XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Convenience Store Life]

Amusing too short though

~~REVIEW~~
Now here was one flash that was really short, maybe too short if you ask me, but anyways more about that later, the animation is actually entertaining just too short, you have some good characters, and somewhat animation like with the guy passing with the gun, also the movie just started no play button or anything, so you may want to add a preloader, also a stop-action code so it doesnt "LOOP" but so that it will start on the click of a play button, Now i must say i had fun with this as it was amusing and i like the three differant steps you showen and that was kinda funny, the characters were neat but why no mouths? another suggestion might be to have more realistic gun shots of something, and more smoke, but anyways good little short here could use some improving but overall i was entertained with the outcome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest adding a "PLAY" button and a "REPLAY" button, I would Also suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see

~~OVERALL~~
funny and amusing abit too short i thought.

~X~

[Sex in Church]

Amusing, can be improved though.

~~REVIEW~~
LOL now i have to admit this was a pretty funny "COMIC-STYLE" Toon you had even liked how it was in the comic style, but before i get to that and the rest of it, i think the "BUTTONS" you have here should be better presented, they are better then most with the hover over color change but you still need to give it somewhat of a design with putting atleast a "PLAY" written on it somehow it would be nice, but anyways, as for the content of the flash it was funny and at times got to be abit much and thats something you actually may have to be concerned about for other people who may not like, but for me i found it somewhat funny, now as for the "ART" i think you could have done a better job say with the sticks you might get better results with more character designs and such, also some more use of color in the backround, there was a number of things, cant go into all of them but what i have suggested here and below are things that will really improve on this so give it some thought, so i found this to be amusing and somewhat funny, i did suggest a few fixes for its improvment but anyways good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things as suggested are backround color and scenes, not just the white bland ones, have the characters more animated like a movie and not so much as a comic style, also wouldnt hurt to have play written on the buttons, Make Characters not the stick kind, while this does take more time and effort but it will make your flash better and with more details for the characters like color, hair clothing some facial detail, it will improve on this and your characters, something to think about for this or your next film, for improvment. So try and work on a few of the suggestions.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall it was an amusing flash but still has lots of room for improving, good luck.

~X~

[BM Baked Beans]

entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was entertaining, the "ART" was actually pretty good, i thought this could use some subtitles though, and while it was entertaining some more added humor would be nice, it was amusing but other then that it was alright, just work on those few things and practice practice, it will all show up very well.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few things mentioned starting with some subtitles, and some more humor.

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing and entertaining but still needs more.

~X~

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 047]

Another entertaining adventure

~~REVIEW~~
Now with these pokemon ones they are a little better with the pokemon viduals, but again like the others but still like that there is more color in this one over the other ones, regardless i like them, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad some animation more then what you got going on and other scenes to go with.

~~OVERALL~~
Another entertaining hitler adventure, needs more though.

~X~

[Happy Sack Loop]

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was more cute then anything else, kinda on the short end though, but you could improve on this like you could make it bounce in alot more areas more scene selections and overall differant places to give the flash itself a more longer and fuller feel, but i must say yyou made some nice animation with the art and especially the animation which i like so props to you just wish there was more there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more scenes let the character jump all around into new scenes and stuff

~~OVERALL~~
needs more scenes and more places to jump

~X~

skychase responds:

Cheers for the review mate, i'm gonna make it longer now. I'm gonna do some extra training on the 12 principles of animation, so i hope the next one is gonna be better and more entertaining.

[100k dollar laptop]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
first off this was prett neat with the opening loader page i like how you really gave it some design and detail and abit of art detail and it all came together for one nice piece keep up the good work in that area, now as for the flash itself, it seems too short, the artwork and humor was ok but still way too short, i could possibly see this in a colab of sorts but does need abit more attention there, everythingelse is pretty good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it longer or add other shorts along with it for a more entertaining value

~~OVERALL~~
Nice use of clocks and some ok humor but could be longer