XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cooking Napalm with Nick]

Entertaining flash

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, the onlything i dont like about this was the small buttons infact i dont like the butons at all you should make it so its more like a movie. let it flow, as the buttons just slow down the whole idea and flow of the flash you have here, so remove the buttons and make it more like a movie and it will look better and just be an overall better presentation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Remove the buttons so it flows like a movie more, more explanation above.

~~OVERALL~~
needs some fixing but is ok for what it is

[Hirby the snake]

Good but needs improving

~~REVIEW~~
Ok first off, good job on your first try at this, you do have some skills so welcome to the portal, now as for the art work its notbad, and not sure which program you are using but i do think that there is lacking some quality in the artwork, it alsmost looks like its from ms paint, a more better program might be paintshop pro to edot your artwork then back into the flash program now you have put the effort and the animation is ok but at times it seems too slow, so speed up the animation abit, and again ad those subtitles it will greatly help to flow along with your story here, the whole animation was pretty cute, but i thought, it was way too short and more material and content should be added, you do have something with the story but you need to vring all these elements together to make it all flow well together, so i stated a few tips here and there and i hope to see more of your work improved ofcourse, so hope your next entry is much better good luck on your future stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The prom you use for editing art can make a big differance something to think about there, also some "SUBTITLES" could be used,

~~OVERALL~~
Cute but abit on the short side.

~X~

blackriversidewolf responds:

Thank you very much i did spend alot of time on this flash and yes i know it is alot shorter then i would have liked but i value your opinion LOL the art work was orgianally drawn on a peice of paper then scanned and then painted usind ms paint ....... i will have to exsperiment with photo shop more ... and as for sub title i fully agree in using them next time thank you very very much for your review and your critism is greatly appreciated and i will most def take what you have said into effect and exspirement around much more

[Theatre Tool]

Brilliant all the way to the end

~~REVIEW~~
LOL Ok first off great "PLAY" button and its after effects haha that was brilliant so props to you there for an awsome idea, and second you get more props because the characters were very welldone and you gave them there own personality and humor, the whole flash was pretty funny i thought, allthough it seemed too short, except for the "END" damn that was not expected at all but ill give you props for even that lil end aswell heh now i will have a differant view of any movie experience :( hah j/k it was a welldone flash with lots of laughter, very entertaining scnes, but again it should be longer with more content and such, Now if i could suggest a few things, maybe you could ad more content, some more differant scenes, the ending was a blast heh, anyways nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad more content, more differant scenes and try and make it longer if you can.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and short but good entertainment.

~X~

JunkYardAnimations responds:

haha awesome thanks dude! i definitely have some longer flashes in store!

[SuperNova HeadTrip]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
A fantasic asortmant of visuals, kinda neat, some areas were bland. like you shoould have added some effects in the backrounds aswell, also i would like to see more colors, not just here and there but all over and like i said earlier more backround effort is needed, more detail and just more effort when it comes to backrounds and such, good luck though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more effects in the backrounds aswell and ad more colors all around along with some nifty effects to go with all that.

~~OVERALL~~
fun and entertaining to see but does need a few improvments

~X~

[Jackson B and the scooter]

Nice and cute

~~REVIEW~~
I thought this was a nice little and cute flash, good design of the "CHARACTER" good animating and good art and backrounds, only problem i really had with it was that it was abit slow getting to the end. so maybe thats the problem with-in the story so maybe speed it up there cut a few parts here and there and there you go a much better preentation, which in the end will sufice. so good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed up the story just abit, other then that it was notbad at all

~~OVERALL~~
good storry but seems to drag on

~X~

[Slash Returns: Ascension]

Needs work but is amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i must admitt this was pretty funny, the animation was far too slow i thought, you should have let it flow like a movie besides the super slow motion type or maybe that was the idea you wanted for it, but i do like the character so you did show some effort, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have it flow better in animation and some more animation would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining, needs some work though.

~X~

[Fap to NG acts: Ocelot]

Another one of these heh

~~REVIEW~~
Well these are kinda neat as it opens you up to the differant users back in the day atleast heh, i like how you did show differant parts of the profile so it was not too shabby, good job regardless

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
If anything could be improved on i would suggest have some animations in there not just the scrolling of the profile

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining profile and audio

~X~

[Clucky Ep9: The Sassin]

Very cute and funny

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this is probablt my first episode to see on this why i have not seen the others not sure, but anyways, Great "MENU" screen i really like all the color and nifty looking designs and the character is somewhat cute, i still think the bland white backround spots should also be filled just an idea or two, Ok so as i get into this you have some nice characters fresh and funny, and i like that you have a "RECAP" especially goes well for people like me who start on episode 9 heh, also some props to you for giving this some randomness to it, the characters and funny humor make this very amusing and cute so keep up that part of it, another thing to improve on this might be adding some "SUBTITLES" it would help also improving on the "AUDIO" aswell, This whole series kinda reminds me of the Eskimo bob series here on newgrounds, not sure if ya seen them but i love your style and love this series, i think i will check the others out soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some subtitles to start, some filling in of bland spots on the menu screen, and some more random humor would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall a funny and entertaining series i like it very much.

~X~

Brewster responds:

Hmmm... Subtitles. I never thought of that before. I'll definiteley add those in the next episode. Thanks!

[Let Me In]

Nice graphics.

~~REVIEW~~
Well the preloader took abit but after it got started, he play screen was rather "BLAND" you had some fancy text button, but the black backround just seemed abit too bland, maybe you could spice it up with colors and backrounds and other stuff thats related to you flash, just something that could improve on this even if its kust a little change, It might have even been nice to have the button change color when you roll over it, I like this flash you have here because it has some nice and smooth graphics, and even abit of nice effects like some blurrs here and there, so the story of this was ok but just seemed unfinished guess one should know more of the other story this may come from, but for the mostpart i liked it, just seems way too short, but hope to see more of your work with some good improving. Maybe next time we will see a much longer one and more content, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some menu button and menu upgrades, make the story longer and less confusing, and maybe a little compressing aswell

~~OVERALL~~
A good but short flash nice graphics.

~X~

UnderlingX responds:

Thanks a lot ill try and work on all those points. I'm not really sure this story would make any more sense what ever i tell you. It was just me practicing. I havent animated in like a year so i thought it practice graphics n stuff.