XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hogwarts]

Beautiful piece

I love stuff like this it's a beautiful setting of a castle off in the distance and really nice work on here and I love what you have done with shadows and light I would love to see more lighting effects beaming off the tops of the castle but you have done an amazing job here and I would love to see more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects

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[Nuka-Cola Ad]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I think some of the color meshes could have been better like the backround could be more darker and meshed with deeper textures the logo was cool and I like the twist you have put on this based off of coca cola it was all great stuff and I have enjoyed your work here today make more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround and texture detail needed

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[A Crystal Warrior and His Pet]

Nice

I like this here I love the blue crystal on this I think those blue crystal parts should be more glowing and shining with sparkles and such they will represent a magical power but besides that this was actually a really good design you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the blue stuff sheield hair sword glow bright and have a sparkle

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[Practice drawing]

This was cute

So another cute piece of art here colorful outfit I love the texture in the grass this visual seems like it's missing some sort of tree or trees maybe ad some palm tree to it it would also make for a good background setting but anyways the girl is cute and you did well on this art piece keep up the amazing work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad more of a backdrop like a palm tree in the background

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[Celia by the River - The Last Azure Prince]

Love the texture

You seem to have a way with texture you mesh it well and blend it till you get this deep color from backrounds to clothing to skin tone and create a nice story to go along with your art pieces and that's a huge plus so very amazing work you have here and please do make more this pieces wouldn't hurt from some sunlight a comming down

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A sunlight beaming beaming down on the character would be a nice effect

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[Gnarly Animation Test!!!!]

Very simple

Well I must say this was pretty simple but since it was more of a test of animation it worked well now there are ways to improve onto this like adding a very colorful background or even more splash effects as the ball bounces off the ground so there is a number of things to try out so try a few things

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned there's a few things to try out

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[Pokemon Sun & Moon Girl trainer]

Cute

So this was a cute drawing you have here the black and white style is not bad the background could use some detail but most of all this needs some color the drawing itself is fantastic just some added color would be a plus on things and wouldn't hurt to try a few new ideas and make for some better results

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color including backround

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[Gyaru Girl]

Not your best

I will say this is not your best from what I have seen from your work not sure if I'm fond of the pink over the purple but it is what it is now I will say the backround needs a mesh of texture or design maybe just a pattern but it does need something more then what's there anyways nice work here and keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned the backround needs some meshing

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[one punch man]

Nice

Well gotta say this was different but still has a unique look to it love the shine in picel format that's a plus of things and you presented it well here with this piece so nice job I like the style and love the super close up shot that shine on his head could be better though more of a glare

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glare on his head

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[Self-Portrait based on an Oni Mask]

Cool

Reminds me of a friend I have the horns are cool and there should be more shine on the horns maybe on the top also I like the idea of whiteness from the eyes but if your gonna do that change up the backround maybe some flames or something but you have a nice piece of art here and good character if you ask me

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change up the backround so it's not matching with eyes

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Keyboardsmashed responds:

Thank youu~~
Youre right, I didnt even think of making a background! I hate doing backgrounds honestly, but since Im getting into animation, I should start getting used to it.