XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Goku. vs. Vegita. Cap - 1]

Funny flash here

~~REVIEW~~
Well the fight scene was notbad, i thought it was odd that it was "DBZ" characters on the super mario world "BACKROUNDS" but anyways it was a good fight the action was so-so, it seemed to be abit short, so maybe you could
add more content, also i noticed there was not much dialog thats also something i think could be worked on to better improve the outcome of this film

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
work on some more dialog from the characters, and some longer scenes in the flash, and maybe some differant backrounds

~~OVERALL~~
could use more effort but its pretty good sofar

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[EVIL STICKANIVEL]

Needs to be longer

~~REVIEW~~
This was very short so add more to it especially with the story, you do have an idea here you just need to expand on it, with dialog, much more depth in the story lots more in that area but start with the story, there is a number of stuff you can do with this, so work on some stuff and show how much you can do with it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well like i said the story does need some depth to it so start there

~~OVERALL~~
Needs some more effort especially with the story

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[When God was young.......]

Abit silly

~~REVIEW~~
This was silly very cartoony, but i liked it and it made me laugh so nice job there, The cartoony style is not bad but you need more of it, i would love to see it much longer though, you have the right idea with it being silly and stuff, now just add more content and all that good stuff, so give it a try it will prove to work out for the best. anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more content, more stuff happening and more differant scenes, make it longer. and more humor aswell.

~~OVERALL~~
Cartoony but was too short, needs more content, as explained above, it was entertaining though

~X~

[Britneys Proposal]

Could be better

~~REVIEW~~
Funny yes, but needs abit better "EFFECTS", subtiles would be nice aswell, and i wouldnt mind seeing a larger view screen on this, this could be much better and with those few changes i suggested would greatly help, nothing wrong with adding some humor aswell, anyways better luck next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the viewscreen larger, and add some subtiles, also some added humor would be nice, most of all it would be great if you worked on effects abit better.

~~OVERALL~~
needs some improvments but its a start in the right direction.

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[Join the fight]

Needs visuals

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this was interesting The "MUSIC" was really good though, but your flash had mostly all text and a black backing thats actually ok because its the perfect combo for just text, now this was more of a msg then anything else, and while thats cool that you are trying to get your point across, i think you should have done more with it, like you should have added some "VISUALS" like stuff of the what you were talking about of what you dont like or do like, but as said before you just put text and people tend to get bored of that style and such, and you have to give your flash some appeal so others wont get bored of it so easily, and even that you can get people interested in your msg, but anyways, i kinda found this flash hard to review as there really was not much going on, but i do hope the few ideas i suggested do help. anyways good luck. Hope to see something new in the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some visuals, and more then just text as your msg, also it just starts playing you may want to ad a play button and stop action code so it doesnt just start like that, just a few ideas that could improve on this, maybe even have some visuals of the type of flashes you think are bad

~~OVERALL~~
A text msg of some sorts, kinda silly.

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[The Hurricane: U R]

This was good

~~REVIEW~~
well this was entertaining, And i liked the awsome artwork, It really showed to be something neat and shows the effort in this iswell, the humor was ok also but i thought you could have shown more humor there, anyways very nice and somewhat funny flash here, keep up the good work, i look forward to more if you still make stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things would be to work on some more humor on this and maybe add more of the awsome art that you did present in this

~~OVERALL~~
its funny but could use more effort in humor, anyways nice job.

~X~

[Feces: A short film]

This was really short, needs effort

~~REVIEW~~
You have a really short animation here, it also loops so thats an easy fix, i explain with more detail but basicly, it will stop the looping its called a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" you can do a search for it in the flash forums for help if you dont understand much about it, also you flash was way short you may want to think about adding more to it or making a number of short flashes so its not just one single one, thats an idea that you could try, The animation, was also too fast you want to slow it down just abit, also you should change up the "CONTENT" abit it might be abit much for some, so these are just a few things to think about, So think of new ideas, put much more effort and really put stuff into it like effects maybe a story of some sort and see what you come up with, good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short i would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece, These are just a few things that could help to improve on this.

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash, had some off content but it could use some improving, i explained a few ideas hope that helps abit.

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[Icehockey: Sudden Death]

Love it

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was awsome, even if it was abit short, but i use to play this alot and its a classic to see, so glad you made a short out of it hehe, its acyually pretty amusing and i got lots of joy and good entertainment out of this as im sure many others will aswell, you did ok here and i thought more humor and more entertaining value could have been in this but you did an outstanding job. nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and maybe with abit more story to it, some extra added humor something that all will come to enjoy

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining and short, could be a tad longer if you ask me

~X~

[Fix! my Computer]

Somewhat funny

~~REVIEW~~
This was somewhat funny but needs more improved humor, like more jokes, more stuff that is more on the "RANDOM" side of things, just more stuff that will grasp the user and give them a laugh or two give it abit more effort with humor, aswell as abit more content on backrounds and more animation, other then that it was just ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some random humor would be nice, mmore effort in that area

~~OVERALL~~
Needs more humore but is pretty good for what it is.

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