XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tattoo Concept]

Nice design

~~REVIEW~~
Nice idea here, kinda like a tattoo, something i could probably see i see lots of nice detail and some nice detail work in here, now ofcourse i could see more of that aswell more {FINE-LINE} work would also benifit aswell, now as a non tattoo image i could see you adding some color in this, just a little here and there would be great, maybe like the tips of points and such, some reds and greens kinda to bring out the design abit better, also some backround color themes would also work in that aspect of stuff, now ofcourse that would be a more non tattoo design though, but other then that you have some nice design and linework with this one, and ill have to checkout your other works soon, so for now awsome job on this one, keep up the awsome designs.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color like reds and blues and greens i know its meant to be more black and white style but with just a bit of color here and there maybe in the backrounds or some focol point to set aprt from the black and white it will show a more unique look, some "FRAMES/BORDERS" along the edges of your art piece might give it a more focused look and this piece just seems like it would look more complete with borders/frames

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[Pig warrior]

Awsome in 30 min

~~REVIEW~~
OK so first off this is a pretty good art piece especially for just 30 minutes so props to you for that, i was highly impressed with what you came up with in that short time, this {CHARACTER} reminds me of something from Teen age mutant ninja turtles but anyways its still an awsome piece, shading seemed to comeout well, would have liked to see some improved {Lighting effects} but other then that it was pretty good, I would have also liked to see some {BACKROUND} stuff maybe a wall a run down city but something that reflects the main character more, but really other then that you have a really good art piece here and once again in 30 min is a fantastic job, i look forward to seeing more of your work very soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i wrote you should ad something to the backround, and add abit more on lighting effects just a few touches here and there

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[3/3]

Like a forrest

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this is notbad at all, i saw a bit of the other artworks that were simular to this aswell, but it was neat it kinda has that dark forrest, maybe even some sorta burrning trees in the back so that in that aspect makes it pretty impressive, needs more {FOCAL} points maybe like a scared little animal somewhere but something like that to focus on aswell, it would be a nice touch there now if it is a burnning forrest highlight the fire a bit more aswell, so it standsout more aswell, just another idea or two. but anyways it was a rather dark and neat piece you have here, but still i could see it improving with more visuals and extra effects like animals and lighting effects, anyways good job sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few things i suggested were more fire highlight in the backround if its a forrest, and maybe a scared little animal in front for a more focus point.

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CptBeefcake responds:

well it doesn't actually stand on its own; it's part of a triptych. the focal point of the piece is in the second panel. btw it isn't necessarily fire, you might taking it too literally. Other than that I agree, the warm colours sit back instead of jumping forward, and this piece didn't incorporate the same obvious lighting the other two did

thanks for the review

[war]

Could be larger and indepth with some more detail.

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was something very impressive, you really gave the skin a nice texture giving it that real feel to it and all, would have liked to see more with the {EYES} maybe abit of red in there for that extra detail or something, and as for more improving on this, maybe some sorta fake {BLOOD} just an idea though, now i dont mean to complain or anything like that but you should give an even more fuller {VIEW} of the whole art piece, it would bring out the little details abit better, and just overall making it much better, now these are just one reviewers opinions and ideas, but really for the most part you have a really nice piece here and would love to see much more of your work in the coming future, anyways good job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe instead of just the white eyes add some red in there just for more detail to the picture as a whole, maybe even some fake blood out of the wounds.

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ramymagdy responds:

thx man ...really appreciate your comment .... you have a point here ..

[MC Comics - Christmas '10]

Its decent

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well now that was funny, very amusing i thought, it was short and to the points, now there are probably a number of things you could do to improve on this but first i want to point out how it was very amusing and gave me a laugh off right at first so props to you on that, and hope to see more humor like this, now for the improving part I wouldnt mind seeing more into this like maybe a second line of strip or something, and maybe you could work more on the color aswell, brighter colors could be a start of something just a few ideas there, but overall it was pretty entertaining, i liked it though, hope to see more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like i suggested, more brighter colors, maybe a second strip and so on

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[Imperial Inquisitor.]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Love all the reds you have on this, this was actually a pretty ood rendition of a character alot like starwars ones but seems to comeout very well, the blacked out ground area seems like it could have used more shading and stuff just to give the effect it was more dirty and dusty, just an idea that could show more of the detail, since you did present an awsome character here with lots of detail, the glow on the sabre was pretty impressive aswell, all around this was well done and i enjoyed reviewing it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained you could work on the ground area maybe some scratches here and there or something, something that shows more detail.

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johngoldenwolf responds:

Thank you.

[Bearded Frog Lizard]

Unique

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is pretty uniqe, its got some nice color all around and you really made it come alive with the color and such stuff, allthough it would have been nice with some backround stuff going on maybe some other little characters running around and stuff, would have been nice, would have been nice with more little details like more roses here and there, So things to improve on this might be soe backround work, maybe more details like more roses and such things like that, but for the mostpart its pretty entertaining, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As sugested some backround detail if not setting, and some fine detail in the front like the roses

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