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[Rage Bot ep. 1]

You have something here, but needs much more

~~REVIEW~~
For starters you may want to make it longer with more chacters and more scenes and more backround detail, this one lacked alot of that and couldbenifit from those tips, also more details wouldnt hurt

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above a few tips could help to improve on this

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and short needs more, i pointed out a few tips that may help

~X~

FlashMasterXD responds:

Waw, and your a detective or something!
Okay fine, I'll make Ep. 2 better!
There are actualy alot more charecters but I can't finish it, because I haven't got a Femail voice actor.

[Sweet Dreams "Teaser"]

Love it great artwork

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty amazing even for just a trailer of it and all, the art had so much good texture and the animation was smooth as can be, a good story content was right on aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make a full version or even continue it on in a series

~~OVERALL~~
Great art, and idea, keep up the good work

~X~

RatiganZombie responds:

Thanks, I really appreciate the constructive feedback. The first episode is in the works right now

[dead_headV2]

Random = Great

~~REVIEW~~
Props to you on the randomness of it and you have a great eye for "COLOR" the detail was abit much i thought especially on the very first animation, you should try working on less detail and more story

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less detail in my opinion

~~OVERALL~~
Random and amusing

~X~

apewithshape responds:

will do thanks for your input!!!

[Adv. of Juniper Lee]

It was cute

~~REVIEW~~
I was impressed with the ideas here of the kid screaming then it all turns to chaos, it really made it entertaining there, as for your artwork on the characters that was actually pretty good and you showed lots of effort on detail, the story could have gone into more "SCENES" though as it was mostly in that one, anyways good luck in newer stuff which i hope to see soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more scenes maybe she chases him somewhere and he keeps losing her while still causing troubl or something like that

~~OVERALL~~
Good story funny and abit of chaos all rolled upto in one

~X~

Piggybank12 responds:

This kinda ties in with what I said in the review below this one, but you're right, the one camera angle in this doesn't really work in the second half of this Flash. The second half of this actually used a scene from the show, just presented at a different angle (the computer). It didn't really work in the long run due to there not being much there in that scene to begin with.

[Interactive Party House!]

Nice indeed

~~REVIEW~~
I like this i like that you can click and play all around in the house, allthough the house seemed sorta small, but you made a good game here with all the options keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the house bigger and add much more rooms

~~OVERALL~~
A fun game of point and click

~X~

JunkYardAnimations responds:

ya good point, i was thinking of adding an upstairs but i ran out of time

[Box Lunch]

I like this

~~REVIEW~~
You really do have something good here, the whole "BOX" idea for characters is nifty, the color texture on the characters and all around was real good which i liked, anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make more like this, but if i can say anything to improve on this one, maybe compress the file as much as possible

~~OVERALL~~
An entertaining flash of box heads

~X~

DestructoBox responds:

We're definitely looking out for new compression techniques. The final output of the episode lives in a quicktime because Flash doesn't really handle the textures so well. We're working out the best way to get that down to regular swf sizes, and hopefully by the next post we'll get it down further!

Thanks for the review!

[Found some poo]

LOL Funny

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this one made me laugh the animation of the characters was really good the humor was good aswell, i do however think this could use some subtitles though and i think thats about the onlything it really needs

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained it could use some subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
Add some subtitles and all is good, funny stuff though

~X~

koit responds:

If you press the "s" button in the top left corner, you'll get your wish.

[KK Nes Vol 02 PaKK Man]

lol ok

Well another entertaining flash you have here, the cat head once again made this an entertaining and very amusing flash to view would like to view more of these, since they are all short they could be all placed in one flash.

Anyways good and funny stuff here

~X~

PantyWipe responds:

thank ya

[KK NES Vol 04 R.K. Ransom]

lol cute

Haha well i found this entertaining, gave me a few laughs i really like the jpeg head on the old time sprites, it was way too "SHORT" though it needs to have much more content and last longer atleast abit longer

Funny flash but can be improved with more content and made longer not so short as it is

~X~

PantyWipe responds:

thank you for the kind words, and not automatically zeroing it because its kitty krew!