XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[JAGUARES]

(( Decent again ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i thought i saw this before, anyways its a good little advertisment, i like the effects and decent animation, but it does loop so you may want to fix that, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the looping by adding a stop action code.

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting effects, nice short animation.

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[Perfect Game]

(( Cute animation ))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol this went by really fast, very short but it was funny, especialy at the end and the shell hehe, a funny mario short i liked it, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was very short, so in that type of flash why not either add more content or you could make a flash with a number of short flashes like this one or even adding it as a part of some collab would be good aswell.

~~OVERALL~~
A short but good mario flash.

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[world war III (part 1)]

(( Decent could be longer though ))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, it was decent could be abit longer maybe give the stick figures more detail especialy in the face, but also the flash could be improved with a storybase, besides that i thought it was ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detailed characters, more scenes and maybe a story behind it.

~~OVERALL~~
A short stick battle scene.

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[Video Games/Brief History]

(( Notbad ))

~~REVIEW~~
Very good idea and it was neat learning all the diffeent stuff, there was even a few things i didnt know, nice job on this i like it good info.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make another version maybe add anything new maybe some new systems such as the wii and ps3.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent idea, nice info.

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[Sonic Blind Hero 4]

(( Could be improved ))

~~REVIEW~~
notbad it was fun to watch but there was some touch ups you could have added to this more effects especialy in the backround and such, more characters aswell, but with that it was an entertaining flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effects and detail needed.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash could be improved on though.

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[Taming the Sun: A Myth?]

(( Interesting ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was interesting, i like the style of art with good shades and such, the "SOUND" seemed abit low though maybe turn it up abit if you can, the buttons tend to get in the way.besides that it was a fun video.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the sound louder. Instead of using butons to proceed to the next msg, just have it flow as a movie, viewers may get anoyed at always having to press the button.

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting animation , with the sun lol

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rug-doctors responds:

Thanks, but rememeber, it was actually a slideshow for a mythology class in highschool, and I didnt change anything before I put it on here on a whim.

[Horse Degree Murder]

(( lol funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny made me laugh, i really like your style good mouth animation, and the voices were good aswell, this was an ok animation, maybe some subtitles just for that overall on it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Voices are decent but Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it will improve on the flash and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent animation good skills in voices and animating.

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[Zhen: Aftermath]

(( Very nice graphics ))

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice animation with some very nice graphics and good detail, love all the saheds and deail along with some nice use of color very well done on this, onlything i could see working on would be the file as it is abit much.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file abit.

~~OVERALL~~

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[Pico's Gothic Resolution]

(( Interesting take on pico ))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha his was neat and has a neat take on how pico is or could be, i like the design of the characters, and with all that said it was a good flash with some decen humor aswell, nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like this as it is.

~~OVERALL~~
A great flash of pico and another pico life heh, anyways nice job.

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