XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Smoke Kills Part 1]

haha cool

~~REVIEW~~
very good graphics here especially the graphics, the characters were good and well animated, an all around awsome flash with a funny idea.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of these there are tons of ideas this would work with

~~OVERALL~~
Another great idea into flash

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[Abstract Cartoon]

decent

~~REVIEW~~
This was kinda funny, i like the idea the graphics could have been slightly better but im ok with this since it was abit funny, so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
improved graphics would be nice maybe some voices aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Decent work here i liked it

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[Mario Get Down!]

Trippy flash

~~REVIEW~~
Very funny and trippy i like all the color changes, mario does get down hehe, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more characters and more marios getting down hehe

~~OVERALL~~
Mario really does get down lol

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RareKirbyStarBall2 responds:

Thanx :D this was just a shorty. you should see my stupid mindless brothaz :P

[Too Blondie]

Entertaining video

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i like the graphics and artwork and even the animation is good, but you could do more with it, as stated below

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the backround change colors or something have the character move into differant scenes, and some subtitles wouldnt hurt

~~OVERALL~~
An entertaining video here

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[TLB - Do you lke waffles?]

hehe silly

~~REVIEW~~
well that was kinda silly, kinda short aswell, you should have had it go longer and more characters maybe even go into a "WAFFLE HOUSE" or something, but it was still neat

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer with more scenes and stuff

~~OVERALL~~
Waffles are good

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[Seymour RaisinBuns]

Cool animation

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat the animation was very smooth, i like the black and white style, but i think you should add just a tad of color it will bring it out more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a touch of color here and there

~~OVERALL~~
Smooth animation

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CartonOMilk responds:

Ah, your right man, and thanks!
All these are more of a test honestly, this one was to BE smooth, so I'm happy then! haha
Thanks a lot for taken the time to review!

[Not so funny random Ep1]

could use some subtitles

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this the graphics were the best part of this, the animation was ok could be improved, add some subtitles because the lips moving and sound didnt work too well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles as stated above

~~OVERALL~~
decent flash could use some more stuff worked on though

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[DBZ GloriousDream Redux!]

oh cool

~~REVIEW~~
I like these comic styles and this one had some really nice artwork, onlything it could use would be to add some more animation so that its not just a slideshow but you have it down

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more animation

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining cant wait for more

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[Asshats]

I liked it

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty good, it sorta reminded me of the old clock crew flashes, you did good on character work, i would suggest even going as far as adding the "TEH EDN" at the end hehe

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add the ending of old clock crew movies

~~OVERALL~~
Funny stuff just like an old cc flash

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