XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[PunWisp vs. JerdanMan]

(( lol funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was funny, made me laugh, i wish the file was much abit smaller but besides that this was very funny had me rolling, nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The Filesize was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k.

~~OVERALL~~
funny in a lol kinda way, nayways nice job.

~X~

Short-Factor responds:

The file size is fine. There is a 5 meg limit, and this movie was less than half that limit. By NG's standards, this was well compressed. I can't help it if you have a crappy internet connection, I'm sorry. But if a 2 meg movie almost kills your machine, either watch crappier Flash movies, or get a new machine.

P.S. I highly recommend the latter.

[A Montage of Jim's Life]

(( lol cute and entetaining ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was funny and seemed abit cute with characters and such, abit large in the size, but i found it entertaining aswill most who see it, so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more added color would be nice especialy in the backrounds.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and cute animations.

~X~

Jimtopia responds:

Ah, well thank you for the review. I'm prawly gonna start doing more backgrounds now, so be lookin' out for new submissions o' mine. Thx again.

[The Return of the Gizoid]

(( Notbad ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, kinda neat actually, im not too into sprites but you had some nice animation, but i would add some more effects if i were you, also nice job on the music it was some good work and fit well with the animation so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thought the size was abit much.

~~OVERALL~~
Good animation and nice music to go along with.

~X~

Super-Sonic-67 responds:

Don't worry, I'm improved a ton since I submited this. And now that Sonic the Hedgehog for 360 and PS3 is out, I've got some great new songs to work with!

[The Great Dock Crusade]

(( Lol something new ))

~~REVIEW~~
well this was neat to see a new crew, but i have not heard much from the "DOCKS" lol, but it seems like a fun idea, the animation was notbad kinda funny actually, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some smoother looking animation but besides that it was notbad.

~~OVERALL~~
A new crew from the likes of clocks and locks lol.

~X~

MeMB responds:

Thanks man! You thought it was not bad, so that's good enough for me. Especially coming from you. Thanks.

[DS Birth of an Island]

(( Nice info on islands ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually good, and something i wouldnt mind learning more of this, but from the flash it was gppd, with a decent voice and decent visuals, hope you make another sometime,.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Another isle info flash.

~~OVERALL~~
A good info-flash on isle's and volcanos.

~X~

IceDragon64 responds:

Thank you for your kind words. The current schedule for flash from our 'house' puts BOI2 third in line in 2007, so your wish should be granted by June. Hopefully I will have mastered sound a bit better and made the whole thing more presentable. I will definately be improving this one before 2 comes out so if you have any thoughts on how it could be improved do, please PM me.

[Cocks for clockday]

(( Entertaining ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL abit short but i found it to be somewhat entertaining, the "SCREEN SIZE" was very small, maybe make it somewhat larger if you can will allow more to see, besides that it was entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the screen larger it seemed abit small.

~~OVERALL~~
A short holiday flash, it was funny.

~X~

OvenGloves responds:

ill make it larger next time :]
thanks

[Vermilion pt.2]

((( NOTBAD AT ALL )))

~~REVIEW~~
I really liked the song and thats probably the first time i ever heard it, but anyways i like the black and white but add just abit of color to make it standout just abit, great song and decent animation, kinda like a music video....

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe add some subtitles, Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat B&W Music video, with some good music...

~X~

23450 responds:

thanks alot man. appreciate it. you should eafinantly head over to my other music video, see what you thought of it.

[StrawberryClock-Hurricane]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well it was entertaining, the different clocks was cool, could use a few more locations and such aswellas more clocks, nice color and backrounds, a decent clock flash if i say so myself, keep on clocking lol...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More clocks and locations...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny clocks and there silly-ness...

~X~

JonBro responds:

'k.