XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Just A Simple Life- Part2]

(( Nice animation ))

~~REVIEW~~
I liked it, it was random at times,a nd had some funny moments was kinda neat with a sorta story and all, very entertaining gave me a few laughs nice job on this, you should compress it somewhat though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a series out of this and compress the file.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and random, a decent flash.

~X~

Blindwalker responds:

thanks for the review man! It's good to here from the people watching, and good to see that i got a laugh from you!! I've been really busy at Uni recently and havent had a chance to make more, but it is in the pipe line! Hope to get another out to you soon.
Cheers

[Official NG SSaver Entry]

(( Decent screensaver ))

~~REVIEW~~
I never seen a flash on newgrounds that was a screen saver, but this was impressive, wish it had more animated stuff in the backround besides the trees but it was a neat screen saver, anyways nice jb.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More balances color and more animated prps.

~~OVERALL~~
The first ever screensaver on newgrounds.

~X~

Leonardo-Da-Finchy responds:

Woah, it's a long time since anybody reviewed this...

Erm, there are hills and mountains behind the trees.

I entered this in a competition, I was a winner, so this was going to be made into an actual screensaver. I'm told that the screensavers are going up after the next newgrounds visual overhaul, which is apparently some time in the new year.

[Wedding-Day]

(( Amusing ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOl the art was silly but it had a decent story, silly and entertaining, maybe add some backrounds and some flashy effects.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color, improved characters and add some backrounds.

~~OVERALL~~
A silly and funny flash does need some more work though.

~X~

Fantomass responds:

Thanks for review!

[Leper Hockey Game]

(( Funny joke ))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol this wasa funny joke. maybe you shuld make lots more and add them, besides that this was funny.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more jokes for one big funny joke flash.

~~OVERALL~~
A short but funny joke.

~X~

JunkYardAnimations responds:

appreciate the thorough reviewww <3

[Taming the Sun: A Myth?]

(( Interesting ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was interesting, i like the style of art with good shades and such, the "SOUND" seemed abit low though maybe turn it up abit if you can, the buttons tend to get in the way.besides that it was a fun video.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the sound louder. Instead of using butons to proceed to the next msg, just have it flow as a movie, viewers may get anoyed at always having to press the button.

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting animation , with the sun lol

~X~

rug-doctors responds:

Thanks, but rememeber, it was actually a slideshow for a mythology class in highschool, and I didnt change anything before I put it on here on a whim.

[The Bordering]

(( Needs color ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was sorta wacky and interesting, could use more color in the backround though you did add some but seems like it could use more, just so that it stands out, aslo the animation could be improved.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animation, some color, and more content.

~~OVERALL~~
Short and wacky animation.

~X~

1371 responds:

This was the gayest thing I've ever read.

-G

[The Fight for the CB pt2]

(( Funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, abit long in the file but still was some decent entertainment, the clay was not s laggy like some animation and it was funny so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file somewhat.

~~OVERALL~~
A decent claymation.

~X~

Claego responds:

Thanks for the advice. I've managed to figure out how to make a play button, but due to certain complications, I wasn't able to upload it to this site yet. I will improve on everything. Thanks for the review! :)