XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Leviosa]

Wow nice

This is one piece you need no changes what so ever, your style is amazing, at first it did look like "TRUMP" lol anyways nice character, A top notch piece of art if you ask me, a very well done piece of art, So keep up the fantastic art style and keep sharing with us your beautiful talent, I will for sure look forward to even more, because this is some nice work, but anyways before I go Just wanted to say I really enjoyed reviewing your work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
As mentioned no changes needed here

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[Alien boy]

Nice

So this was pretty "COOL" I like the flipping boards or "MAGIC-ELEMENTS", seems like there could have been slightly more animation and some "ADDED-EFFECTS" to make it more sparkle and such, but as it is now you have some nice character work here and a beautiful sight.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
seems like there could have been slightly more animation and some added effects to make it more sparkle

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[Christmas Ava]

Beautiful sight

This was a beautiful sight here, you have some "AMAZING-DETAIL" I did think some of the lighting could have more of a sparkle and "GLOW-ABOUT-THEM", I think this is creative for blending the styles of art and design, there is a lot in here This really captures the aspect of this piece It is very subtle but apparent at the idea and concept of this entry, A very acurate idea and design creation so your talent flows very well and love your ideas and think you will bring us even more in the days of tomarow, but anyways nice job here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I did think some of the lighting could have more of a sparkle and glow about them

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carlomontie responds:

Thanks for the constructive feedback! I was really struggling with the lighting and stuff. I was trying to get a little bit of a bokeh effect, but I don't think I'm experienced enough to pull it off. I'll practice at making backgrounds in the future! Thanks again. :)

[God Machine]

Really nice

Wow I love this its some type of nifty creature or even "ALIEN" and that backround just pure amazing, Some added lighting effects from behind the character might ad a little to this, So this was a nice submission into the portal, You know, I think this is a nice and creative piece, I like the simplicity in this aswell as the detail that you presented, The design itself is intriguing and brings a style of its very own. and even seducing in its own unique way and when I say seducing I mean its own style of creativeness, and hope you keep making stuff like that.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some added lighting effects would be cool.

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[Wing-its | Batch 12-5 (May 2018)]

Very nice work here

I love the characters here and that lighting effect is pretty awsome too I would suggest making that lighting come up even farther and even ad a glow would be a nice touch up on this, Blending some nice fusions here was great and thats what I get from this piece, you have a positive style that blends a simple design and brings some positice artistic value thats the kind of style I hope to achieve one day but for now I get to review this fine work here, So there was some good details in this one and it really shows off your talent and detail here, I was highly impressed with the visuals here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More dominant lighting rising up.

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[A Hot Piece (modified version)]

Very nice

So this was a very nice piece of art here, seems like you have "ALOT" going on with backround and elements surrounding it, seems too cluttered at times, but What I do see is a well designed girl here in art form and came off very well so really nice work here and I do enjoy the visual here too.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Lots going on here maybe too much.

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['Sweaty Season']

Very colorful

Wow I have to say this was a delughtful piece here with all the color and characters kind of reminds me a bit of sponge bob type characters but it also has its own twist as well, you are greatly talented, you have captured something positive with this piece, the talent shows and the flashes with passion so your desire is strong here and you bring lots of energy into it so nice job indeed here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Ad maybe a crazy border or frame with some color so its like a fancy gallery piece.

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[Chi Chi in Vegeta's Armor]

Great background

So I love the character great form but the background was nifty I would suggest some added shine in the background or more lighting effects to give it that overall view of it all anyways nice work here I like it and look forward to more

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More shine and lighting effects in the background

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[Dragon Fart Commission]

Lol

Well I guess dragons fart like everyone else too lol this one was one of your more silly ones I think if you added onlookers in the background it would have been a nice background touch besides that this was a nice dragon

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added elements to the background

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[Majin Android 21 Booty]

Wow beautiful

So for me this is some of your best I added this one to my faves list you really braught some nice form I don't normally like same color background as the main character but for some reason this worked out I do think more shine on the tail would be nice

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More shine on the tail

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