XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pikachu gets it!]

Can be improved more

~~REVIEW~~
It was alright but i felt this could have been animated abit better and with more effort on content and such, its a start though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could use more content and more effects.

~~OVERALL~~
it was ok but could be improved on

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[The Priceless Portal]

Could be improved

~~REVIEW~~
This is not the first i seen of this style and theme of the cards but you did present a good quality one, and it was funny so props to you on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it was alright but could use some more new twists to really make it something differant

~~OVERALL~~
Fun flash here

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[Jack's Fries]

This was good

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually good the audio is what got it for me but all around it was very entertaining, i liked it, hope to see more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thought it was fine as is

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash here

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[Moxo- The victim part1]

Its ok

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was ok, not great but ok, could have used more humor and more thought into it but for the mostpart it was decent stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think this flash could benifit from more humor, more stuff and jokes that really get you laughing.

~~OVERALL~~
notbad with this add some more humor and such

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[P.D.W. : Storytime]

It was amusing

~~REVIEW~~
This was amusing very random but thats what i liked about it, the artwork could have been smoother looking though, anyways nice flash work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on the art abit more, some detail here and there would be greatly appreciated

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing but still needs some improvment

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[Lars VS Napster]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was not the best of flashworks but it still had something for me it was the characters you presented us with, just could use abit more effort on detail and shading points, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like said, this could use some more stuff to enhance it somewhat like more detailed shading it will really bringout the artwork abit more

~~OVERALL~~
Good stuff i suggested a few points to improve on though, anyways nice flash here

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[Prof. Bobby Knight]

Haha good stuff

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was very good, i enjoyed it right from the start very funny and you presented a good animation here, You should go with the same idea but bring more humor into it, hope to see more stuff like this in the near future

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could use some more humor

~~OVERALL~~
A funny entertaining flash

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[Physics of a flash movie]

An ok tutorial

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was an ok tutorial on how animation works i thought it could have been better with better characters then sticks, and also you could do something with the backrounds as they were very bland.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backrounds could use some improving much more detail atleast

~~OVERALL~~
Its ok but needs more effort, nice idea though

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[Senseless]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Nice little animation you have here, seems the loop is small though you should think about adding more sticks maybe even differant color ones, anyways it was funny, hope to see more stuff like this one, good luck

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a longer loop and more sticks even differant colors, or what you can do to really improve would be to make character characters so as to get away from the stick characters.

~~OVERALL~~
It was interesting seems like it could use more stuff though

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