XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Title Pending]

lol

ok here was another amusing flash with strawberry clock, and some random stuff, the "AUDIO" was pretty funny though, but I could see you improving on this just a tad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more character visuals, and more different audio would be a plus.

~X~

[Strawberry's Quest CD2011]

Amusing

Well this was amusing and it goes back to 2011 thats pretty dated but this was still funny, kind of short though, the quality was not too bad, could use a few changes as stated below.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Entertaining as this is, you could stretch it out longer and have more scenes also some subtitles would be a good start.

~X~

[What is Steam Power]

lol

Lol this was very amusing while its just the one scene it was still pretty entertaining, I think with this one you could have had some moving scenes in that back window so that it does seem like they are moving. but other then that this was notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could have had some moving scenes in that back window so that it does seem like they are moving or driving down the road.

~X~

[1976: Issue 1]

Nice effort and idea.

So my Opening Remarks you seem to have Executed things pretty good, Now this sort of reminds of lots of people gathering for a big event of some type, And they want to see what you offer them but you have shown them some good effort. And I was pleased to see this it had some nice elements and visuals. A comic style in flash form is pretty awsome and you have outdone yourself here good quality stuff. You have Devoted good effort to this, and I will Definite be back for more of your works, so keep up the good works here. A Refreshing submission if I say so, the target market of viewers should enjoy this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This is where we come to some ideas and tips for improving on your fine entry you have here, but you have outdone yourself here today.

~X~

[assfucking naruto hentai]

ok

Well while there was not too much here there could be some added animation maybe some subtitles of the song words, maybe even some changing backround scenes. but other then that it was an alright image with song.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
there could be some added animation maybe some subtitles of the song words, maybe even some changing backround scenes.

~X~

[Hot Blooded Hero]

Always entertaining

So starting out on this flick, It is easy to see that you have the knowledge and craftsmanship of a good flash artist here and you do know what you are doing as it shows, so nice efforts here. So Perhaps there are even more endeavors comming our way. This flash and the others like it have always shown some fresh art style smooth animation and interesting story A few things that would be great for this flash and it would show with some more effort so below are a few ideas that really could push this flash to the extra efforts, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvement points are always needed in any flash, but it sometimes comes off as negitive feedback but I will say that you have a good presentation here very well done.

~X~

[UNICORNS]

lol this was cute

Well I must say this one was rather cute lots of sunshine with this one, and the effort shows off in this one, maybe some other scenes and whatnot.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more scenes or backrounds would be a plus.

~X~

[Weebl and Bob : Gooshine]

Awsome

So this reminds me of something that goes around and around again only because each new stop it stops at is something fun and entertaining. So nice job sofar and hope you keep up this kind of flash works. Its certainly a good start to something of interest and you have the right Material to make it a success. Very good work here as always with this series you have always brought out the freshest of characters and animations. There is always ways to Grasp the audiance you do Showcase the Overall best parts of the flash Add details and always make the best flash movie you can and in the end it will be well worth the effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have some good content thru-out this entire submission, and there is room for improvments. But to be honest i dont see any need for any changes its just right.

~X~

[Giant Fish Stain 3]

Entertaining well this one was interesting

Well I must say this one was a strange one but it did have an entertaining value and the animation was notbad at all, very random and maybe that was a positive here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you put it all fourth here maybe a stop action code so it doesnt loop.

~X~

[FAUX - trailer]

Very nice animation here

And so the portal always has alot of shiny like flashes, And you never really know whats what, But I am glad that your flash is the real deal, It has a true shine and glow. Awsome piece here with some great visuals and even better animating seemed a tad bit short and could use some form of dialog, but maybe those are things you can work on. Ok well this is pretty obvious that you have put the effort fourth, It was a pleasent and Refreshing experience of a flash and you must of had a great experience in making this aswell so nice job there aswell, I just hope to see more flash works like this from you soon, but anyways untill then keep up the decent and unique work, oh and great flash it was amusing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I guess there is alot of things that could be done with this, for improving, And I dont want to be the one of bad news with suggestions so I hope you take my suggestions in a positive way and not in a negitive way. But what I take away from this film would be, a tad bit short and could use some form of dialog, among other things it was pretty good.

~X~