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[Mac Daddy Goombario 2010]

Its entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
It is entertaining kinda silly, the little character is amusing, i think this flash could be improved such as much more little characters like you have here, and more stuff going on like the backround was abit on the bland thats abit more you could work on say like if you make another anyways good luck

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It lacks in backround and seems too short so add more characters more backround and just more stuff going on

~~OVERALL~~
A short yet silly flash here

~X~

[Sweet Dreams "Teaser"]

Love it great artwork

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty amazing even for just a trailer of it and all, the art had so much good texture and the animation was smooth as can be, a good story content was right on aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make a full version or even continue it on in a series

~~OVERALL~~
Great art, and idea, keep up the good work

~X~

RatiganZombie responds:

Thanks, I really appreciate the constructive feedback. The first episode is in the works right now

[dead_headV2]

Random = Great

~~REVIEW~~
Props to you on the randomness of it and you have a great eye for "COLOR" the detail was abit much i thought especially on the very first animation, you should try working on less detail and more story

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less detail in my opinion

~~OVERALL~~
Random and amusing

~X~

apewithshape responds:

will do thanks for your input!!!

[Adv. of Juniper Lee]

It was cute

~~REVIEW~~
I was impressed with the ideas here of the kid screaming then it all turns to chaos, it really made it entertaining there, as for your artwork on the characters that was actually pretty good and you showed lots of effort on detail, the story could have gone into more "SCENES" though as it was mostly in that one, anyways good luck in newer stuff which i hope to see soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more scenes maybe she chases him somewhere and he keeps losing her while still causing troubl or something like that

~~OVERALL~~
Good story funny and abit of chaos all rolled upto in one

~X~

Piggybank12 responds:

This kinda ties in with what I said in the review below this one, but you're right, the one camera angle in this doesn't really work in the second half of this Flash. The second half of this actually used a scene from the show, just presented at a different angle (the computer). It didn't really work in the long run due to there not being much there in that scene to begin with.

[Samurai Pizza Cats]

Enetertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Well you have something good here, its entertaining i love the use of color and you really focused, on some nifty effects and with that it all seemed to come together, anyways nice flash you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would like to see more randomness it will really put it over the edge

~~OVERALL~~
Randomly funny

~X~

[The Sillies]

Strange is good

~~REVIEW~~
I give you some points for random, and strange which will both work well with this, you had some odd and amusing characters, i wish you added more too this like some "BACKROUNDS" that was the onlything it was lacking but you did make up in character design and funny random moments so keep up the strange flashes, i want to see more like this, so show us more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some backrounds and make some wacky and strange ones to go with the randomness

~~OVERALL~~
Funny, random and strange, all good stuff in my opinion

~X~

[The Weapon Collab]

Nice variaty

~~REVIEW~~
Nice variaty and differant shots and weapons, my fave is still the "GRANNY" one at the start, it did however set the mood for the rest, the sticks are ok but you should work on more character details,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For the sticks work on more details for there design like eyes mouths etc

~~OVERALL~~
Funny even with grvanny lol

~X~

[Wild Salmon in Trouble]

Amazing work here

~~REVIEW~~
You have some amazing animation here and i just love the detail in the texture of the fish, you could have the fish more life like with much more animation, such as fins moving eyes moving and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First off i thought this was abit much in size you should try and work on reducing it just abit or even run this episode in 2 parts maybe? and second the fish more life like with much more animation, such as fins moving eyes moving, something along them lines,

~~OVERALL~~
A really pretty flash with some awsome detail, could use a few fixes though, anyways nice job

~X~