XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[remington blumb's fantasy]

silly

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was abit silly but thats the idea right? you could have used more amusing stuff though, just to give it more humor, maybe some "RANDOM" animations would also be something that worked for this kinda silly flash anyways nice job, keep up the silly animations

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
entertaining but needs more humor, and possibly will benifit from some random humor and animations aswell

~~OVERALL~~
funny as it can be, needs abit more though

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[GIFT FOR ALL WAZZUP FANS]

haha loved it

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i love these types with the wazzup themes and this was entertaining and gave me a good laugh, maybe add a new twist to these ever growing styles of themes. yeah it needs something new the theme styles are cool, maybe make it so that someone kills the wazzup guy or something?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see you adding a whole new twist on these wazzup flashes with maybe the other people killing the wazzup guy because they thought he was anoying or something

~~OVERALL~~
Wazzup lol

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[nightmare :<>]

Strange and odd

~~REVIEW~~
Very strange and i didnt understand it but still props to you on this with the fantastic effects and lighting effects really stoodout, but the ending seemed to just end with no real result, it was all sorta confusing even the text on stuff, but for the mostpart it was fantastic on art and animation

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more an ending to this, it was just abit on the confusing side

~~OVERALL~~
strange but it was pretty fantastic

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[PhOeNiX AwAken]

Random and short

~~REVIEW~~
This was random and somewhat short the sonic dancing was amusing though then there was other random characters, then it sorta just ended, didnt make sense most of the time, so i suggest clean it up, and rework it abit

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more to this and add more with more characters and more less random so one can kinda understand it

~~OVERALL~~
abit random but still entertaining

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[Super Cheese Head Eps 1]

abit random

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, made me laugh abit, the randomness of the odd characters and random cheese and stuff at the start was neat, the character work was ok but the film lacked abit like in the backrounds, alsoyou need to add a stop action code in there so it doesnt loop over and over, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some backrounds, my only other issue with this one would be that it would "LOOP" over and over and you could fix that easily with an action script code >> Stop-Action-Code. checkout tutorials on the newground forums if you are unsure how to do a Stop-Action-Code.

~~OVERALL~~
I thought it was neat even if abit on the random side

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[Star Fox greeting card]

Abit plain

~~REVIEW~~
You had the right idea but this particular one seemed more on the plain side, you should have added more content, but also the colors seemed all wrong you need some darker and deeper colors, i know its a card and all but seems like it needs more visuals and even some interaction

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some deeper colors, more content and maybe abit of interactivity

~~OVERALL~~
notbad but could be better

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[Wrong Date]

Art style was ok

~~REVIEW~~
The art style of this was neat lots of color used, and the character itself was kinda odd, but seemed ok, the story was simple and somewhat funny, and gives a few laughs, as for the character design it was ok like i said but needs more toned down look to it, the humor of this flash was ok could use more joke type of situations though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
nice animation here, maybe tone down the size of the characters and add more jokes in this

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining but could use abit more work

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[Dance, Snake Man, Dance!]

needs more content

~~REVIEW~~
This little flash did enlighten me, the repetitive-ness didnt though, the backrounds were better then nothing but however all that said i do believe it could have used more effort along the side such as images and differant designs in the backrounds and maybe other dancers aswell along with the main one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more dancers, and add some other backround designs besides just the changing colors

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing dance

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auriplane responds:

Thanks for the review!! I'll try a lot harder on my next music video--I didn't really know what I was doign on this first one. Well, I still don't, but I'll try to learn before the next one :-) Or I'll collaborate with someone.