XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[GROUNDBOUND]

A bit short

Well this was notbad a bit short but the animation was pretty smooth and good visually, as your first toon its actually notbad, but I did have fun with this, and I do think you could make it better but in making it longer would be a nice idea and or suggestion here, anyways nice toon.

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Make it longer cant wait to see more from you soon.

~X~

[The Ballad of CrippleKane]

Pretty amazing

Wow this is pretty good stuff I love the whole "WESTERN" theme here the animation effects on this was cool like the running of the horses and the lighting effects in the backround a really nice film here, I would encourage you to make more of this style it is just pure amazing, anyways nice work here.

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I would encourage you to make more of this style it is just pure amazing

~X~

[The Art of Quitting]

Interesting

This is actually pretty good, It was a tad bit short though, and I do think you can ad some "COLOR" into this, but the meaning behind the film is what really its all about so nice work here good little inspiring film you have here, you should make more like this.

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could be longer and and some added color would be another nice idea.

~X~

AnimatedStruggle responds:

Sorry for the late response! I haven't logged in in forever.

I hear you. Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm actually working on a 360 degree run cycle for a new channel intro video. I'll be sure to splash some color on it.

[Spares]

Nice animation

This was pretty good and whitty, the characters are notbad the voices were decent, I may suggest adding some subtitles its a nice option to have, Here we go this was one of those pieces that really stands out with good focus and direction you have shown that on this piece, So thats why I was very pleased with this.

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I may suggest adding some subtitles its a nice option to have

~X~

[Wait for it...]

Interesting

Well this was an interesting animation the animation on the "FACE" was actaully pretty good and some good visuals here, kind of went on a bit long but it was still pretty entertaining, so nice work indeed, not sure what else to say about this one, but it was entertaining.

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it was entertaining and dont think it needs anything really.

~X~

[Super Mario bros Z ep 5 (old series)]

Amazing work

Wow I have to say this was pretty amazing I love the "THEME" here and you really added some nice elements the sprite/pixels are very nice indeed and the "ANIMATION" was really flowing smooth and a swell toon here, so here was a very good animation and I dont see it needing any changes its a solid animation just as it is, anyways nice work.

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so here was a very good animation and I dont see it needing any changes its a solid animation just as it is

~X~

[Jacksepticeye ANIMATED - Sea of Thieves SHORTS]

Very random stuff

This flash right from the start was very funny, your characters are amazing, really good "VOICES" on this one, the "SOUND" qaulity was not the best though it goes in and out maybe thats something you can clean up. but other then that it was a decent and random animation.

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This was ok but it wouldnt hurt to add some subtitles, not because anything was hard to hear or anything but because its just something extra that would make this abit better to understand and its like a nice little feature for your flash here, and if it is hard for some to understand, then they would have the option of subtitles. The sound qaulity was not the best though it goes in and out maybe thats something you can clean up.

~X~

[Day of the Madness]

Very nice animation

So this was pretty cool, I really love this not for the "MADNESS" theme but for the different scenes and all the action that comes with each one, the view shots on this is just really is amazing you can see how in depth detailed details in each scene and thats what I really enjoyed about this, I would have loved even more details in the scenes like more blood shed on the walls maybe some small shading on the walls and much more props, but anyways great movie here.

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I would have loved even more details in the scenes like more blood shed on the walls maybe some small shading on the walls and much more props

~X~

["Gun Fun" Animatic - A student work]

Very Nice

The artwork and music alone were pretty fantastic the "MUSIC" seemed to just flow with the animation and made it just feel just right so I was pretty impressed with this whole piece and was fun indeed, this is one of those pleasent films that just feels just right.

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I wouldnt change a thing on this beautifull film.

~X~

[Stamp on the Ground]

Nice animation

So I like the "DDR" theme here this was pretty cool and the "MUSIC" was pretty fitting the animation of the characters was just as good so this was cool, I wouldnt mind some added flashy effects like have the arrows light up when they are on them maybe even a beam of light from each contact, just an idea, So never be afraid to induldge into something new and different here, You can make things great with some twists and turns I am glad to have checked this one out.

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I wouldnt mind some added flashy effects like have the arrows light up when they are on them maybe even a beam of light from each contact, just an idea

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