XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Visit to Starbucks]

(( LOL FUNNY AND ENTERTAINING ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i thought the "CHARACTERS" were interesting they had style, the "VOICES" was a nice touch but the sound quality was way down, as you could hear a scartchy backround sound, you should cut that backround sound out, maybe even add some subtitles, anyways nice animation it was funny and entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles and fix the audio up abit.

~~OVERALL~~
Good animation, does need some improving, but you are bound to get a good laugh from this nice job, and i hope to see more good work from you soon.

~X~

TheMentalInstitute responds:

Cool, I'm glad you liked it.

Since the audio was recorded at a low quality I don't think there's not really an easy way to improve it now.

Check out my other stuff if you want, and I'm planning on submitting more sometime soon.

[N00bKebob #22]

(( Lol entertaining ))

~~REVIEW~~
Well i did have fun watching this, it presented some funny and silly artwork, whil also having some random humor which i happen to like, so its notbad, also nice work on the menue very neat.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like it as is.

~~OVERALL~~
A wacky and silly random animations.

~X~

N00bNation responds:

If it only got a 5 out of 10 it has got to have something that needs improving :P

[Imagination Ep.2]

((( NICE ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat i love the music it really worked well and flowd well with the cute animation i did think this needed some color , or atleast a backround base, but overall i like dthe animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color, some backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
Fun animation could use some color though...

~X~

VegetarianMeat responds:

Thanks for the review :D I'm currently working on the next edition of this flash. This time it has color.

[piss]

((( NICE GUN )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a nice gun, but it seems thats all it was so i ask why the title name? "Santas First Time" ??? anyways it had a delayed sound like when you shoot very fast it went silent, anyways funny little test or something...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some backrounds besides that white one...

~~OVERALL~~
A gun with good chamber reactions and sound/fx, not much more then that...

~X~

tooters responds:

i swapped files because i wasn't too proud of my santa animation

[FunFunFunFun Christmas!]

(( Lol ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was sorta funny, but very short, maybe you shoud add some more dialog and such, aswell as more content, like a few scenes and all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes are needed and some more dialog between the two characters.

~~OVERALL~~
Silly and short but good for the holiday seasons.

~X~

biblo responds:

THEREWS NO STOREY ASSHEAD

[Angryman]

(( Lol funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, a cute and shrt animation, the stick character was funny ever thought about a more defined character it might make the flash more better, and also the screen size seemed abit small.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the screen size abit larger.

~~OVERALL~~
A short short, funny stuff.

~X~

boner118 responds:

I can't remember why I made the thing that small in the first place, but when I thought 'this could look better bigger' I already had done loads and couldn't be bothered to change it. I think it was to do with the background sizes. Anyhoo, Merry Xmas.

[Phenomenal: Episode 03]

(( Very nice ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very nice, especialy the graphics and een more importantly the charactesr with full body animation and with the sound/fx it really came around to some nice animation, so nice job on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cant see anything because for the most part it was great well besides the filesize but its ok.

~~OVERALL~~
A great animation with good sound/fx.

~X~

Blaklyon responds:

Yeah, that when it comes to the file size of flash movie, Quality equals size. So, the better the quality, the bigger size. I try to keep it it under 5 megs when I can. (Except for the latest episode of phenomenal) Because I understand that there maybe some users STILL on a dial up connection. But remember, when I make a flash that is a little high on the file size, I do try to make it worth your time waiting for it to load. Unlike some assholes. Thanks for the review!

[Randomcrap2]

(( Notbad again ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol once again its notbad, the added graphics was nice, but you should really make the window size much larger, and it loops so you want to fix that, nice work though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Larger screen size, and more content with more scenes aswell a fix on the looping.

~~OVERALL~~
again this was notbad but could use some work.

~X~

bagum responds:

I made this five minutes after the first one! lol