XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Manga eye practice]

Nice work

I know I talk alot about color and frames and more visual but all these things would make this so much better especially with a piece like this it could use a closer up visual to show that fine detail just a thaught that you may like to expand on because these are some beautiful drawings and would love to see them go over the top

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A closer visual of the detail

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[Realistic Eye (better version)]

Nice

And yes the eye is cleaner and deeper I still want to see a more detailed eye with a much more closer visual of the eye it was pretty intense if you ask me but closer and some color would have been great too but besides all that mumbo jumbo you have great drawing skills and hope to see more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Closer visual to see even more details and some color of course

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[Assault & battery]

Notbad

Well this was kind of cute you made it simple and yet still fun. I like the simplistic style especially in black and white but some added color would be so fun on this and maybe just adding some colored frames it would give off that depth that it's lacking just something to think about but the joke or idea you did pull off well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some colored borders would be a plus

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tonyfamous responds:

Thanks for the review :-)

[Girl]

Nice name

I think the name fit perfectly and so with this being black and white I thaught that was pretty cool it even looks a bit pixelated maybe that was the intent. But some added color or a colored version would be so awesome on this one you could even do half black and white and half colored that would make it more artistic style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color

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[Undertale - Alternative]

Very well done

And with this one you bring some nice characters to life with all sorts of color and detail and they just jump out at you with a stylish feel about them and it makes me just want to grab them because they look so real

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would work more detail into the plain backround

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