XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Gerbil Cage 1]

((( FUNNY ANIMATION AND NICE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hey now this was good, especialy the graphics, allthough some more animation would have been cool, it was funny so i like the humor, and i could see this as a series where the gerbil talks about his owner from the cage and all, anyways funny stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more scenes, like maybe he escapes, Voices are decent but Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it will improve on the flash
and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly...

~~OVERALL~~
Great character good humor. this one has promise, keep up the good flashwork...

~X~

AidenOMG responds:

Thankies for the feedback. On my next project I'll use subtitles, it's a smart idea. =)

[Mario's Adventure Part I]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was interesting, kinda odd but neat, there was some crazy stuff with this but i liked it like that, if im going to suggest anything it would be to lower the filesize somewhat, anyways notbad...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Reduce the file size so that it doesnt take loads of time to download, look for areas to compress, maybe the intense graphics or the audio needs to be cut, but whatever the case try and compress it...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting and strange at the sametime, needs some reduction in size though...

~X~

Stryden-Kamal responds:

thanks man, this was one of my first flashes so i didnt know how to properly compress it. but im going to start working on flash again soon so it will be better next time.

[Jerk 'N Bedn 01]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, you should have added more though it started then eded so fast, this has promise, anything with bdn has promise, but anyways make them fight or something...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content like a fight scenes or something...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining bedn and some character lol...

~X~

Evil-Kat responds:

Haha, that would be funny. :P

But I don't think there will be a secual. ;)

[Diceman and Cluppo 2]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
I saw one of your other claymations and i was very impressed, but they are very short, you should make them longer or add them together or something, great clay-mations though, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make them longer...

~~OVERALL~~
Great clay animation but very short...

~X~

Zombie-clock-monkey responds:

Thanks, I'm working on somthing different now with voices and sets, it will be much longer.

[GG- Lazy Glockday]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was interesting, kinda neat, but seems to lack in details and effects, could use more effort, espeicly in compressing the file down abit, anyways nice job, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More story base, and more effort in detail...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining but needs some improving...

~X~

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[Battle for the Rings]

((( COULD BE LONGER )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was good, decent artwork, seemed abit short though, but neatly done, i wouldnt mind seeing this more as a series and stuff, maybe give it more story and such, but overall notbad, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more story and make more episodes it has promise...

~~OVERALL~~
A netly drawn flash with goos characters and such, nice job...

~X~

Sharkius-Cubed responds:

Ok, thanks for the constructive review.