XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ackbar : Star Day 2.0]

UM ok lol

Lol well this was the shortest one to date I believe but it is amusing and while it was very short it still gave me some laughs and whatnot, some more content would have been nice though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs to be a little longer you have something good here but could have more content.

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[Ackbar : Quest Saga 1]

lol Sprites

Haha this was neat being sprites and all that made it differnt and somewhat unique, this one was actually another very short one maybe you ran out of things to say and do but the animation was not too bad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Subtitles more subtitles and even more subtitles lol

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[FC Tells Da Truth]

Interesting

So here is a good flash submission, but could use some extra effort of work, now I will go into some of those details later on improvments section, I thought this flash movie entry was kinda neat, and had some positive points and so on, Now dont get me wrong this is actually a good Discovery, Just need to Tweak some things here and there. While the film was not too long but it showed some good animating and I really like your use of color and randomstyle of art it in a away was artistic so nice style here. It's hard to offer a lot of critisism on this, And once again we have another decent flash, theres not alot I can say to improve on this but there are some things that could be cleaned up as menioned and below, but for the most of this its pretty good and I liked everything I saw here, Andlook forward to seeing more of this, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
there is potential here, But keep at it and always improve on your ideas so hope some of these may help to make your idea much better. So lets get some of these ideas across the board. Could be longer, more strange and random characters would be a plus aswell.

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[Nosferadow]

This was notbad

I like the sprites and the effort really does show fourth on here and I like the idea of a sort of story here, nice animating aswell, so the effort was here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a faster process in the story element.

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[BiteyCastle Christmas]

Amusing

It was all rather simple looking. But maybe thats the key with this one as the simple look was actually very catchy and made it kind of nifty, it was not too complicated and seemed to just flow well from one spot to the next, so I would say that the animation was notbad and this was a decent submission. While this was very short it was still interesting and the animation was very smooth as was the art aswell, an all decent flash here. This was a Definite good submission it had some good outcomes and some good overall quality about it, It was Intensely good and amusing so props to you on this, You showed good Focus and direction on this entire piece,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok so here is a big extravaganza, and as always with something big like this including your movie here There is room for some improvment and so in this help section i may have some advice for you in that area. Making this longer and with some added content would be a big plus.

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[Ackbar : That's My Fulp]

Different

Lol ok it was nice seeing tom and wade, and this was the collection page epsiode nice job there and congrats on the award, I think well deserved.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The flash was short, you should think about adding much more content, making it longer maybe if you dont want to go that rout you could add a combination of short flashes all together, almost like a portfolio of sorts, but you should do more then just have a really short toon and nothing else.

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[Ackbar : FACE HOUSE]

ok

Well this one started off different wich was nice and refreshing, you actually have a tad more story in this one but again could be longer, I like the naration on this, very funny stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well for this one since you added extra stuff maybe this one just needs some subtitles.

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[Ackbar : Mama Luigi]

Haha

LOL funny dont get me wrong these do bring some humor just wish they were longer and I love the "SIGNFELD" theme in this one, also could use some subtitles aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles for that extra effect.

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[Robotic Octopus Snowman]

Kind of short

I was impressed with this animation, there was some Lavish attention to detail and that certainly Was a plus on the effort side, and made for some good visuals and brings in some good quality about this whole piece so really nice job there, and while I continue on with thid flash movie I find it to be a good quality experience and look forward to more. This was actually really good allthough it was a tad short but you did have some very good smooth art and that made up for the shortness, a decent little holiday flash here. So the content and effort you have put fourth here really solidifies the commitment and passion that you have put in these kinds of movies types and you really bring some joy to the fans of this type of flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
But anyways here are some random, or even new options of ideas, and use it go with it, make it work and make your submission shine from it, Despite some issues there are some good quality points about this. Only thing here would be to ad content to stretch it out just a tad more, other then that it was pretty impressive.

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[Ackbar : Halo 3 Beta]

Hmmm

Well that was another interesting I do like the humor on things here it really makes for ome amusing fun but these would be much better longer and whatnot, so try adding more something atleast more story.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And well I have probably said it a few times needs more story and content.

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