XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Neverhood]

Interesting stuff

Well I guess this is more like a slide show then anything else but it does give you an idea of what the game is about, I wouldnt mind if you added more "INFORMATION" on what the game is about though not just visuals, but nice clay slips here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more information on how the game is played and whatnot, not just visuals.

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Ratcaller responds:

Oh boy! I honestly DID NOT expect anyone to still watch my stuff anymore xD
Thanks for the review anyways, despite being it almost historical now.

[Good Time Merry Boys 5]

Silly

Well this one is silly but thats what made it stand out I like what you do have here, even if its simple and silly and the "MUSIC" really played well with this fit the content very well, anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well with this one I wouldnt mind seeing some better graphics and maybe some smoother animation, or atleast speeding up the animation somehow.

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[Mario's Castle Calamity]

Entertaining

Well this was pretty entertaining, I like all the different clips and all, and you added some really funny ideas and whatnot, always great to see mario bros stuff never gets old, anyways nice stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Only thing I would do here would be to slow down between clips.

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[X-Mas: The Unwrapping]

Wow

Wow that was really crazy but it was a crazy good, you had some nice blood effects and whatnot, really a good flash more like a trailer would be nice to see a full version and whatnot.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Full version going live would be a great improvement maybe some more effects along with the already great blood effects.

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[Zanta Claws II]

Good work here

First of all decent flash submission here, There was alot I liked about this flash, There could be more Focus on some other areas and could use more improvment on those areas, but you do have a good Concept and idea here, I was pleased with most of it but there are some areas that could use some more work. But anyways nice effort sofar. so here we have a good quality of work, nice story, great animation, and great view shots and cant forget awsome voice acting. A decent flash here, pretty interesting lots of nice little details here and there, could have some more extras and maybe some fixes here and there but overall this was pretty entertaining and amusing flash, but regardless keep up the great work. and if I have suggested any ideas try them as they will help indeed, on this decent flash works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so this kind of reminds me of a big concert of sorts and after the big event like this Flash could use some clean up and fine tunning, So as Advised on a few Proposed Changes here is what I came up with. To be honest you have created something really good here and at this time there is no need to change it with anymore improvements.

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[Metropolis Schmirkit]

Cute

lol cute well this was amusing its a pretty good short flash here, and while it was short it was a good animation, everything was well done. I would love to see the "LOOP" changed anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this Flash "LOOPS" now thats actually an easy fix, you can use a stop-action-code from the action - script and there are actually lots of easy to understand tutorials here on the site to view on how this is done if you dont know, but anyways the stop-action-code will stop the looping, but dont forget to add some "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons for the viewers to restart viwing the flash.

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[Cpt Falcon Checkup]

lol funny

Haha ok that was funny and pretty amusing and actually you caught me by suprise but you did well and the effects were pretty good, I can see this being longer with more of a story to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More story added, and making it a tad longer.

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[Sasuke shorts [part 1]]

Entertaining

Well this was entertaining the "CHARACTERS" could be better designed but maybe that was your intent, all the little scenes and clips are cool and kind of funny.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More design on characters more detail.

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KKING1 responds:

I made this years ago

[There She Is!! final step]

This was pleasent

So as I watch this flash submission There are various Nifty little tings that I thought really stood out and made it much more enjoyble for all to see, especially me and as i write these words i find it even more interesting as the submission continues on, so good effort shown and I am really liking the Focus You put forward. This here was a very pleasent flash the black and white style was great and I like the soft touces of color here and there, and you really kicked it up a notch with the music from pleasent to some action, very nice job here. Ok so there was a lot of nifty things about this movie type, All throughout it ofcourse, some things could be cleaned up but dont let that stop you from your flash taking flight with new ideas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here we go with ways and ideas to improve, always the hardest part of the review for me as I dont want to nit pick on every detail but try for some of the basics, But there were a few spots thats could be cleaner and smoother. I like what you did with the small touches of color you should for sure ad much more of that, as it makes for a nice effect for the movie.

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[Ackbar Movie : The Movie]

Hmmm interesting

Now I must say that the music was great here top notch all the way, took awhile to get to the actual movie but it was nice seeing "KRAMER" in there lol, a fun movie here with lots of characters made for some good humor.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more celeberty types that always makes this even better.

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