XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kirby (first digital illustration ever)]

A classic

So here you have a "CLASSIC-KIRBY" here, I love his simplistic form you have here, and love that backround effects here allthough some added shading on kirby himself wouldnt hurt and some added shine on top of his head, but for your first ever this was pretty inpressive work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added shine and texture within the character would be nice.

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[Super Meat Boy FOREVER]

Great color

Well you cant go "WRONG" with some meat boy especially forever lol, really nice and fresh colors and design here, maybe adding some sort of sharp border on the edges would top this off, it was nice seeing meat boy once again here you are doing some nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe adding some sort of sharp border on the edges would top this off

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[Merula #1]

Nice character

So this was notbad very well designed and a nice pose with some revealing visuals a "PLUS" in my books, and the characters "EXPRESSION" was kind of nice, you have some nice detail here, seems like you could ad some sort of sunlight and sun beam in this and reflect off the character, besides all that this was a cool design.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some lighting effects like a sunlight or sun beam.

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[panopticon ii]

Love it

So this was pretty nice, I "ESPECIALLY" love the backround here with a city view and all the lights, seems like you could ad onto the lights with more sparkles and glares from the city lights, the character was decent the whole piece was nice work, hope you make more like this.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you could ad onto the lights with more sparkles and glares from the city lights

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[Twoson encounter]

Cute

So this was a cute "PIECE" love what you did with the super "BLUE-EYES" maybe some added sparkle on the eyes would top this off, so nice effort indeed, This was Appropriately done well in a very symbolic way, now just keep it up on the rest of what you do, as I can see is fine so-far

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe some added sparkle on the eyes would top this off

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[Sugar Plum Fairy Mercy]

Nice

So here is the other version you have here, you have some nice style and this is the version without the backround, but I stilll like it and I found this piece to be pretty good, love the colors still and still think some shine and sparkle could be added, anyways good stuff.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added shine and sparkle as mentioned.

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Roxaile responds:

in response to both of your comments, thank you! I feel like some added flair like sparkles would have definitely been a great way to take this piece further, and i'll be sure to keep that in mind next time i work on a piece like this. Thanks for the feedback!

[Sugar Plum Fairy Mercy]

Beautiful

So this was very "BEAUTIFUL" I really love the use of color and you have a "FANTASTIC" pose here with this one, the wings looked a tad small maybe that ws the intent, and maybe adding more shine to the wings would be a plus, regardless this was a nice character detailed pose.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some added shine to the wings.

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[Wings]

Very nice

So I like this piece here, very good drawing something seems off about that stretched out arm not sure if its too long or too short but its a nice character design here some really nice detail with the "TATOOS" are a nice touch, love the backround detail aswell, anyways nice work indeed.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
something seems off about that stretched out arm not sure if its too long or too short

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VirLux responds:

Thank you so much, I appreciate the creative criticism, there's always room for improvement. Anatomy is a bitch!

[The Great Wario Gathering of '18]

Wow nice

Wow so much "WARIOS" this is an amazing piece of some beautiful "COLOR" you should do more themed ones like this, These types of submissions really bring new insight to the style and craft. anyways keep up the good work. it was an interesting piece of art, could use some touch ups here and there and was overall pleased with the outcome

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you should do more themed ones like this

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[The Toad Brigade (Mario galaxy)]

Awsome

Wow you really did something "NICE" here the "TOAD-BRIGADE" is really cute and nifty looking the sprite / pixel is amazing love the added details maybe one more added detail of some shine and sparkle, This was a good art piece, these types can be hard to review and stuff but have suggested a few ideas to improve on it, and if not just keep trying new stuff and see what works, but with that said this was pretty good I thought.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
love the added details maybe one more added detail of some shine and sparkle

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MichaFrario responds:

I would definitely improve this if I were to redo do it after 2 years. Thanks for those nice comments dude!