XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CoolJaw: T.T. II-V]

Hmmm differant

Well this was differant for sure, i like the idea of the color and you had a nifty little cursur in there all in all this was a nifty little flash wish it was abit more quality on choices but it is what it is

Fun flash here i look forward to more of your flash

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Celx-Requin responds:

Cool,
thanks for the review!
- Celx

[KK NES Vol 03 Kitty Kong]

Interesting game

You have an interesting game here its classic donkey kong with abit of a twist, dont get me wrong i love it but still seems so-so, you could improve on this like larger characters more animation from other characters and some more random humor would really help on this

Hope the tips above can help to improve on a funny flash here

~X~

PantyWipe responds:

thank ya. when i made these i only had 6 hours and couldnt save my work (stupid college computer) so whatever i could whip up quickly had to do.

[21 Pains]

Needs more scnes

The graphics were pretty impressive,, the "VOICES" were not half bad, i really came to enjoy such a pleasent video and you did very well with the art, and some animation, but this lacked in other scnes i like what you did just wish it had much more effort in taking it into more differant scnes and backrounds

As said it needs to be taken into much more other scenes

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MonoFlauta responds:

oks thanks a lot for the review... in our next flash you will see all the things you are asking :p

[Tablet vs Pencil]

Cute

This was a cute little flash here i like the "2" Differant versions, its a start in the right direction, i think you should make more like this with the differant "CAMERA" styles but maybe in your next one you might want to introduce a color version vs a Black and white one, maybe this will give you a few ideas.

Well as i said a color version would be nice, but not just that make these flashes much longer and have the sticks doing much more in there perspective areas.

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martiescageda responds:

Your suggestion is really constructive and you have good ideas, but I guess I'll stop making these stick animations for a while dedicate myself to real cartoons. It's kinda hard working with perspective on stick figures to... Anyway, thanks for the review.

[Pleasure Island]

Nice artwork

The animation ran smooth the art was amazing, and the humor in all this was funny as hell i couldnt stop laghing after the kiss, the "SIZE" is somewhat large but other then that its an ok and funny flash you got here

I thought the file was a tad large you can compress it to a smaller size so that it doesnt take so long to load, this also making take up less on newgrounds, there are a number of things you can do reduce the size, from small images not so detailed dependent, smaller sound files etc.

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Sexual-Lobster responds:

reduce file size? from 3.8 MB? woah, you're oldskool

[Madness TV]

Add some color

I know these types are meant to be black and white, but just an ounce of color, would be nice, also some other scenes that you had this in would also be nice, good luck in future stuff

Nice flash but could use abit more effort as i explained above

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Vaneetra responds:

Yea, it could have. But like I said, this is only my second attempt. I just need to practice with the basics a little more to get used to it and then try more complex situations and such. Thanks for the tips!

[Super Mario World War]

Nice effects

This was nice the sprite work looks very sharp and crisp and the action was jam packed, the animation was awsome, I think if i was gonna give any advice it would to have the action go into much more scenes differant ones with all sorts of more action

It needs more scenes and stuff like i explained just above, hope it helps and hope to see new and upcoming vids from you

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diogoshx responds:

i understand!

yeah! what you are trying to say is that if i make more "different cameras of action". :D

More effects, and a little more, appreciation of the art, as well of a little longer movie.

thanks for your time!

[Bad Weekend]

Notbad

Well its notbad i found it very entertaining to be honest, the black and white was nice, maybe add a touch of color here and there, also the "AUDIO" was hard to hear at times so maybe by adding some subtitles it could improve on this, nice job.

How to improve on this???
Subtitles to start, a touch of color and maybe some special effects

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NicBuhrmanProjects responds:

Thanks! I'll be submitting another cartoon soon that addresses all of those issues.

[SpeedE The WFD]

Very good detail and animation

This started of great and love the full animation of the characters with awsome and smooth animation, i think it needs some subtitles though and possibly a replay button at the end

My advice to improve on this is explained just above.

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McAfee-Enterprises responds:

Awesome input! Thanks and coming from you it means a lot for us. I was checking out some of yoru work and read the interview you did here at NG really cool stuff! :)

Again thanks for taking the time to give us some constructive input.........

[Weed Tripping Stoner]

Trippy

That was pretty trippy, really love what you did with all the color and such, and it really made for the trippy stoned feel, it moved along very smoothly so nice job on the animating

I would love to see more stuff like this, like a whole series of differant vids, anyways good luck and good work

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SimonGreen responds:

Thanks :D yeah id like to do some more stuff with trippy backgrounds soon
Glad u like them :p
Maybe some cartoons or something if i get the chance
Thanks again