XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[French Erotic BIRTHDAY!]

lol funny

Well I was never expecting this kind of content from you but this was amusing and entertaining and I like the "CONTENT" it was funny, the song itself was nice and a good effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a larger view screen and what not. to show more of the visuals.

~X~

[Orange and the Locktaur]

Nice intro

Well notbad here, nice intro aswell, as for the film itself it was pretty impressive one of the better clock movies fresh colors and a fun story, so nice work, and nice seeing lots of different scenes and clocks. I really like the ending.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A little more shade and details in the clock characters to give them some depth.

~X~

[Raw Latex 3]

Very impressive

Ok here this one yields some good fun and it is entertaining and thats a plus, so nice job on this one not perfect but this is alright with this reviewer, besides I did enjoy this one. This was rather entertaining the "CHARACTERS" are great and the voices were even better, great use of ideas here, nice job indeed. This was a great Opportunity for me to review this you set a Standard and I did enjoy what you have here now just would like to see more effort all around, so good luck with all that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok so this was pretty interesting maybe I can Recommend a few ideas such as just adding some "SUBTITLES" would be a plus here.

~X~

[fishy eater]

Um ok

Well that was kind of short but I must say it was still somewhat entertaining and whatnot, good for a laugh or two. and it does show some effort on your part.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this longer, and more content for sure.

~X~

joshboy101 responds:

yeah i would of, i just wanted to finish this thing before i go back to school

[One Punch Man in Two Minutes]

This whole idea is nifty

So with this kind of flash I think the best you can do is be creative and design new stuff you have done that and more, you have created the right foundation now just maximize on that along with the passion that drives that, you have made something we can all enjoy. This whole idea of these two characters are great, and the voices are pretty awsome, maybe adding some subtitles would be the last touch on this. Also nice work on the humor of it all, There was some enjoyment from this, It, was actually Refreshing, but anyways good luck on your future endeavors, I will keep an eye out for more of your stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so we come to the improvments portion of the flash submission, wich is not always the easiest but I guess I will start with saying that maybe adding some subtitles would be the last touch on this.

~X~

[the fluffy collab]

Notbad

Well here was something notbad at all, somegood action some random moments, maybe onlything I would change up here would be adding more detail in the backrounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail in backrounds as there was some bland spots.

~X~

[wade is my hero]

These are amusing

Well these are amusing, the animation was kind of slow, but I really like the "DETAIL" you put in some of the art like the trees and backrounds, so nice effort there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe make the "VIEW-SCREEN" a tad bit larger maybe you can show more of that detail.

~X~

[wade for president]

Hmmm

Well this was sort of interesting the artwork was actually notbad, but this seemed kind of short even if it was a trailer or not but it was entertaining regardless

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe make this a tad bit longer, For it to be a decent trailer you should give facts and scenes of whats expected in the full version some action scenes would be nice but most of all give it enough content that will entice the viewers to want to see the upcoming full version, just a little here and there in a trailer to really grasp the viewers attention.

~X~

[STARBARIANS - Episode 1]

Very entertaining

Another reminder here on how passion drives every step and brings success a long way as you have done here, and this is right on there with all the other positive flashes out there, So keep doing what you do because I have enjoyed this one.
The animation and character work was great the "HUMOR" was pretty good aswell, a good animation here and very good quality here nice job Maybe some improvments can be made but I will post that in that section of the review, There was a few instances here and there that can be better, Good luck on your future endeavors.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we go with trying to make it better then it is with a few improvments sometimes this is the hardest points of suggestion as sometimes some flashworks dont need touching but in some cases they do, so I will do my best here to pinpoint a few ideas and tips of improvment for either this and other projects, so try a few new things and let it shine. The only thing this really needs is maybe some more special effects, and maybe some added subtitles, but other then that this was great stuff.

~X~

[CODE GREEN]

Notbad

A nice sprite action flick here, fun battles good scenes, there was some lacking areas like some bland spots in the backrounds and more special effects would be a plus.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More special effects, more explosions and more stuff happining in the backrounds.

~X~