XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[D2FX: Juicebox...]

Nice story

Some of the stuff we could see here looks pretty good, others where in need of some more effort There is some good Potential it all though, Some stuff cane have a Refined effort about it all though. This actually reminded me of the old "ESKIMO-BOB" stuff lol, Well I have to admit that this was actually cute and the "CHARACTERS" are smooth-lines the subtitles was a nice little touch here, and overall you had a cute little story so nice job all around. So I keep a phrase for a certain few and that is appetite for creativity and thats exactly what you have created with this flick right here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So think about some of the ideas suggested in the review. I like this production, hope to see some improvments soon. go with ideas may they be good or average ideas maybe one or two will help and improve on things. This was not short by any means but I can see it being longer with more of the fun story you already have.

~X~

StupidlyEPIC responds:

This story is 100% true. RayG did give me a juicebox and I loved it. Then he had to hunt the biggest juice box of them all. But bigger doesn't always mean better.

[Office Spider: Episode 6]

This was notbad

you have raised the bar dramatically with everything that has been going on in this flash entry, There could be some better stuff and the way you did stuff better Utilised with the way it was presented, But honestly with all Criticisms a-side This was acually pretty decent and i had some good fun with this, so I was pleased with how this cameout. This was a decent flash and I like the concept of a spider and whatnot the other office people are funny and some of the jokes are pretty good aswell. Now this was something kind of different but thats actually what I have enjoyed about it, Now ofcourse its the ending now, But I can really see you building onto this As this was a decent piece of work, but anyways best of luck to you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its always good to be Prepared and while you dont need a Makeover on this flash but as a Bonus there could be some slight improvments, No this is not perfect, but what it does have is some good potential you do have a few things you can improve on, and all it takes is a few more ideas to run with, so here are a few. Maybe adding some more sound/fx with the action scenes, more music that changes up when in action scenes aswell.

~X~

danomano65 responds:

Thanks! It's been a long time since I worked on an Office Spider. The character ended up on the Newgrounds banner at San Diego Comic Con! I met Tom Fulp and attended SDCC. It was awesome. Since then I've been making my graphic novel series, which you can read at http://www.verdacomb.com and I also have a second graphic novel series here: http://www.tofuzilla.com! One day I may make a longer Office Spider that covers most of these ideas, except with better animation of course- and original music. I appreciate your review! You can also check out music for my comic here: https://soundcloud.com/entergalacticdj

[Ackbar : Star Day 2.0]

UM ok lol

Lol well this was the shortest one to date I believe but it is amusing and while it was very short it still gave me some laughs and whatnot, some more content would have been nice though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs to be a little longer you have something good here but could have more content.

~X~

[Ackbar : Quest Saga 1]

lol Sprites

Haha this was neat being sprites and all that made it differnt and somewhat unique, this one was actually another very short one maybe you ran out of things to say and do but the animation was not too bad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Subtitles more subtitles and even more subtitles lol

~X~

[FC Tells Da Truth]

Interesting

So here is a good flash submission, but could use some extra effort of work, now I will go into some of those details later on improvments section, I thought this flash movie entry was kinda neat, and had some positive points and so on, Now dont get me wrong this is actually a good Discovery, Just need to Tweak some things here and there. While the film was not too long but it showed some good animating and I really like your use of color and randomstyle of art it in a away was artistic so nice style here. It's hard to offer a lot of critisism on this, And once again we have another decent flash, theres not alot I can say to improve on this but there are some things that could be cleaned up as menioned and below, but for the most of this its pretty good and I liked everything I saw here, Andlook forward to seeing more of this, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
there is potential here, But keep at it and always improve on your ideas so hope some of these may help to make your idea much better. So lets get some of these ideas across the board. Could be longer, more strange and random characters would be a plus aswell.

~X~

[Nosferadow]

This was notbad

I like the sprites and the effort really does show fourth on here and I like the idea of a sort of story here, nice animating aswell, so the effort was here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a faster process in the story element.

~X~

[BiteyCastle Christmas]

Amusing

It was all rather simple looking. But maybe thats the key with this one as the simple look was actually very catchy and made it kind of nifty, it was not too complicated and seemed to just flow well from one spot to the next, so I would say that the animation was notbad and this was a decent submission. While this was very short it was still interesting and the animation was very smooth as was the art aswell, an all decent flash here. This was a Definite good submission it had some good outcomes and some good overall quality about it, It was Intensely good and amusing so props to you on this, You showed good Focus and direction on this entire piece,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok so here is a big extravaganza, and as always with something big like this including your movie here There is room for some improvment and so in this help section i may have some advice for you in that area. Making this longer and with some added content would be a big plus.

~X~

[Ackbar : That's My Fulp]

Different

Lol ok it was nice seeing tom and wade, and this was the collection page epsiode nice job there and congrats on the award, I think well deserved.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The flash was short, you should think about adding much more content, making it longer maybe if you dont want to go that rout you could add a combination of short flashes all together, almost like a portfolio of sorts, but you should do more then just have a really short toon and nothing else.

~X~

[Ackbar : FACE HOUSE]

ok

Well this one started off different wich was nice and refreshing, you actually have a tad more story in this one but again could be longer, I like the naration on this, very funny stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well for this one since you added extra stuff maybe this one just needs some subtitles.

~X~

[Ackbar : Mama Luigi]

Haha

LOL funny dont get me wrong these do bring some humor just wish they were longer and I love the "SIGNFELD" theme in this one, also could use some subtitles aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles for that extra effect.

~X~