XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[On the Roof Tops]

hmmm notbad

~~REVIEW~~
the character was the main focus here which seems very welldone, but that building in the backround doesnt match to well, the main character has a 3d feel while the building is more of a "FLAT" feel to it and all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on making the building not look so flat it needs some sorta 3d portions so that it all matches with the character at hand

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BearPawMedia responds:

Thank ya very much ^_^

Yeah, I need to work on my backgrounds for sure. >_<

[{BT} The Musician]

I like this

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat like a silince of moment, this was bland in the backround but that might be for the best if anything you could add some audiance in the backround maybe just the heads

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like above add some shadowed people in the backround

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BenTibbetts responds:

Thanks for the review. I agree, people might make a nice addition to this scene.

[Sword of Omega]

Decent work

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this was decent, the "TEXT" was abit hard to see since it was so small but the weapon itself was pretty impressive with some nice design to it and all, work on the text abit though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Increase the text size on the info stuff

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[Primal Fire]

Nice character you created

~~REVIEW~~
Oh nice character here looks like he just got outa battle now this art piece is notbad at all, its texture seems abit on the bland side i think, so maybe to change that abit i have posted a few ideas below good luck on other stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First off i would like to see the sword with a brighter red maybe blood goo is dripping but give it the redish color, and then i could see the eyes glowing maybe a green or orange

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[Furry Little Creature]

Cute

Haha well this was a cute furry creature that you have created here, you did everything from even a shadow, shich not alot of people think of, everything seemed the one color though,

I would really like to see the backround like a differant color

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[Shrimp Fingers]

Differant

Well this one was differant for sure and does seem like an older drawing, but it still presents that differant style with some dark feel to it aswell so once again you have presented some great skill with a dark feel which i like, make more very soon, i look forward to it

An older drawing i think is fine as is

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[Mother Shrimp]

Oh nice detail

Now this is some of my fave right here, the unique-ness of the baby inside is awsome and makes it differant you should have this colored for a more visual effect, a very unique design you have here, cant wait for more of your stuff

Add some color to this

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[Shrimp Fractal]

Interesting

Hmm this was interesting seems like it might have been one of your earlier drawings, it does have some nice detail and lots to see here, still im a backround kinda person and wish there was more to the backround i just believe it would make the image more filler and presents a much better design

add some backround to this

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[Holy Death with Dice]

Nice shades here

Very nice work on this one, i especially love your "SHADE" work its well balanced throughout the drawing and fits every spot, i dont mind the bland bacdrop but could still use something back there, hope to see much more of your work soon

Needs something in the backround as it was somewhat bland

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