XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Not that kind of elf]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
Well i must say that was a "CUTE" animation, it was not very long but still had some humor and gave some chuckles my way, so great job on the humor side of things, the cartoon was short as i said but i still liked what you presented, maybe think about putting a few shorts together to make it one larger combonation of short amusing flashes would be interesting, I would also suggest some "SUBTITLES" not really needed but its a good nice option to have on any film, so good animating nice art style with a soft tone of colors, and the audio was great aswell, as another tip you could add a menu page, but again not needed but just another nice option, so anyways great stuff love the humor love that it got right into the action, but besides all that this was a pretty funny short flash, nice effort on your part.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more shorts besides just the one, Some subtitles wouldnt hurt either. and maybe a menu as mentioned.

~~OVERALL~~
A short yet welldone animation.

[Stupid Jedi]

Short and quiet

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was really ok, but you had no {SOUND} and while it did not have sound or even some music, you had some {TEXT-BUBBLES} towards the end you did have some sound just a {SCREAM} that was ok but im thinking you should still have more sound/music in this it would make it much better. I also noticed the text bubles went too fast, maybe slow down the text bubles just abit. also you want to give your flash some more story to it, and another thing i noticed was that the flash LOOPS, add a stop action code to stop the looping, but other then that it was a start in the right direction, and about the scream at the end is that a {HOMER} scream lol, anyways an ok flash but does need some fixing up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have more sound/music in this it would make it much better. slow down the text bubles just abit. adding abit more of a story to it would be nice aswell.

~~OVERALL~~
A silent film could use abit cleaning up but its a start.

[BlunderCats]

Short and quiet

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok for an older movie this is notbad and i like the idea of {BLUNDERCATS} also nice {INTRO} with the thundercats changing into blunder cats, not alot of people put effort into the loading page so props to you for showing that effort, the button was ok but would have been nice to see more of a {SLEEKER} and more fancy button, lol the flash was funny, very good dubbing allthough it could use some {SUBTITLES} haha man this is some good stuff this is something i would love to see today so nice job indeed, so it was pretty cute and an entertaining flash some ok cussing there and some bleeped scene was great this flash made me laugh and i had lots of fun with it, great job indeed, just a few things that could improve on it are explained below. so untill next time keep up the funny and random flash making.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the button was ok but would have been nice to see more of a {SLEEKER} and more fancy button, This was not hard to understand, but it would be a nice option to have some subtitles, gives the flash just that bit more effort, and incase anything was missed you have the text right there.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining idea, very amusing

[Forever Lost]

Short but pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now i like how this starts off with the {CHIMES} i think it is, and the slow {CREDITS} the flash and the story is ok, kinda dark, the character was ok and all the differant scenes, are notbad eiether it really does give off that dark feel to it and all, it seemed more like a {TRAILER} though, and while it was kinda on the short side you still presented some good scenes, i believe the best parts of this was the mixture of dark scenes and delightfull chimes making it all cometogether, so with that said some improvments can be made like, making it longer, adding more characters, mixing in other sounds, like from the {AUDIO-PORTAL} thats if you still make stuff since this is an older flash, but regardless this was pretty interesting, with abit more effort it can be eceven better,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some improvments can be made like, making it longer, adding more characters, mixing in other sounds, like from the {AUDIO-PORTAL}

~~OVERALL~~
A good little trailer with a dark feel and nice tunes

[Presidents's Phone Call]

A blast from the past

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i remember this now that i look back on it, it does seem abit on the short side, and i noticed it {LOOPS} so you may want fix the loop and since its so short you may also want to maybe make it longer or with these short types you can add a number of short flashes in one flash for like a collab of sorts just a few ideas to make it longer and have more depth, anyways it was pretty funny and takes you back to the past when this did happen haha, just i found it too short, as another idea you should have had her talk to add more to the joke and all, and just more ideas to make this even more funnier and more entertaining for all, so hopfully i have suggested a few ideas that would really improve on this with the ending note i liked it and had some good chcuckles, keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a few things could be cleaned up in this one, such as I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to , and You could place a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and a true blast from the past, great movie even if its as short as it is.

[Yoda, Drunk on the Set]

Funny and entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
haha well i got a few good laughs out of this one, but it was very short, it could have been better, the yoda talking was ok but i think with some {SUBTITLES} it would have been better to understand him and all, Add more design and color to the starting and ending menu screens, as they were abit {BLAND} with the white backrounds and such, also making it longer and or adding more short animations would be another nice tip for making it longer so while this was somewhat entertaining there were a few tings you could have done to make it better, it was entertaining just abit too short, so work on those ideas for better improving such as, subtitles, longer flash and so on, other then that it was notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more design and color to the starting and ending menu screens, add more to the animation as it was very short or you can make it into a flash with a number of short flashes, This was ok but it wouldnt hurt to add some subtitles, not because anything was hard to hear or anything but because its just something extra that would make this abit better to understand and its like a nice little feature for your flash here,

~~OVERALL~~
Very short but still somewhat entertaining

[Canadian Crucifixion]

Entertaining and short

~~REVIEW~~
lol ok this one was kinda interesting you may want to fix up a few things like the looping? you can easily fix that with a stop action code, the film was somewhat entertaining but seems like it could have more but especially fix up the looping, it was also kind of short, so maybe you could add abit more story to it, also the text bubbles were ok but a nice tip would be to have a {FANCY-FONT} in there it will generally make it look better, as for the {MUSIC} it was ok i thought something more quirky could have worked better with it but it was still ok with me, so fixing up stuff like a stop action code, and longer maybe more story, even more scenes to it would be great, and as i said a change of music somehow, anyways good short flash hopefully my few tips may help in this and newer flash you may be working on, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add a stop action code, to stop the looping, a longer more in depth story would be nice, more and new scenes would also be something to think about.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining funny and short

[The Real Matrix]

Short but entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
ok first off good little flash you have here, the characters were pretty good, i didnt like the {BUTTONS} and having to always click on them, just let it roll like a movie does without the buttons, The {FART} secne was amusing you should have added some sorta smoke effects in the backround from it though that would have been nice, the animation was just too short, you may want to make it longer somehow, and as for the music it was ok but sounded abit distorted, so those could be some things you could work on, so a good little flash somewhat old but still has something going for it, and with the tips above you could make it much better, thats if you still make stuff, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for the buttons just let it roll like a movie does without the buttons, some extra effects could have been added like the fart scene, the film was sorta short so you may also want to add abit {DEPH} more characters more story more stuff going on.

~~OVERALL~~
A short film with some slight action and ok humor.

[Kill All Dickheads]

Amusing kill game

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was interesting a fun game/flash of killing, now these old styles were always entertaining, the character was ok, and the kills were ok too, i thought with the {WEIGHT} one could have used more effort maybe show more {GUTS} and stuff, aldo the backrounds were very bland you should have had some wall or design back there. as for the {BUTTONS} they were ok but could use abit of sprucing up, they were ok and did the job though, the game and it was a game because it was interactive, it was all ok, very entertaining but like i said could use some more {EFFORT} on your end, so good stuff here, hope to see some changes or better effects on future projects, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i thought with the {WEIGHT} one could have used more effort maybe show more {GUTS} and stuff, aldo the backrounds were very bland you should have had some wall or design back there.

~~OVERALL~~
A good kill death flash game

~X~

[dragon ball stick]

Needs work

~~REVIEW~~
Ok well not sure wehre to start off with this one there is alot more {EFFORT} that is needed to improve on this, not sure if this was just a test but i do understand its older first of all you should think about adding Story, more characters, other scenes, newer and flashier effects, and you should fix that {LOOPING} its easy to fix explained below, some backrounds aswell, just needs alot more effort but if you are going to make these really {SHORT} flashes then you should think about adding other short animations along with it, other then that it was a fun and cute very short flash but still needs more more, and much more effort, anyways good luck on anything new you may be working on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
first of all you should think about adding Story, more characters, other scenes, newer and flashier effects, Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, aswell ad some play and replay buttons. Since you had Stick characters, I suggest making more Character like characters with full color facial details, This will show lots of effort in your character design, it tends to take more effort but the results will pay off alot. it being so short you should do one of two things, and that would either make the flash much longer or add other short flicks along with it so that there is a variaty of short films and not just the one thats so short.just some helpful tips on improving on this.

~~OVERALL~~
A very short film with sticks battling, needs more effort