XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kelly Killing Necromorphs]

Nice use of color

~~REVIEW~~
nice piece here it shows lots of "ACTION" and i love the color "TONES" changing from one to the next that was actually a pretty good idea and makes it much more neat that way, the drawings them self of the battle and characters are pretty awsome show lots of detail and great designs on them so very good on this piece i really liked this one, if any suggestions are made in this review to improve on, maybe you could use more lighting effects like the gun "SHOOTING" brighten them up abit, anyways great piece you have here.

~~OVERALL~~
could use more lighting effects, on the gun ray for example.

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DarkVisionComics responds:

Its fine how it is for the most part, I do agree,I could of did the lighting effects on her face from the glow of the gun and glow onto the necromorph she's fighting, but the gun isn't shooting, she's just aiming at a limb . Thank you though! :} She loves it, I love it, I got paid for it. Good stuff. Thank you again!

[Hey Honey]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
hehe ok i must admit i did get a funny "LAUGH" from this one, allthough i was confused i should have started on the first one, but here we are at (#5) now this comic is notbad, the color was ok but maybe some "DEEPER" colors and such? maybe more frames then you have aswell, dont get me wrong this was decent but has room for improving i enjoyed it regardless, so untill next time keep up the decent art, one one last note the art in paticular was pretty welldone so again props to you there, good luck on your next piece of artwork.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a few things i said like, more deeper colors, more frames, more dpth and more going on ofcorse.

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[Drunk Russian Guy]

notbad bad at all

~~REVIEW~~
So this was ok, i kinda liked it if you ask me though, it was a good {SKETCH} nothing too fancy but still had it moments you did show us effort with some details and emotion in the character with eyes and such, now some {COLOR} would really spice this up though, so i wouldnt mind seeing some color presented, so for a better outcome maybe a larger scale and some added color.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some color maybe even a larger {SCALE} drawing

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thies responds:

Thanks for the review :)

[Parrot McParroty]

sharp colors

~~REVIEW~~
ok so its been awhile since i reviewed anything but must say this one is pretty impressive, i love the {COLOR} its very sharp and fresh looking what did you actually use?? anyways great parat or other bird, and even added some nice backround to reflect the bird more, so nice job overall

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
hmm not sure here but maybe some outer lines {GLOWING} just an idea but something to try it out

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[Self Portrait]

This was decent

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was pretty interesting i thought the holding up of the actaual pictures was a nifty and creative idea, the {BACKROUNDS} looked very realistic or could have been a {3d-RENDER} of some type?? anyways glad to see this got an honorble mention for frontpaged very nice job there, now this was pretty neat with the odd but neat looking eyes, you gave it that unique and odd style that i love so i was glad to have seen this, as for improvments i would suggest throw in a little puppy or rabbit in the backround just for extra measure haha, anyways nice job here hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As an extra idea throw in a little puppy or rabbit in the backround. other then that i thought it was ok.

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NeonMonster responds:

duly noted.

[Poisson Apple]

Creative and nifty

~~REVIEW~~
I love this one, i actually have a simular tattoo, i think the painting cameout well, more blood could be there like one idea might be the blood dripping out the table like thing but this was a pretty good piece and ill add this one as my faves, another thing would be to bring out more shine like on the apple, the backround was interesting maybe a more darker feel in the backround, i guess that wouldnt work too well with the dark table just an idea though, but anyways great painting and i look forward to seeing and reviewing more of your stuff. anyways good luck

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few shines and darker issues

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afiboy69 responds:

First i just want to thank u for adding the painting to ur favorites and leaving a very nice helpful review =) i find it interesting that u have a tattoo that has a similar depiction or atmosphere, sounds badass =D so im glad this had given u some sort of meaningful connection, which I think is very important when it comes to art. Anyways once again thank u for the feed back =)

[Earth Dragon]

Nice mix dragon

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i love dragons and this was pretty impressive, i think the tittle should have ran something like this {SNAKE-DRAGON} Seems more fitting to what the drawing and your comments go with, i love the mixture of the snake and dragon allthough would have been nice to show more of the body so i could see how it all forms out, but great backround very fitting and great color and texture with the snake its all perfect in element, so awsome job on this one, but like i said a more body shot would have been even better, anyways nice job i look forward to more of your fantastic designs.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned a full body shot would have been great.

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Louise-Goalby responds:

The commission was only of a headshot.