XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SWAP! ch.1]

awsome animation

~~REVIEW~~
wow im impressed with this, mainly the animation the character work was very impressive aswell, it could use some sorta subtitles though, this was an all around great flash with lots of effort shown on animation and great fight scenes, good character designs aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles if even that

~~OVERALL~~
Awsome flash great effort all around

~X~

grey-cap responds:

we figured it may be better if we just spoke on our native tongue and have subtitles instead as well, we tried to dissimulate our accent but as you can see it was a no go, lol
thank you for your words

[Fap to NG acts: Pimp]

hehe neat

~~REVIEW~~
hehe there was not much to this one it clearly needs abit more interactivity to this links and buttons and such, it was amusing though and takes you down memory lane to see the old acount, anyways glad to have seen this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more stuff like i posted above more stuff to do atleast

~~OVERALL~~
mildly entertaining nice trip down memory lane

~X~

[Perpetual Motion Boy]

Its notbad

~~REVIEW~~
I gave you a seven for effort you really do have a long episode here i think it needs to be broken down abit so its not so long but more into parts, the art was ok seems like you could detail your characters abit more and the backrounds were notbad, the animation was ok i thought

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some effects like when special things happen, cut the episode into parts if you can as it seemed to drag on

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining episode, could have more detail on characters

~X~

[a Grand Old Day]

cute animation

~~REVIEW~~
cute animation i like the silent film type still wish there was some sorta color there to give it a twist on the black and white style, and it needs more characters in there, the animation was well animated though and has a funny outcome so nice job there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add other characters and an ounce of color here or there wouldnt hurt at all, even for a black and white style

~~OVERALL~~
funny and amusing black and white style here

~X~

[OSAI Act2 p20]

Brilliant

~~REVIEW~~
This was a brilliant idea and i really like the orb and all after it dropped it tottally went random which was ok but just wish i could understand the story part of it abit more, work more on a streamline story

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More story would be nice but not as randome as you have here

~~OVERALL~~
Nice flash abit on the random side

~X~

UntoldEdman01 responds:

thanks, i know i have raploads to work on, yeah it was a segment for the thing, and i put a lotta work on it, gah i was tired, more story next time got it