XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Another Day On Newgrounds]

lol entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Heh well i did enjoy this for the entertainment value, the "VOICE" thingie could be abit more sharper and you could have other backround scenes throughout the film but for what its worth it was pretty funny

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add new backround scenes not just in the same one, and put abit more quality in the voice thingie

~~OVERALL~~
Another funny and random flash here

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[Roffie N' Afro 02]

Lol funny but still too short

~~REVIEW~~
Well again it was very very short, dont get me wrong it did make me laugh, but just wish there was more of it, either that or like i said before, put all these short versions into one flash like a colab or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put all the short ones in one flash

~~OVERALL~~
Another entertaining short

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[Roffie N' Afro 01]

Haha made me laugh

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this one made me laugh, the characters were actually good and it made me laugh so you did have some humor here just was abit short, maybe it should have had more small animations or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more to this one or add a number of small animations in this one so that its like a colab or something

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining but a tad too short

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[The Kittys New Friend]

Very cute

~~REVIEW~~
Now that was one darn cute movie, you had some simple art but it seemed to work well the adio also made this even more pleasent to watch, the simple art and cute story made it an all around good and pleasent flash

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest to make it longer and give it a more happy ending like maybe he/she meets another friend that is real or something

~~OVERALL~~
Cute and sad at the same time

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[Insurance sucks]

LOL Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was randomly funny very humoress, gave me a few laughs here and there, the mouth movment animation could be touched up, and taking your characters into more scenes besides just the one would be a nice touch, oh yeah and some subtitles even if it was some sorta yelling would also be nice

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More new scenes, longer animation, and some smoother animation on mouth movment

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but was abit short

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evilchickennugget responds:

Y'see, I had written and recorded the dialogue for a second scene, but I decided that I just didn't care enough about this project to add it in.
Also the mouthves are bad because, unlike my other animations, I animated the eyes in the same movieclip, so it was just so tiring that I couldn't be arsed to animate them properly.
Hope this puts the animation in a new light for ya.

[Half Cut Pants]

Random

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was very amusing the scenes moved very fast inbetween one another, the "ART" was very smooth and clean which gave it that fresh look, which was kinda nice, the humor was pretty good as it made me laugh abit, with all that said i feel this needs some sorta subtitles

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some sorta subtitles and maybe could be abit longer

~~OVERALL~~
Funny, random, colorfull, and entertaining

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RhysMus responds:

hardie harrrrr, thanks, yeah i thought subtitles would always help yet im all so lazy with that.

[Wyoming Incident lol'z]

Random

~~REVIEW~~
Well ill give you some points for random and you did put it together so there was some effort, but it could be cleaned up with somewhat less randomness, and more funny ideas and less on the flashy style make it more calm and collected so its not so scary at first

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i said just above a few things can be worked on

~~OVERALL~~
Randomlty amusing

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[The Duders: Ep. 3 Part 3]

Nice detail

~~REVIEW~~
You have something decent here the funny characters make it work, the extra color shades also make this work, aswell as the funny moments and shows you have put in some good effort for this one, so on that note nice job and make much more just like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To improve? hmmm keep the character style make more jokes and much more humor will arise

~~OVERALL~~
Funny flash of characters here

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TheCriminalDuder responds:

Thanks for the review.

Glad the effort shows. Ya also understand my style greatly too from what I read in this review.
I agree I need more jokes and less dialogue setting up the story more. I'll sneak more in and make it more crazy in ep 4.