XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gyaru Girl]

Not your best

I will say this is not your best from what I have seen from your work not sure if I'm fond of the pink over the purple but it is what it is now I will say the backround needs a mesh of texture or design maybe just a pattern but it does need something more then what's there anyways nice work here and keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned the backround needs some meshing

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[one punch man]

Nice

Well gotta say this was different but still has a unique look to it love the shine in picel format that's a plus of things and you presented it well here with this piece so nice job I like the style and love the super close up shot that shine on his head could be better though more of a glare

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glare on his head

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[Self-Portrait based on an Oni Mask]

Cool

Reminds me of a friend I have the horns are cool and there should be more shine on the horns maybe on the top also I like the idea of whiteness from the eyes but if your gonna do that change up the backround maybe some flames or something but you have a nice piece of art here and good character if you ask me

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change up the backround so it's not matching with eyes

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Keyboardsmashed responds:

Thank youu~~
Youre right, I didnt even think of making a background! I hate doing backgrounds honestly, but since Im getting into animation, I should start getting used to it.

[Ladybug]

Last bug

The last bug or in this case lady bug. I like the glossy look and shiny feel on this I wouldn't mind some.sparkle on the lady bug and some texture in the background but besides that this was a nice and simple piece of art and you presented it well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some texture in the backround

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[Kazuna vs Izzy]

Kind of flat

The eyes look flat almost like there's no emotion but you did really good on everything else with color and design on there clothing but they need more reaction and emotional feeling in the face and the eyes as they just seemed flat but besides all that you did a fantastic job on the rest this art piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some emotion in the face and eyes

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[Lush]

Delightful

And here was a delightful piece of art with a shaded feel and the smile and bliss on her face as she is among the flowers and what I think are skills so it tells a story and you present the story very well I like the shaded blend of artistic style here you really went all out on this and made it a beautiful piece of art work and full of energy

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it's perfect as is

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[Spanking Widowmaker Commission (GIF)]

Nice

The animation on this seems not so fluid I do like all the detail and the graphics and artwork especially the color very deep color it's really just that animation that could be smoothed out more. But besides that this was notbad at all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The animation could be smoother greaphics are fine

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PaddleTone responds:

Another early animation. Thanks for the critique!

[Adventurer Norman]

Very nice work

I like your work here the design of the character is great and you ad a lot of detail to this I even like the sunlight beaming down I think you need to have some sunlight on that stick weapon with a sparkle at the end that would really be a nice touch on things so try it out and let the sparkle shine on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A sparkle and more sunlight beaming down

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[Xmas catgirl 2009]

Wow this is good

I must say this is pretty good stuff the white outter shell of the piece was pretty good too I love the character with some brusing and scars shows a realistic look and very well done must have took you a long time it's a nice piece though so keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it's perfect as is

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[Puppet Politician]

Nice

This was pretty cool I like the whole black and white theme here I think the glasses can be used as a focal point in having some glare and shine but also have the lens have a color to them while the rest could be all black and white that would be a nice change and show detail about it. Just an idea to try out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some glare and color on the eye ware

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