XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Space]

Very cool

I love stuff like this there's always a nice look into what the world could be or is and I love the texture on the planets the stars are nice too you should have the brighter stars sparkle even more just for the cool effect that it brings off but overall a nice backround scene here and some nice planets and stars

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A brighter star or stars would be better

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[Dr.Night (OC)]

Cool detail

And here was some nice detail I also like the story you had on your character so everything was looking pretty sharp I even like that red sparkle but I think changing it to a bright white sparkle would be more fitting but make it bright white to be a real sparkle

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A bright white sparkle would be fitting

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[Robot]

Cool robot

Very cool robot here and just from the dark and light drawing tones here you can see that you really put your time in and each sketch was a work of art lots of energy in this piece. Two things I can see you adding ofcourse some color and even just parts of him colored not the whole thing. Then there's the case of adding a background something of his world and where his story is at like a broken down city landscape or maybe even a beautiful ocean behind him you can even work my two suggestions together by adding a colored backround and leaving him as is but anyways just a few ideas that maybor may not interest you but nice work here and I look forward to much more of your works in the near future

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color. And some background as suggested

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InkRex responds:

Thank you so much! I will definitely consider this for future works.(:

[Stay Cool!!]

Cute drawing

And this was a cute little drawing and or sketch you going on here. It seemed a bit plain at times like mainly in the backround but maybe you can fill that backround with a palm tree or plants maybe a beach with an ocean even adding color would be a huge upgrade to this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Pic is Abit bland needs a backing and even color

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[Arena Online Character Avatars]

Very nice

Very nice work here I love the deep colors too especially the purple it really has a deep texture and the gold frame is nice I would actually try and improve on the gold frame by making it more gold more shiny and ad a sparkle in the corner or corners will show more focus to the main point of view.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Frames could be more shiny and more golden

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[Dva dumpling figurine]

Nice sculpture

Here was a nice sculpture and clay too the detail in the face and body are very good. I could see you possibly making these somewhat larger and taller in scale that way you can carve in much more detail but besides that this was a night little character and you made it come to life with some nice detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make them larger scale for more amount of detail

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[Neon Glow]

Intense

Now here was a very intense piece I am loving the dark sense here but with the subtle light effects is notbad I think you can make those small areas more light up like the eyes and the light stretching around him from the back side light them up more and even more glow it will reflect off the dark tone and make for a really nice outcome in effects of course. This was a nice drawing you have and I bet your son just loves it it's a beautiful piece actually and shows a smooth feel and detail about it other then that I can't say much more other then that this is pretty good work and you should really show us much more of your works hope you bring out great stuff such as this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awesome stuff maybe increase the glow effect of the lighted areas

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Skimlet responds:

Ah, thank you so much, and thanks so much for the feedback, it was very detailed witch is so incredibly helpful in showing me the areas I need to work on. I'll be sure to keep that in mind on my future works :D

[Inktober Day 2]

Notbad

And so here's number two. This one did have a good perspective the big hand while not fully perfect you still gave off that view shot very nicely so that was a plus and this one was more simple but it was an amusing piece. The backround is kind of bland I can see you improving on details there but all is good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small backround etails or even color

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[Inktober Day 1]

Nice

And this is how it started well first of all nice snow one I like it now you know me I love color so could have been nice if you had added white color that would have kept it still black and white but being snow give it a nice colored version too anyways nice job and kinda funny too characters always great looking

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some white colored snow would have been perfect

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[My 92 year old grandfathers workshop! Back to work!]

Nice work

So the visual was a tad bit hard to view maybe a bit more close up on this and darker lines on each drawing item and I would even try and use some Photoshop to really enhance this with some effects and or even some color like some stuff can be in color while some can be in black and white. But I will say welcome to newgrounds and hope you stick around cause you have some nice talents here and I look forward to much more from your library of art works but besides all that this was a fantastic piece that I want to see much improved

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color. Some better visual

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griguette responds:

Thanks! :) the tips are appreciated and i will try to take them into account. Check out the rest of my artworks and please give me some tips on those as well! :)