Add some subtitles
~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this especially with the graphics. well done there i especially like the detail of the backrounds
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles
~~OVERALL~~
A good little flash nice graphics all around
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Add some subtitles
~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this especially with the graphics. well done there i especially like the detail of the backrounds
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles
~~OVERALL~~
A good little flash nice graphics all around
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Thanks for the compliments and the advice. I might go back and add subtitles because the little egg guy with the deep voice is hard to understand.
Notbad at all
~~REVIEW~~
I liked this, allthough it was short it had some smooth graphics a good meaning and some nice music, you should make more that are like this
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe abit longer next time
~~OVERALL~~
short but good meaning
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Thanks! I will try to improve next time!
Awsome
~~REVIEW~~
This was very neat and awsome to see everyone here put it together, graphics were decent and the music was even better i enjoyed it, i wouldnt mind seeing more stuff like this
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I thought it was fine
~~OVERALL~~
Awsome flash colab here
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Very impressive
~~REVIEW~~
This was very impressive, i like that it was all black and white but you should think about adding just abit of color here and there
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Black and white flashes are notbad, but while its black and white, you Should add some color even if just a drop of red or blue here and there, like say a blood drop so that the Black and White reflects more it would be a nice, and would standout abit better, and improving on your Black and White animation.
~~OVERALL~~
great flash
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Thanks for the review! I love black and white, but I know what you mean about the color. I think I may start experimenting with it. Great review thanks a bunch!
wow nice
~~REVIEW~~
This was very good, and for the size and amount of stuff in here it seems to have gone fairly well and a nice peice all and all, so props to all who worked on this.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make other ones like this
~~OVERALL~~
Decent colab here a must see
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If you liked this, I suggest you watch the new Notepad Drawing Collab 09 ;P
Thanks for the review.
Notbad but could be better
~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad at all but could be better, i liked it and the sprites were looking very good, i think it could be better with some "VOICES" instead of just the text boxes
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some voices
~~OVERALL~~
Good animation
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thanks.
This was cute
I gave a 6 for the effort you put into this, i would suggest putting more effort into the backrounds though, but keep at it its a good start
Random but entertaining
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Thank you!!
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