems like you know what your doing but i suppose if i have anything to suggest it will be below, but like i said you might not need much at all with this one. So as suggested some smokey like element in the backround the rest is all good to be honest its nice work.

[Red Pyckman]

Unique and different

Something different and something unique and thats what really drew me to this its almost perfect with all that you did here, You have the skill, and the effort, i hope you keep that style up. Oh wow this was pretty interesting it has a very unique look to it, also has some nice shades, nice detail, and great design about it, the texture was awsome, and you put some slight emotion on his face expression, even the backround was pretty neat, This was all a pretty good piece of art, i could see you making lots of these in a series of portraits, so nice job indeed. And to end this here, will be somewhat sad since i thought this was pretty unique and different, just keep making these uniqie and odd pieces as they are very interesting.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now this one was hard to suggest some improvments since this had it all as mentioned, but i still can think up some ideas and possble improvment suggestions. There reallyis not much that you can perfect on this since its almost perfect, i wouldnt mind seeing a tear comming from his eye just for some more oddness.

[Jason dick]

A nifty idea

An interesting and a nifty idea you have here, and its always nice to see something different as you have done here, i wouldnt mind seeing more stuff like this, so anywaysonto the review in much more detail. Alright so this was something different and i guess i will have to go and checkout the other ones but this is a nifty idea, and the detail was pretty good, i think there could be some more changes like maybe have dripping blood from the sword, maybe even have some blood stains on his mask. So that topps it off so as i do come to an almost close here, i will say keep up what you are doing because its a fun experience to see what you are presenting here, so nice job all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slight changes could be added but if you are completly happy with your work then disregard this here but if you have the time then do look in these few possible ideas that i come up with and saw, but anyways here you are keep up the decent ideas and crafty work. So a few ideas would to have more blood like blood dripping even some blood splatters on the mast as mentioned above.

[Dynamic Duo]

Nice artwork

A nifty piece if you ask me, there was some of this and some of that, and you made it all come alive with your own style and twict, but thats what made it special atleast for me so i was glad to have seen this one. So here we have something interesting and a lil different but you can never go wrong there, you seemed to have thrown in a little 3d element in the mix so that was pretty cool the shades and texture is pretty awsome if you ask me, and all in all this cameout very fine detailed and you showed some good quality. There might be some final touch ups, but other then that you have done a pretty decentjob on this piece so nice work indeed, and hope you continue this up and keep creating some awsome pieces.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A good piece of art you have here, there is always some sort of improvment even on the best pieces, but sometimes not always the easiest to go about but i will do my best here, so try some new things here. I dont think there is much of anything to improve on this but if you want to go that extra mile you can always add some backround stuff going on as to show more of the world these people are comming from.

Izzy-A responds:

Thanks for the crit. This actually has no 3D of any kind, all painted. There's definitely stuff to improve on, but I got tired of all the refining so this is what I thought is as complete for me as possible without losing my sanity.

[Killbot]

This was pretty decent if you askme

Alright so here is another fine piece of art, it is intriging yet somewhat dry but i still think its the kind of unique style that i have come to enjoy from artists like yourself, Now this was pretty neat, i love the whole black and white theme, and it has the whole "KRINKLES" touch to it and all, the backround was so-so could have used more detail and such, it was just shaded with some filters it seems, could use some more linework and detail up there, so thats something to think about, on an update or your next piece. And so you have showen me what you can realy do with this piece here, you have showcased some awsome stuff with great detail, some small improvments could be made though but besides that you have done great here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And as this review comes to and end, i still have enjoyed what you have presented here and i can see some possible updates and or changes for the better, maybe some small changes here and there so i will suggest a few possiblities here and there and hope it works out for the best. The backround is what you should work on the most seems like there was too much filters used, so some more personal shading and some more linework in the backround would be great.