XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Siamese Octopus Gentlemen]

Crazy

Heh well this one was crazy and abit bothersome on the eyes, but regardless of that you did use some good imagination on this, it must have been hard to put that together though, besides that maybe add some colors i would like to see some reds and oranges to bright this up

Colors could brighten this up and be looking more colorfull

~X~

thies responds:

Hey, that's not a bad idea. Some red and/or orange might make it look a little better :D

Thanks for the review

[Raintacular]

Could be larger

This was notbad and i really enjoyed the reds and purples but it seemed too small and the lettering was ok but seemed blurred at times, unless you did that on purpose well if anything can be improved on this it would be the "SIZE" of the whole art piece

Make the art piece much larger and add something more then just the text, well good luck on other art stuff

~X~

Flash-Gamers responds:

Thanks for the review!

Oh, I smudge my sig on purpose like I've done before in my other pieces.

Will see what I can do; Note to self MORE DETAILS!

But it's hard to do that, cuz sometimes it'll turn pic into a VERY BUSY illustration which would look bad to some, and confuse ppl on the concept of the illustration.

[The Colour Of Water]

Artistic

Hmmm now this was differant it has some artistic style with all the colors and brush like stuff, i do like that there is a number of colors to really give that abstract type of feel, it shows lots of effort, i would really like to see where you can go further with this style

Maybe to improve add some borders so its like a true piece

~X~

thies responds:

Yeah I might make more drawings with this style, not sure.
I don't know about adding borders, don't know if it will really add something to the piece.

Thanks for reviewing!

[upsideDown Town]

I like it

I do like this one, the purple egg like shaped creature is differant, the backrounds could use some work as its kinda plain but it also works because you dont really want to take away from the alien atleast thats what i think it is. as i explained before you need to give more darker tones and shades to give it the darker fell. anyways good luck in future stuffs

Improve on darker shades and colors aswell as something with the backrounds

~X~

up-a-notch responds:

ok sure

[Not lucy in the sky...]

Needs something

This was an ok alien but it needs abit more for one i think the aliens shape was abit off you should put abit more effort there and give it a more scary look, that would also mean make the backrounds darker and creeoier aswell

Anyways hope thhose tips will help you to improve

~X~

up-a-notch responds:

thanks man

[Killer Teddy]

Notbad

Well this was notbad, the color was an odd choice, the desigm was interesting even cute at times, this is kinda simple but its nifty aswell, it seems like its lacking something i would slap some borders on there somehow

As stated i would put some borders with the darker green tint

~X~

thies responds:

Thanks. With borders you mean like thick outlines? yeah that could be nice :)

[Syrupleaf: Page.9]

Nice emotion in this one

I like how you give the "SCENES" and characters good emotion so while its just a comic it still really comes alive and really works out, cant wait to see some more of these so keep doing them

Awsome art and characters, make more soon

~X~

[Spatulons vs. Phlovomites]

Wow impressive

Now this was some impressive work and i can see why it took awhile aswell as getting front paged, there is somany things to see and see how theres lots of details all around, i could never get bored of this, wow just wow, awsome job, keep up the hard work

I would love to see more stuff like this with lots of details and little characters and such

~X~

[eye eye eye]

love it

Now this is "EYE" catching heh no but really you really got something here allthough i think some red textures might make it look better somehow, but for the most of this its pretty awsome, make more soon

Add some darker texture maybe a red version or something

~X~

[Mini Mischief]

Nice dragon

I love dragons and this was one of my faves on here, love the texture and detail and you put some good focol points like the keys which was a nice touch, anyways keep up the awsome dragon making

This was brilliant hope to see more of your work soon

~X~

EchoRun responds:

Thank you. :)