XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

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This was cool

So this was cool I like the background colortone because that lighting effect really comes off the corner well so nice job on that aspect of things you have some nice idea here and your effort shows off detail pretty well so this was a nice art piece here

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I would leave it just as it is

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[Jezebel]

Awsome

So here was an awesome piece you have here I like the bottle and props on the table and the red skintone was pretty cool too I think some background is in order it is lacking but nice job overall here I really like your work here hope to see more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work is needed

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[Odo]

Amazing

I enjoyed what you have done with "ODO" and its nice to have a good find fan art like this with an original style, especially your use of brush strokes in your lines that makes it almost disjointed but in a fresh new way. So here was something interesting I like how much detail you placed inside your background of the ships bridge as we know that was where the character usually was, the shines are GREAT and the device in his hand has really pretty effects that stand out and keep with the sci-fi elements, even your light and shadows here are excellent. So this piece will make me look forward to future work from you and I am impressed.

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Nothing really, I think this is great stuff.

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MindChamber responds:

Thanks again for an awesome and thoughtful review.. sadly I can't take credit for the background, as that was an actual image from the show :(

[Omnia the Purple]

Really nice work

I like the character you have here today, I think if you added some sort of "BAVKROUND" here that would be one idea of improving onto this and that purple "GLOBE" you could also have some more sparkle and shine on that, now these are just a few ideas that you could improve on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few shine and sparkle effects would be a nice addition.

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[Mermay Day 9]

Awsome

So this was cool

Another cool character, I absolutly love the lighting effects on the chest area and such I do think that you should have more lighting effects like on that sword or even some sparkle shine just something more to it, but besides that this was a well designed character very nice indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and lighting effects.

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[Mermay Day 13]

Very nice

I like these ones with all the ocean life and such, this particular character was pretty nice the "HEART" was a good idea, theres lots of blue here so maybe some sort of sparkles here and there to reflect off from the character to the backround would be kind of a nifty idea.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Something to reflect the deifference from backround and character blues.

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[Betsy Bruiser]

Very nice work

So there was some good details in this one and it really shows off your talent and detail here, I was highly impressed with the visuals here. Wow some nice work here I like all the poses and like all the style and detail in this one as for improvment not sure, but you have some amazing work very good structure on character design here, Anyways this shines with delight very fun stuff to review here. I was pleased to review this piece it just shows off really well, so hope you make more fantastic stuff like this soon.

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I think its fine as is some extra flashy sparkles and effects wouldnt hurt either but all is good in my eyes.

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[Too Fast gif]

Hmmm

Well this little toon was okay, not really a toon or animation, but art gif, but I can see you making it a series out of this if you just keep going with it. It needs more and it needs to be a bit faster. The style of the "SONIC" character really is spot on, you can draw very well, but you need more context, we all know he goes around and gets rings, but you can do so much more with this. I think since you have the basics of the character down and your background fits the mold too, you should give an idea to making this a short animation in full.

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Make this into a series

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[Nidorina+Rapidash=Nidodash]

Another cool fusion

So you have another cool fusion here I really like the spikes here and the horse form was good too all a good dinner but again I think adding a background that reflects where they fusion or come from would be a really good background element anyways nice piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some background element

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[Sandslash+Magnemite=Magneslash (Pokemon Fusion)]

Oh cool

Pokemon fusions are always cool just like this one is I really like the tone of color like the grey parts and such that was cool and very good depth to the color tone I do think you could ad to the background as I was lacking some background detail or even some props and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background as it was lacking just a tad

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