XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Worlds End Umbrella]

Interesting story

~~REVIEW~~
I really like how you gave this story some good depth to it the animation seemed to be alright the character cats were notbad either allthough you could have gave the cats abit more effort like more facial design and more shots based on them like some close up sand such, really for the most part of this flash it was about the story, and thats what i really liked about it, more effort on the characters next time though, in the end this was a very captivating story right into the end aswell, some improving would be like in the scene when the cats are running and you have the sunset in the backround the "TAILS" didnt move there you should make it so they are since they are running and all, anyways nice story here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more animation to the cats like arms tails and such

~~OVERALL~~
A cute story very pleasent to have seen

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k3ltr0n responds:

THANKS!

["Let's play"]

Wow amazing

~~REVIEW~~
wow ok first off this has some amaing quality to it not only in animation but the effects and animating aswell everything straight up to the storym you start off with a funny scene of "LETS PLAY" hehe which just happens to be the tittle and all hehe very nice coice there if i say so myself. now onto the story hehe it starts off good and the end result was not expected of that little puff ball hehe now this is where it ends you gave it a really good ending,, but it seemed too short, you could have really ran with this story maybe the puff ball is running from the big guy throughout the forest or something and in turn maybe you could make it so the bird is doing someting crazy at the end, anyways just a few ideas, good and entertaining flash you have here though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It needs more to the story it was just a quick end, but with all the great art it could have gone on abit longer

~~OVERALL~~
A great story abit short but i liked it

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[Uber Episodes #16]

hmmm ok

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well these are so so this was more random then anything else, i thought it could have used more effort in the menu design and less of the flashing seizure type but for what it is it did give me a laugh or two

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less random and more flash animation stuff

~~OVERALL~~
Random and amusing

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[Hook Line and Sinker]

colorfull and cute

~~REVIEW~~
Another good animation you have here, lots of great colors, and some smooth aniamtion from all the fish, the "MUSIC" was perfect i thought for all this, it just worked very well on this whole flash, once again this flash was "LOOPING" so once again ill say add a stop action code, ill explain that down below, you have a very smooth and inlightening flash here, there was alot of great use of colors and smooth animating i was pleased with this even with the looping and all, just work on the looping and all will be just fine, a slight file reduction wouldnt hurt either, anyways untill next time keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and fix that loop, this is an easy provess with some simple action script code, its called a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Another cute animation with nice use of color

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billyblob responds:

Hello XwaynecoltX,
First off, thank you for the nice comments. And also thank you for pointing out the looping problem. I uploaded a new version which stops and added a button to play. It should be approved soon. Thanks again!

[Battle of Washington D.C.]

Cute little flash you have here

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm ok first off i thought this was a cute little flash you had here i was not too happy about how short it was, buit it did turnout too be something funny and did gave me the humor i wanted, it was short and too the point, the "SOUTHPARK" like characters gave this abit more entertaining value, as did the jpeg backrounds, but all in all i did think it was too short at the end, and could have been much more with a longer ending introduction of new and more characters aswell as taking the flash into other scenes, so for what it is i did enjoy it, nice job on this short little flick

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well it needs to be longer, introduce more and new characters and add some differant backround scenes

~~OVERALL~~
An entertaining short

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[God of War 2 Theme]

It was ok

~~REVIEW~~
This was decent, very well infact i thought it could have used abit of compression though, but for the mostpart it was alright, it didnt jump out at me but istill enjoyed what you had but like i said it needs some comression, so work on that and all should be good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well compression is a start in my opinion ofcourse

~~OVERALL~~
Abit large in file but overall it was an alreight flash.

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