XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Evil Dead Ejaculation]

This was decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hehe so this was amusing especially the little "INTRO" i love how from the intro it gets right into stuff, as for the evil dead theme that was neat, so the whole, "DARKNESS" scene was cool, but maybe instead of all dark have a dim light somehow, would give another perspective on things and such, the voices and sound/FX was pretty good and made for an amusing story here, was notbad at all and i got a few laughs from this, you should have had more scene stuff from the movie though, maybe even a window with some scenes or something, other then that this was pretty good, very entertaining if you ask me, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested above some other scenes like from the evildead movie, and some more light in the darkness just a little as to not take away from the whole darkness idea.

~~OVERALL~~
Kinda short but was still pretty good and amusing, it was cute.

Psychopath responds:

Yeah, the animation is bad and the darkness scene could use the most amount of work. Fixing all the problems with this is comparable to trying to repair a condemned house, just when you had one big problem fixed, you have to face another series of big problem.

One at a time I guess.

[OBO2]

Randomly funny

~~REVIEW~~
So first off this was "INTERESTING" to say the least, had some nice portion at the start with the colored parts with the fox coming out of the guys mouth, so there it started to get random, and then it really got bazarr from there on, i like thw whole idea of being a silent film and all but seems like you went a whole nother rout wishc was ok since random tends to be pretty funny, as for improving on other stuff, maybe some more color added throughout the flash, and possibly even more random moments, other then that this was pretty good and i got a good amount of humor from it so nice work and somewhat good effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more use of color, and even more use of the random factor could make this even more amusing.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random, got a few chuckles from this one.

Joelasticot responds:

~~REVIEW~~
Lots of spelling and typing errors make this review difficult to read. Also, just describing what is going on in the Flash isn't particularly helpful to the author(s).

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try using splitting your review into sentences next time so that reading it isn't such a chore.

~~OVERALL~~
Poor review, will not read again. 3/10

[Dreams I]

Enjoyed it

~~REVIEW~~
A good start to the flash i thought, even the loading didnt take much long, so that was a plus, and congrats on the 2 awards with underdog and daily thats always impressive and goes to show the people do enjoy this one, so i was impressed with that, I lovethe narating of this it makes the dream come alive and you presented it very well, the voice seemed abit low though, not hard to hear, so make an option for subtitles just to have it, doesnt hurt in the longrun, and the file was already small so it would only help it, the "VISUALS" were pretty good and flowed perfectly with the naration, The cute like characters were nice aswell so nice job on the effort on this, so i was pleased with this flash the story and visuals aswell as having abit of humor in there aswell, nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing much but some smale fixes and changes maybe just adding some subtitles would probably be the onlything,

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash here with some nioce visuals and good effort all around i enjoyed this.

[Fable III Exp. Teaser]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
OK first off congrats on the awrad or i should say on the daily and weekly award, not everyone

can do that and you have done just that, was not a big download so thats another plus from this

side of things, The flash gets right into it, i must say that the "VOICES" are pretty awsome on this, and really seem to work very well especially with the jokes and funny bit, now as this was just a teaser it was pretty amusing, im thinking some subtitles wouldnt hurt with this one, it was short but was fantasticly good and it just beaing a dream was funny too, there was not much scenes and ended before you could get into more, so maybe abit more of info and scenes for motr of the humor you already have with this one, anyways it was pretty good and quite amusing i did get a good laugh from it, and i look forward to more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
subtitles could be one nice option to add in there, also noticed it was a tad short, maybe make it longer with more scenes and even more info on what to expect on any full version,

~~OVERALL~~
So it was pretty amusing, not too long, great characters and gets right into it, pretty good stuff if you ask me.

[Not that kind of elf]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
Well i must say that was a "CUTE" animation, it was not very long but still had some humor and gave some chuckles my way, so great job on the humor side of things, the cartoon was short as i said but i still liked what you presented, maybe think about putting a few shorts together to make it one larger combonation of short amusing flashes would be interesting, I would also suggest some "SUBTITLES" not really needed but its a good nice option to have on any film, so good animating nice art style with a soft tone of colors, and the audio was great aswell, as another tip you could add a menu page, but again not needed but just another nice option, so anyways great stuff love the humor love that it got right into the action, but besides all that this was a pretty funny short flash, nice effort on your part.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more shorts besides just the one, Some subtitles wouldnt hurt either. and maybe a menu as mentioned.

~~OVERALL~~
A short yet welldone animation.

[Stupid Jedi]

Short and quiet

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was really ok, but you had no {SOUND} and while it did not have sound or even some music, you had some {TEXT-BUBBLES} towards the end you did have some sound just a {SCREAM} that was ok but im thinking you should still have more sound/music in this it would make it much better. I also noticed the text bubles went too fast, maybe slow down the text bubles just abit. also you want to give your flash some more story to it, and another thing i noticed was that the flash LOOPS, add a stop action code to stop the looping, but other then that it was a start in the right direction, and about the scream at the end is that a {HOMER} scream lol, anyways an ok flash but does need some fixing up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have more sound/music in this it would make it much better. slow down the text bubles just abit. adding abit more of a story to it would be nice aswell.

~~OVERALL~~
A silent film could use abit cleaning up but its a start.

[BlunderCats]

Short and quiet

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok for an older movie this is notbad and i like the idea of {BLUNDERCATS} also nice {INTRO} with the thundercats changing into blunder cats, not alot of people put effort into the loading page so props to you for showing that effort, the button was ok but would have been nice to see more of a {SLEEKER} and more fancy button, lol the flash was funny, very good dubbing allthough it could use some {SUBTITLES} haha man this is some good stuff this is something i would love to see today so nice job indeed, so it was pretty cute and an entertaining flash some ok cussing there and some bleeped scene was great this flash made me laugh and i had lots of fun with it, great job indeed, just a few things that could improve on it are explained below. so untill next time keep up the funny and random flash making.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the button was ok but would have been nice to see more of a {SLEEKER} and more fancy button, This was not hard to understand, but it would be a nice option to have some subtitles, gives the flash just that bit more effort, and incase anything was missed you have the text right there.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining idea, very amusing

[Forever Lost]

Short but pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now i like how this starts off with the {CHIMES} i think it is, and the slow {CREDITS} the flash and the story is ok, kinda dark, the character was ok and all the differant scenes, are notbad eiether it really does give off that dark feel to it and all, it seemed more like a {TRAILER} though, and while it was kinda on the short side you still presented some good scenes, i believe the best parts of this was the mixture of dark scenes and delightfull chimes making it all cometogether, so with that said some improvments can be made like, making it longer, adding more characters, mixing in other sounds, like from the {AUDIO-PORTAL} thats if you still make stuff since this is an older flash, but regardless this was pretty interesting, with abit more effort it can be eceven better,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some improvments can be made like, making it longer, adding more characters, mixing in other sounds, like from the {AUDIO-PORTAL}

~~OVERALL~~
A good little trailer with a dark feel and nice tunes

[Presidents's Phone Call]

A blast from the past

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i remember this now that i look back on it, it does seem abit on the short side, and i noticed it {LOOPS} so you may want fix the loop and since its so short you may also want to maybe make it longer or with these short types you can add a number of short flashes in one flash for like a collab of sorts just a few ideas to make it longer and have more depth, anyways it was pretty funny and takes you back to the past when this did happen haha, just i found it too short, as another idea you should have had her talk to add more to the joke and all, and just more ideas to make this even more funnier and more entertaining for all, so hopfully i have suggested a few ideas that would really improve on this with the ending note i liked it and had some good chcuckles, keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a few things could be cleaned up in this one, such as I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to , and You could place a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and a true blast from the past, great movie even if its as short as it is.