XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Walking the Walk]

Its decent

~~REVIEW~~
I must say this was very "ARTISTIC" and i love how it just starts off right away and all the walking is great, it has all sorts of differant characters walking back and forth, the music reall fits the animation of walkers, this was just an overall artistic piece and the music was very flowing of the visuals, so really awsome job on this awsome piece, now if i could offer any advice, it might be to change up the backround scenes so that it changes every once in awhile, even throwing in some clickble easter eggs or something maybe on unque characters or something, other then that this was pretty good, great stuff, keep up the creative wheels.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was pretty good, very artistic, it does lack multiple backround scenes, and even unique characters, possble making some easter egg options wouldnt hurt either.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall a good creative flash needs more backround scenes though.

TheBoogley responds:

thanks! You're decent! :D

[Infinity Blad]

Fantastic toon

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok so i had a big chuckle with this one, this was really short and thats ok, but its a well put together flash here even though it was short, you had some great voices, some great humor and actually some good logic on the whole game idea and such, the voic was fantastic and fit the evil lord very well but may i suggest some "SUBTITLES" while im not english it is sometimes hard to understand everything said not a big deal or anything but it would be a nice feature, but anyways great job on everything, even the spinning of the head in the end, this was a great toon made me laugh, just wish it was a tad longer. you should even try making lots of these shorts and put it into one flash one after another, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested to have some subtitles, as an extra feature, also making them longer and or adding more shorts too one flash.

~~OVERALL~~
Very fun, amusing and entertaining toon, great joke here

[Evil Dead Ejaculation]

This was decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hehe so this was amusing especially the little "INTRO" i love how from the intro it gets right into stuff, as for the evil dead theme that was neat, so the whole, "DARKNESS" scene was cool, but maybe instead of all dark have a dim light somehow, would give another perspective on things and such, the voices and sound/FX was pretty good and made for an amusing story here, was notbad at all and i got a few laughs from this, you should have had more scene stuff from the movie though, maybe even a window with some scenes or something, other then that this was pretty good, very entertaining if you ask me, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested above some other scenes like from the evildead movie, and some more light in the darkness just a little as to not take away from the whole darkness idea.

~~OVERALL~~
Kinda short but was still pretty good and amusing, it was cute.

Psychopath responds:

Yeah, the animation is bad and the darkness scene could use the most amount of work. Fixing all the problems with this is comparable to trying to repair a condemned house, just when you had one big problem fixed, you have to face another series of big problem.

One at a time I guess.

[OBO2]

Randomly funny

~~REVIEW~~
So first off this was "INTERESTING" to say the least, had some nice portion at the start with the colored parts with the fox coming out of the guys mouth, so there it started to get random, and then it really got bazarr from there on, i like thw whole idea of being a silent film and all but seems like you went a whole nother rout wishc was ok since random tends to be pretty funny, as for improving on other stuff, maybe some more color added throughout the flash, and possibly even more random moments, other then that this was pretty good and i got a good amount of humor from it so nice work and somewhat good effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more use of color, and even more use of the random factor could make this even more amusing.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random, got a few chuckles from this one.

Joelasticot responds:

~~REVIEW~~
Lots of spelling and typing errors make this review difficult to read. Also, just describing what is going on in the Flash isn't particularly helpful to the author(s).

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try using splitting your review into sentences next time so that reading it isn't such a chore.

~~OVERALL~~
Poor review, will not read again. 3/10

[Dreams I]

Enjoyed it

~~REVIEW~~
A good start to the flash i thought, even the loading didnt take much long, so that was a plus, and congrats on the 2 awards with underdog and daily thats always impressive and goes to show the people do enjoy this one, so i was impressed with that, I lovethe narating of this it makes the dream come alive and you presented it very well, the voice seemed abit low though, not hard to hear, so make an option for subtitles just to have it, doesnt hurt in the longrun, and the file was already small so it would only help it, the "VISUALS" were pretty good and flowed perfectly with the naration, The cute like characters were nice aswell so nice job on the effort on this, so i was pleased with this flash the story and visuals aswell as having abit of humor in there aswell, nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing much but some smale fixes and changes maybe just adding some subtitles would probably be the onlything,

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash here with some nioce visuals and good effort all around i enjoyed this.

[Fable III Exp. Teaser]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
OK first off congrats on the awrad or i should say on the daily and weekly award, not everyone

can do that and you have done just that, was not a big download so thats another plus from this

side of things, The flash gets right into it, i must say that the "VOICES" are pretty awsome on this, and really seem to work very well especially with the jokes and funny bit, now as this was just a teaser it was pretty amusing, im thinking some subtitles wouldnt hurt with this one, it was short but was fantasticly good and it just beaing a dream was funny too, there was not much scenes and ended before you could get into more, so maybe abit more of info and scenes for motr of the humor you already have with this one, anyways it was pretty good and quite amusing i did get a good laugh from it, and i look forward to more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
subtitles could be one nice option to add in there, also noticed it was a tad short, maybe make it longer with more scenes and even more info on what to expect on any full version,

~~OVERALL~~
So it was pretty amusing, not too long, great characters and gets right into it, pretty good stuff if you ask me.

[Not that kind of elf]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
Well i must say that was a "CUTE" animation, it was not very long but still had some humor and gave some chuckles my way, so great job on the humor side of things, the cartoon was short as i said but i still liked what you presented, maybe think about putting a few shorts together to make it one larger combonation of short amusing flashes would be interesting, I would also suggest some "SUBTITLES" not really needed but its a good nice option to have on any film, so good animating nice art style with a soft tone of colors, and the audio was great aswell, as another tip you could add a menu page, but again not needed but just another nice option, so anyways great stuff love the humor love that it got right into the action, but besides all that this was a pretty funny short flash, nice effort on your part.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more shorts besides just the one, Some subtitles wouldnt hurt either. and maybe a menu as mentioned.

~~OVERALL~~
A short yet welldone animation.

[Stupid Jedi]

Short and quiet

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was really ok, but you had no {SOUND} and while it did not have sound or even some music, you had some {TEXT-BUBBLES} towards the end you did have some sound just a {SCREAM} that was ok but im thinking you should still have more sound/music in this it would make it much better. I also noticed the text bubles went too fast, maybe slow down the text bubles just abit. also you want to give your flash some more story to it, and another thing i noticed was that the flash LOOPS, add a stop action code to stop the looping, but other then that it was a start in the right direction, and about the scream at the end is that a {HOMER} scream lol, anyways an ok flash but does need some fixing up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have more sound/music in this it would make it much better. slow down the text bubles just abit. adding abit more of a story to it would be nice aswell.

~~OVERALL~~
A silent film could use abit cleaning up but its a start.