XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Terri]

Notbad

Well not bad this was ok. I do like the design and art here, at the fact you have two points of view of this character.The blues and wings are nice, I love the decal design of lightening in the scale area of the skin. That was nice, and that the dragon had a human form with clothing, but was still a dragon. I think this just need more shine to it, more effects here and there to really make it stand out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and effects on the dragon

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[Airport Security]

Ghosts nice

So we are here at the end of the review, I can see some areas that could be Polished like you could give the ghosts more of a glow effect, but I just would like to say it was a pleasure reviewing and seeing your artwork, wish we had more artists like this on here.

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[Handshake]

Nice

a very well done piece of art, So keep up the fantastic art style and keep sharing with us your beautiful talent, I will for sure look forward to even more, because this is some nice work, but anyways before I go Just wanted to say I really enjoyed reviewing your work here. I love the orange backround here, so nice job.

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[Cube]

Stellar piece of art

You have a Stellar piece of art here and the Blending is very nice, the idea is simple but you added some depth to this and made it your own style and thats what I really like about this, a top notch piece of art if you ask me, Onlythin I would change would be some backround props and details, like a tree a plane some birds etc.

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[You're Gonna Be Great! Bellemere's Love and Nami's Tears!]

Interesting

Well this was interesting, I do think the mother looks more sinister than comforting. I would just work on the eyes and facial expressions, she seems a bit off there, but you have the crying portion of this down for the child. I love the coloring and lines you have used, your character design is something I've seen before but a bit of an original twist. The hair shaved design was pretty neat too. The grass they stand on is a good background element, but it could use some more background, like a sky or scenery back there. I like the clothing detail and overall design you have going.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This needs more of a background, it has the grass and some starts of a background but I would go all out and do more.

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C-Johnigan responds:

First of all, THANK YOU! It's been forever since I had any sort of criticism ever so it's a breath of fresh air to hear you go on about what can be improved on my work.

Second, I see where you're coming form about the mother's smile; it does come off a little malicious given a second glance but I tried to keep in mind of the character I was trying to portray. I didn't think it appeared that way but that may be my bias talking.

As for the background, in the anime that I was inspired by, There were minimal scenes just like this where the background was greatly faded. I called myself mimic those scenes

[Blood Vessel]

Notbad

I wouldning mind more backround detail and or props like some birds and sunsets etc, I think this is creative for blending the styles of art and design, there is a lot here This really captures the aspect of this piece It is very subtle but apparent at the idea and concept of this entry, A very acurate idea and design. so nice work indeed.

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[Telescope]

Nice and unique.

You should put more backround stars in this one, So this was a nice submission into the portal, You know, I think this is a nice and creative piece, I like the simplicity in this aswell as the detail that you presented, The design itself is intriguing and brings a style of its very own, and even seducing in its own unique way.

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[Joke Shop]

Nice

This was an interesting piece, And you do seem to get your idea across the board. I have seen a number of Art pieces come through the portal daily, and I like what you have done here adding just the right elements making this something unique. so keep up the good work and make more.

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[Guardian]

Very nice

Well that was pretty cool I like the character work the shiny points are pretty cool too and the background was pretty spectacular I would ad more shine to the shiny points maybe even some glow but you have some nice work overall so anyways keep making awsome art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more shine and glow

~X~

[Ass for Asses Sake]

Very cool

So here was the colored version and you did well I like the work here and the dripping can't be seen too well with the color but maybe adding some sparkle on the legs or something but besides that this was a nice drawing indeed keep making great charchter work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad more dripping and sparkle on it

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