XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Planetoid - Original]

Artistic

So nothing really dirty on this one all good and clean work, And it shows with each new scene that comes up, And I hope you do continue on that element, As this was a pleasure. This was pretty artistic and the "ANIMATION" was smooth and delightfull, this also really works with all the music and smooth animating and you seem to tell a story with this submission, so nice effort here. And that was that the ending was good as we do come to the ending of this and the submission I was more impressed with how you ended it so good job there and hope to see more of your interesting and entertaining work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a great production of a flash, Here in this review I have been discussing the good and the bad, But to be honest I didnt find any bad but maybe continue on the story as it was interesting maybe in a mini form of mini flashes or something.

~X~

[Niggour HENTAI]

Good artwork

You have some good and smooth artwork here with this one, and you gave this one some funny humor, the "VOICES" could use some more effort more acting on your part but still good overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Voices could be better more realistic.

~X~

[HOT SANTA HENTAI]

um ok

So this one was very random, lots of random jpegs, and some below average artwork, but it was funny and amusing, kind of short though, other then that it was alright for a laugh or two.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I did think you over-used the images like there was tomany of them, and might have been better with some of your own drawings and art, even if it takes some time to do them would show more effort in the end. Also making it longer with more original content would be a plus.

~X~

the-starwolf responds:

hey xwayne nice to get some reviews from you on my old work, the mass using of picture was actually what i wanted to do hmmm

[Sketched - Therapy]

This was cute

And so in a big event or show when it ends there is not much left, But with this movie you have left an echo of all the effort and that shows off well with this one. This was a rather cute animation, the story played out well and made for some good humor, This could be great with some subtitles, nice artwork and character designs though. Overall this was a good flash submission, there was some Enhanced details that made this worthwhile and you gave it some good momentum, and it kept me interested so you did have the right stuff and such, Now dont get me wrong there is still plenty of room for improvments and more enhancments but for the time being its pretty good I thiught.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
What can I say or even suggest to improve on this, Not sure I have anything to suggest as you coverd all the basics, This could be great with some subtitles, but thats about it,

~X~

[Saturday Morning Watchmen]

Well this was interesting

This was un expected the characters the animation was pretty good old like colors like old comic style and the audio was fantastic, it was all around a decent piece of work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well could be longer maybe even go into some stories and whatnot.

~X~

[pootytang is mutated fag]

Ohmy

Well what can i say these are interesting to say the least, all the jpeg and flashy images is amusing but probably over used, so I would suggest adding more natrual art characters and backrounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More artwork and less jpegs would be a big plus.

~X~

[pootytang eats dildos]

These are um..

Well not sure what to think of these they are amusing for sure seems like little effort but again they are funny and amusing, they could be longer.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as said just above could be longer more content maybe less jpegs aswell.

~X~

[Pootytang drinks cum]

lol ok

Well these are funny and amusing that sounds quality is still pretty low maybe a better mic or find a better recording, something along those lines.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The sounds quality could be worked on.

~X~