XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Will + co #1!]

(( neat characters ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was notbad i liked the characters you showed lots of effort and such and as for the cartoon it was notbad, had a good sory and was funny so nice job on this keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was good besides the size of the flash.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny characters good story.

~X~

DAGamesOfficial responds:

thanx for possitive remarks and things to improve on! And Will + co #2 is on newruonds now so yay!

[Space Symphony]

(( lol ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute, the stars talking, there could be some sorta sunbtitles though, but it was entertaining and the stars were somewhat cute.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining

~X~

Kolibiri responds:

Thank you sir, glad you enjoyed the stars

[HACKware ep. 2 commentary]

(( notbad ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was notbad kinda funny, could use some improving some effects to go with the backrounds but as for the commentary it was ok, the one thing that bothered me was the size it could be compressed better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could get much more views to your flash if you lower the size of it, some slight compression here and there may it be intense graphics, music or whatever the case, just try and cut here and there and you will notce it slightly smaller and will be good for your flash and the viewer download time.

~~OVERALL~~
Big file but has some funny moments.

~X~

Sudden-Flash responds:

Thanks, that's a pretty good idea. (no worries about Ep. 3, it's pretty small (3 MB). It's out you know, you should check it out maybe.

[3-D Motion Capture]

(( Neat idea ))

~~REVIEW~~
Not a bad idea, the animation was slightly choppy, but it was nice and was very realistic like if you really were in a real house or room, you should add some color though, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color.

~~OVERALL~~
A very 3d visual of a room or a house.

~X~

Flameviper responds:

Thanks!

[NGC Toon #1]

(( notbad ))

~~REVIEW~~
well notbad on this i especily liked the effects and your style in this flash you could work on the size abit as it was starting to get up there, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more effects would be nice, You may want to compress the file as it was abit larg and for users with 56k such as myself might have issues with downloading the file, just something to think about when the file gets that big.

~~OVERALL~~
decent style, needs some compression thoough.

~X~

NGCTOONS responds:

Thanks for your review, it is surprising to get one from you! (a bit of sarcasm). As for the filesize, it ranges just under 3000, which is not 1/3 of the max, so I think its no deal. Thanks for the review though ^_^

[Peanut Butter´s Quest]

(( lol funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was funny and the lock characters were notbad, but it was abit hard to understand what they were saying, maybe you should add some subtitles.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some subtitles.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but needs some subtitles.

~X~

Courgy responds:

spammovie

[Generic FBF]

(( funny song ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol the song kept on going after the animation ended, but anyways nice animation very smooth, seems like it could use some color or something, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color and add more animation so it adds with the song.

~~OVERALL~~
A silly and very short animation, funny song though.

~X~

TNOAT responds:

THE xwaynecoltx reviewed my flash? I have now lived life.