XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hungry for Love]

Very colorfull

So this was a very colorfull piece I love the vibrant colors here, and love the character work here aswell but its the color that really drives this and it shows very artistcly, Maybe if you added some type of "BORDERS" that could reflect off of that aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here is something of an idea, This was a pretty neat art piece, you should think about adding some Borders, you can even go all fancy and stuff with some design and color to them, or even related to the art piece and such, so its something to try and would bring more quality to the art piece. just an idea.

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[Knife & Fork]

Nice job

So nice job indeed, this comic series is just a brilliant piece and this one at hand was not the best but it still has some good humor these characters are always great and make even the most bland of moments into something good, So good humor on this one, I look forward to even more.

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[Oven]

Interesting

And in this comic you made an interesting one come alive with some adventure and the characters are great as always, and again the jokes are great, I can never get enough of this series, I had a rough time getting into it before but really have enjoyed it now onto the next one.

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[Sleepy]

Cute

awww what adorable little creatures of bunny and cats you have here. I love the use of pink pixels for their bodies and the squinty eye looks they have on their faces. The overall look is good for pixels and I can see why you are showing all three in one image with a white background, but maybe next time move them around and make a full setting with a background and some interaction between creatures. I love it for the design, but wish it had more going on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above, mainly a background

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maruki responds:

Thanks for all your feedback. I made this very quickly and focusing solely on AA, that's why the final result is so empty.

[girlface.jpg]

Nice drawing

So here was a nice drawing or sketch, you should give her more expression on her face it looks a little flat, And I would even throw in some color on this one, then some backround would be a huge plus also, but other then that this was notbad, I like your work here, so keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should give her more expression on her face it looks a little flat, I would even go as far as to put some color into this, these are just some ideas.

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[Dexter]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I like the red and black style here the backround could use more "TEXTURE" and more depth of color maybe adding a few different reds in the backround to give it more depth to it would be a plus. but other then that this was a nice art piece that you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe adding a few different reds in the backround to give it more depth to it would be a plus.

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[Bellybutton]

Cool and nifty

And here we have once again another part of the comic and this entry really just jumped out at ya and really makes some good story here very amusing as always, and once again I will mention that you bring in some good humor thats always a plus especly for me anyways keep up the good work.

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[Zeta portrait 1 : Chill]

Nice portrait he

So this was a nice portrait you have here the hair almost seems like flames and if that's the case make them more light up and if they are more like leafs then put some green in there but other then that this was a nice drawing a good portrait indeed I look forward to even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some change or not change on the hair

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[Imperial Road (Speed painting)]

Pretty amazing

So this was pretty amazing work here very nice view the grass and view itself looks very realistic I think some lighting effects could come in order on this like adding light hitting the edges of little cliffs and edges of the grass that would give off a more realistic feel of the light hitting the grass

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects to hit the grass would be nice

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[Cute Goop]

Cute

Well the good sure is cute I do wish there could be more good dripping and some dropped on floor that would give off more of a nice effect but the character work is really well done here I like the style here and goop is always good especially when it's pink

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More goop falling down and dripping

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