XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Half Cut Pants]

Random

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was very amusing the scenes moved very fast inbetween one another, the "ART" was very smooth and clean which gave it that fresh look, which was kinda nice, the humor was pretty good as it made me laugh abit, with all that said i feel this needs some sorta subtitles

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some sorta subtitles and maybe could be abit longer

~~OVERALL~~
Funny, random, colorfull, and entertaining

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RhysMus responds:

hardie harrrrr, thanks, yeah i thought subtitles would always help yet im all so lazy with that.

[Wyoming Incident lol'z]

Random

~~REVIEW~~
Well ill give you some points for random and you did put it together so there was some effort, but it could be cleaned up with somewhat less randomness, and more funny ideas and less on the flashy style make it more calm and collected so its not so scary at first

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i said just above a few things can be worked on

~~OVERALL~~
Randomlty amusing

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[The Duders: Ep. 3 Part 3]

Nice detail

~~REVIEW~~
You have something decent here the funny characters make it work, the extra color shades also make this work, aswell as the funny moments and shows you have put in some good effort for this one, so on that note nice job and make much more just like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To improve? hmmm keep the character style make more jokes and much more humor will arise

~~OVERALL~~
Funny flash of characters here

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TheCriminalDuder responds:

Thanks for the review.

Glad the effort shows. Ya also understand my style greatly too from what I read in this review.
I agree I need more jokes and less dialogue setting up the story more. I'll sneak more in and make it more crazy in ep 4.

[NYC meetup 2010 slideshow]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well its notbad a slideshow simple yet fun, the pics were nice to see and seems like everyone had fun and such, this was not a bad attaempt but i feel it lacks "INFO" you should add info with each image give the viewers an idea of what was going on, seemed like there was some pretty funny moments and a picture only tells part of the story, so some "CAPTIONS" would be great

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like i explained some captions would be just perfect but make it abit more then captions, put in what was going on in each pic with more detail

~~OVERALL~~
Fun pics here

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Parlux responds:

Thanks for the review, but like I said I don't have flash skills I suck but I'm learning I'm gonna start watching tutorials cause I really wanna earn some skills. Don't expect me to make my own series or anything I might just learn a few skills for some collabs here and there but I'm a spam artist at heart.

[Mortal Kombat People II]

This was nice

~~REVIEW~~
This was such a neat idea, i hope you make more episodes with more characters you guys did pretty well though, the fight was pretty intense, how long did it take you for this? anyways great stuff keep up the neat flash-mations

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effects would really work well on this like the smoke stuff and other neat things that happened in MK games

~~OVERALL~~
Funny flash cant wait for more

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DiegoNOX responds:

The recordings lasted about 3 hours ...
It was the time used to find clothing characteristics, think about how we would work and training before the original recording ...

The effects, I try to improve more and more ever.

Thanks a lot

[Super Mario Blitz]

Crazy

~~REVIEW~~
This was abit crazy, the animation and animations went by very fast, but it all seemed to flow together, there was lots to see, and you had some fast action packed with some pretty entertaining stuff, so nice job there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Slow it down just abit, so one can enjoy all the little animations

~~OVERALL~~
Fast and the furrous meets Super mario world

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[Rage Bot ep. 1]

You have something here, but needs much more

~~REVIEW~~
For starters you may want to make it longer with more chacters and more scenes and more backround detail, this one lacked alot of that and couldbenifit from those tips, also more details wouldnt hurt

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above a few tips could help to improve on this

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and short needs more, i pointed out a few tips that may help

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FlashMasterXD responds:

Waw, and your a detective or something!
Okay fine, I'll make Ep. 2 better!
There are actualy alot more charecters but I can't finish it, because I haven't got a Femail voice actor.

[Super Mario Galaxy 3 Ep.2]

Large size but still entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Sprites are nicely animated you had some nice features such as the "SPACEBAR" to go to next text that was very nice, the "SIZE" was abit much, but i did still enjoy this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and compress just a tad

~~OVERALL~~
Good flow of animation it was a good little flash here

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[Lunch!]

Lol very cute

~~REVIEW~~
Very welldone on this clay-mation, it was very "SHORT" but it was very entertaining, you made a cute story and the clay was very smoothly animated hard to do with clay from what i hear, but regardless it was very good to see such entertaining clay action

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggest to make more of this, cause the story is great but needs to be longer

~~OVERALL~~
Fun clay action

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