XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Untitled 128]

Very nice work

And here we have some very nice art work love that eye as afocus point but I do like the darkness in this and that may be your focus but that eye could be some light up area with some tint of color but you do have a nice idea here and it's always cool to see stuff like this anyways nice job on all fronts here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some tint of color or even some light

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[Trench Patrol]

Nice detail

Well lots of detail in here the backrounds the effort shows alot of detail here very nice style. But the amount of detail is very good it's just the little things that really jump out and honestly that's what I liked here so nice job on this piece here anyways good work and hope to see more soon. It was a pleasure

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I don't know seems pretty good as is

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foamymuffin responds:

thanks, appreciate all types of feedback. ye i see what you mean with trying to get things to pop out more.

[Piggy Bank]

wow

Now this is just crawling with appeal all across the board. the greens and yellows and reds all "JUMP" out at you with a vibrant foam of color so very nice work there and I was very impressed with the outcome here and really do look forward to more of your stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So with this piece no changes are needed and I will tell you why because its perfect in its own unique way. So while this is an improvements section no changes needed.

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[Purgatory Game]

Cool

And here is another table game you have outdone yourself once again and I have seen you do these before this was with out a doubt a beautiful piece and a fantastic idea that works well and would love to see you present this with some real stats, but nice idea.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More larger canvus with more statistics on the games itself.

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[Warhammer]

Wow

These are pretty impressive I have wanted to do something like this for awhile now but you have a nice idea here the paint doesn't show too well but maybe some silver or greys you can give it a shine or something some kind of light color that could represent some shine and with the already dark paints you could probably pull it off just something to think about but great idea here with painting these would love to see more of these figures painted and such. So besides the light paint for shine maybe even do a set or series of them with blood and such to also give off that war feel to it all so just give a few ideas there to see what works and what doesn't

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some other paints for blood and shine etc

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[Junkrat lineart]

Color

Yeah I will have to agree with you that this does need some color even just parts of it colored would be nice and what kind of paperbor canvus did you put this on it was different then the normal. But really. Anyways nice efforts here good style just needs some color into this so that's an idea for you to think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some color or part of it

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[Kittensvdragons work in progress]

Awesome

And here you have presented us with some of the starting stages of how it does get started you have a nice progress here and the detail is enhanced greatly very nice pieces here and you bring a nice style to the table I like how you have showcased this in a positive way indeed so nice effort here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No improvements needed on the learning process

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[Inktober Day 7]

Decent piece again

And once again we have another decent drawing of these characters not much for color in this one but still a fun piece to see and review of course that lil bit of color could be all filled as if it was a shield over eyes or something and could be transparent but anyways this was not a bad art piece at all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A red sheild over eye guard

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 5]

Nice lighting

So now with this one you have really pushed the limits on lighting effects the greens the reds and fire flames very vibrant and lots of great color here and that glow effect has really come alive I can see you pushing it even more even harder and beyond with even more glowing and shine and just a beautiful use of color but you already outdone yourself with it I would also just leave it be and not have any changes. And the story really pushes forward and your characters really come alive I am loving the the close up shots like of the eyes very nice job there anyways keep up the great work is of work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A fantastic piece with awesome use of color

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[Inktober Day 5]

Decent

Decent piece of artwork here I think a nice effect would be to have smoke comming from the bullet holds cause from the gun it seems like it just shot and comming from the actual bullet holes shot it would show more realistic results just an idea though as this was a pretty decent piece you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some smoke from the bullets

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