XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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((( NICE GUN )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a nice gun, but it seems thats all it was so i ask why the title name? "Santas First Time" ??? anyways it had a delayed sound like when you shoot very fast it went silent, anyways funny little test or something...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some backrounds besides that white one...

~~OVERALL~~
A gun with good chamber reactions and sound/fx, not much more then that...

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tooters responds:

i swapped files because i wasn't too proud of my santa animation

[Art Homework]

(( THIS WAS CUTE ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute, i like the whole idea of the "PEN & PAPER" it was abit on the sort side, but it was entertaining, you should add more adventures, maybe a few more characters in there aswell, anyways nice toon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer with more characters.

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing animation, i liked it nice job.

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[Barbequebeefburger X]

(( LOL ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL haha ok this made me laugh abit, not sure if i have seen much of these but ill make an effot to see more, as for this one well it was amusing and somewhat funny, kinda random, so it was not that bad, its ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved graphics more detailed stuff.

~~OVERALL~~
Random silly fun of a flash.

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[Linetool vs. Paintbrush]

(( Abit short ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was abit short, but had some very nice graphics, love the backrounds, the sticks were ok but might have been better if there was some character like characters, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content and some more detailed characters.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent animation but abit short, has some nice graphics though.

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[FunFunFunFun Christmas!]

(( Lol ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was sorta funny, but very short, maybe you shoud add some more dialog and such, aswell as more content, like a few scenes and all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes are needed and some more dialog between the two characters.

~~OVERALL~~
Silly and short but good for the holiday seasons.

~X~

biblo responds:

THEREWS NO STOREY ASSHEAD

[Angryman]

(( Lol funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, a cute and shrt animation, the stick character was funny ever thought about a more defined character it might make the flash more better, and also the screen size seemed abit small.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the screen size abit larger.

~~OVERALL~~
A short short, funny stuff.

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boner118 responds:

I can't remember why I made the thing that small in the first place, but when I thought 'this could look better bigger' I already had done loads and couldn't be bothered to change it. I think it was to do with the background sizes. Anyhoo, Merry Xmas.

[The Mega Day]

(( Entertaining animation ))

~~REVIEW~~
a decent animation of megaman which had a nice flow of animation especialy when megaman is forming at the start, anyways nice animation, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing much here.

~~OVERALL~~
Smooth megaman animation.

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[Phenomenal: Episode 03]

(( Very nice ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very nice, especialy the graphics and een more importantly the charactesr with full body animation and with the sound/fx it really came around to some nice animation, so nice job on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cant see anything because for the most part it was great well besides the filesize but its ok.

~~OVERALL~~
A great animation with good sound/fx.

~X~

Blaklyon responds:

Yeah, that when it comes to the file size of flash movie, Quality equals size. So, the better the quality, the bigger size. I try to keep it it under 5 megs when I can. (Except for the latest episode of phenomenal) Because I understand that there maybe some users STILL on a dial up connection. But remember, when I make a flash that is a little high on the file size, I do try to make it worth your time waiting for it to load. Unlike some assholes. Thanks for the review!

[bmw bicycles]

(( Nice graphics ))

~~REVIEW~~
This had some nice graphics, and really nice animation, i do think you should make the view screen abit larger though, but it was a neat little animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the screensize abit larger.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent little bike animation.

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