XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jouney to links quest]

Entertaining

Its been awhile since i have seen some good sprites, this was notbad, i did have a hard time reading the text as it reflected badly off the backrounds my suggestion for that is below, good flash though.

Place a dark bar or box behind the text and have the text in that box so it makes the text standout more, just an idea though.

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ThyGentleman responds:

yup thats noted and in the next episode theres also going to be a next button so you can take your time and read it...now all i gotta do is learn how to keep the music playing while its stopped at that frame

[Glad0s]

Hhehe simple but very entertaining

Hehe well i liked this, it was not very long but it was simple and yet still entertaining, my only beef with this flash at all was that i wish there was more differant scenes and some more use of color, but your animation was right on.

Add more scenes and more backrounds aswell some more use of color.

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LungaN responds:

Yeah but I didn't plan to make this a big project.
I'll make a bigger and longer flash next time.
I'm stil pretty sure I wanna make an portal flash ^-^

[(un)coloured]

Good music

Notbad on here. The music was good. A really good choice I thought there does need to be more to the flash itself. More action I would think so. Good start though

add much more content and more action

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michiforjoy responds:

Hey thanks! I recorded the music just for this, which was fun! I agree that it was a bit boring later on hahaha. :D

[The Three Musketeers!]

entertaining

I thought it was notbad. And it did have it's moments could have more animation and maybe abut smoother. But over all a good and entertaining flash. Hope to see more soon.

Add more animation

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werdna250 responds:

Honestly, I completely agree - lack of animation was due to laziness, and shortage on time.

This was for a school project, threw it together in 9 hours the day before it was due. xD I work slow.

Anyways, thanks for commenting and watching!

[Dave The Pirate]

Lol entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Haha well this was good, i like the characters, and the subtiles was nice but they went by too fast i thought, i hope you make more of this as its a cute flash and i could see it running as a series, anyways look forward to more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Slow down the subtitles abit

~~OVERALL~~
A cute flash, could be a series of adventures

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Alexman159 responds:

i thought it was cute. i just liked audio and wanted to do something wit it

[Jake & Whinston]

Notbad for clay

~~REVIEW~~
This was really neat i like clay suff, and i was really impressed with the size for it being clay and all, a good and funny clay flash

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Keep making these with the low size

~~OVERALL~~
A good clay flash here

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joshuablake responds:

Thank you, I will try to keep any new movies at a reasonable file size.

[Bros' Problems Halloween]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
This was a decent flash and funny on top of that, the "SPRITES" looked good and the "ACTION" flowed nicley throught, very nice work here, hope to see more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
slow down the action just a tad

~~OVERALL~~
Decen flash very fast paced

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MrSaint responds:

Thanks for the review. We really appreciate it. We tried to make this funny, I see we have managed to do so.

In our next movie, the action will be a bit slower. Once again, thank you for the review.