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[Adrellia Village #1]

So I thought i would checkout this little series of yours seems like you have alot of episodes here wich is notbad at all, I like the fact that these are not real big in file size so thats a good start sofar, Graphics was lacking in some areas, mainly in the characters they were more on the "SIMPLE" side of things, but still coulduse for some greaphic enhancments like more shades, more small details and more personality to the characters. Voice acting is always a touchy one, the ones you had were so-so, and could use more depth and quality in them, more emotion and more sharper sound quality in the voices it may have been the lip syncing aswell, but thats something to look into, The plot was simple and seems like it could use more depth more stuff going on more things to keep the viewer really interested in your movie, Give more info on characters, places, and when, these are something that could have more depth to them. The "JOKES" and humor to this movie was notbad but also seems like you can put some more effort there in bringing more humor and really just bringing some laughter out from the film itself, So i understand this is just the first episode in along series of episodes i do look forward to seeing more of them, this particular episode just needed some more excitment something to really set the tone for the rest of the series.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was a pretty nifty flash movie here there were some tweaks and changes that can be addressed, as mentioned throughout the review aswell as here, you can put that extra improving for an overall better outcome with some more quality added, so here are some things i found lacking and or needeing some changes. so First off the voices as mentioned need some work The characters could use some "DETAIL" aswell, It was abit short, maybe later episodes have more detail, depth and much more plot to the "STORY" Then there was the jokes wich could have been executed much better,

MistyE responds:

thanks for your review. this flash is pretty old, episode 39 is a pretty good example of the type of thing i'll make now. it was based on a novel i wrote, and at the time, my main focus was a serious story-driven series rather than a humorous one.

thanks again.

[Adrellia Village #11]

Kind of short

And I am delighted to get started on another review of this flash movie, the work does show you putting the time and especially some effort to it, This is kind of interesting so it doesnt bore you but does actually keep you wondering what may come up next so thats some things i notoced right away about this flash. Animation was a concern here there was some various old tricks used here, but seems like some of those styles are outdated, and the animation hurt for it so those are some things you may want to ironout more perfectly. The story in this particular episode didnt really take off much and seemed more as a stale state, so thats another area that could use more depth and detail in. The "FIGHT-SCENE" was kind of impressive though and thatmight have been the strongest part of this episode. also noticed the music seemed to fit with this one. but anyways Adrellia Village series seems to take a liking with me as it is drawing more interest from me and i do look forward to more in the series, So as this review comes to a short end, it was a decent flash of good portion, could use more stuff here and there and some smoothing out on some areas, but i thought in the end it was just right and fittng with all that was happening so it was alright with me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I was amused with this flash as it brought some entertainment value, and some other elements that brought stuff together but then there was some weaker points that could be worked on, adn adressed more heavily, and with alot more effort, So if i do suggest any advice and or ideas they would help on these flashes great i think, they do have potential, so its a good sense of entertainment. But anyways without furture adu here are some of those ideas to improve on. Well in this case the animation could have been better and smoother, The "STORY" could be worked on in this episode as it was rather dull and didnt givemuch to it.

[Short and Sweet]

A bit short but it was still kind of amusing.

Now here we have a good little toon, nothing on a negitive side but something interesting to keep my interest throughout the flash from start to finish, i found it inlighting, entertaining and even a bit amusing. So as just mentioned this was rather short, buti still found some entertainment value, Now it could be longer because the content you did have, had alot of amusing points, im not sure i saw any real negitive points needing improvment, most of this was pretty good so nice effort there, i do look forward to more of your works though, as this was notbad and kept me interested and didnt bore me, it was highly amusing, anyways keep up the decent flashworks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Im always looking to help on a few improvment ideas here and there, Not all flash needs new ideas but some still need some improvments so hope you will take some of my ideas and use them to the best of your skills, More content would be a start, And make it longer keep it going with the stuff you started this with, you have some good points good with that.

[A Goomba's Life Ep 5 (S2)]

Notbad at all

That was very nicely done. There was alot of great value to this Movie, but there were some weaker points that could be addressed aswell, that will be explained later but as for a start to this, this was pretty impressive to start. So as for a sprite flash this was actually notbad, and its nice to see some sprite flashworks now and then so glad i had a chance to see some of this, Backrounds looked pretty nifty and that goes along with the graphics as the detail did show up somewhat in this, Voices were notbad, actually better then i expected, so there was some good quality there, and really made it more enjoyble throughout the movie, Story was notbad either, I found it to be interesting but again could use more depth and even more understanding to it all as some parts were just too off the wall, Overall I found this to be a pretty good movie had some areas where it can be worked on, more explainedbelow, but for the mostpart it was pretty good i thought.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some improvments that could be made, here are a few suggestions, some effort on your side will only make this even better. So give these options a try. But i would suggest some ideas of improvment i would start with the story seemed kinda crazy at times and didnt know what was going on, You may even want to add some "SUBTITLES" making it better to understand on that aspect of things aswell,

DemonicDragon93 responds:

Thank you for review. The movie does have subtitles but i made it a option for someone to drag there mouse over it. if they wanted it. I'll identify that more closely in the next episode

[Quiet]

This was funny and Amusing

A good flash here, it was amusing and entertaining especially when the guy shoots baddie and he is like boom that was funny and amusing, So this was pretty good of a flash it had some sadness in there and some good emotion, so nice work on bringing that element to the story, it really shot it up good, and as for the "MUSIC" that was stand alone on its own and really impressed me so you had some good choices here all around and really was glad i saw this, and hope to see more from yousoon, anyways keep up the good work. on one last note woould love to see you continue on this style maybe with some sorta seres of segmants, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was pretty entertaining had lots of stuff, i would like to see you continue it on with more of a random feel also.

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash here some good visuals, some nice action, and even some emotion, a good flash and good ending here.

[Skyrim - CotN]

This was amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was kinda interesting, it has its amusing points, now i must say it did have some racisim "JOKES" and while that always gets a good humor value sometimes it doesnt but must say you did present some good "HUMOR" with this one, and ill have to checkout the rest of the series but i must also add that this one was pretty amusing, Also nice to see that others liked it alot as it did win an daily award so congrats there, The ending of this was pretty neat and probably the best part leading from everything else. so there you presented all the areas of humor, story and cliffhangar wich all seemed to come together in a good random yet somewhatof a story for some good humor all around, anyways nice job all around, So in the end this was a pretty good piece if you ask me, i got a few good laughs out of it, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here is where i suggest some improving points, well to be honest it was pretty good as it was, and had all the elements of a great flash, maybe making it a tad longer wouldnt hurt, but for the most of it, it was right on.

~~OVERALL~~
And overall this was funny with a bit of racisim. but still amusing.

cyotecody555 responds:

Thanks for the review bud

[The Flying Scotsman]

Interesting

Kind of short flash here but it was entertaining, i love the simpsons so this was amusing, the thing though was this probably could have used some sort of subtitles to better understand it all, but it was funny, and also the art was real simple maybe if you had abit more effort like with the trees and not use alot of gradinents it could be somewhat better, also it being short was a downer, maybe if you added some more content and longer would be some more effort, in making it better, but for the most of it, it was amusing and entertaining, keep up the good work. below are a few suggestions of improvment hope it helps.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This could use some subtitles, its a nice option to have and with his accent it would be pretty handy, The art was rather simple, you should put some more effort like dont use so much gradients but you more of a sketh like to it add some textures and form the trees and back scenes abit better, This was also kind of short you should take the time to stretch it out with some more stuff going on more scenes and more jokes of course.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny yet short flash that funny character from the simpsons will make us all laugh with this short toon.

[1984]

Ok this was interesting.

As mentioned above this was interesting now i dont know much of this topic but seemed to have alot of odd stuff some propaganda stuff and so on, The "MUSIC" seemed to be o but there were some other areas that could use more effort, So This starts off slow and picks up and the music really pushes this to the limits so that was a plus, This seemed way too short though, you should have extended it longer with more content and more visuals also seemed more like trailer of sorts, but in the end this was notbad, and you did push the effort on this so it was notbad at all and i enjoyed it, allthough it was hard too understand as it was mostly visuals and music so kinda like a music video, nice job on the effort though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This could be better, This seemed way too short though, you should have extended it longer with more content and more visuals,

~~OVERALL~~
Kinda reminded me of a music video, but was still amusing.

[TOME Short: Hackers]

Decent flash

So i did get some humor from this, but almost seems like you pushed on that, thats ok, only problem there is it showed too much, but it was ok and i did get, First of all congrats on the daily feature thats always a nice plus, Size of the flash was notbad either so again props on the condencing and even with all that it was not a bad flash at all, infact i kinda liked it, also like mentioned seemed like the humor portion was pushed, on the voices could be better or more orginised, this film could have used more build up in what was comming up, may it be fear. or even a joke, The animation was pretty good but could be smoothed out so it flows better so with that all said this was a pretty good flash, i enjoyed it and had fun with it, but could be spiced up with those few things that i said above, anyways good job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
voices could be better or more orginised, Also could have used more build up in what was comming up, may it be fear. or even a joke, and animation was pretty good but could be smoothed out so it flows better,

~~OVERALL~~
So overall this was an ok flash but has some areas it can be improved.