XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Out Of Control]

Nice

So I thought I would checkout this little Movie of yours seems like It does have some potential to go even further then it represents, It has some decent quality to it, has some clever points, has both weak and strong points. This was a really great song and I feel it fit the content, some of the art style could be cleaned up somehow, more shades and details would also help. I am thinking that with this prticular song you could have had more of some darker art color tones and whatnot, anyways nice flash here. Now here is another piece of flash that has some decent Potential you are a Visionary of this Industry in the way of bringing some good effort along with some nifty ideas to the screen.

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I Encourage more improvments and allow this to have more Exposure and it will effectively come out just right. You will make it to the top for sure, but before you do you may want to ad a few things aswell as make some changes and it will be all for a positive change so go with some changes. the art style could be cleaned up somehow, more shades and details would also help.

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[Ackbar : Eviction]

Another funny episode

But these are way too short I would suggest adding a lot of these short flicks and put them all together in one flash works, but thats just an ideas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A very short toon you have here, too short if you ask me, you can add more shorts to this one so that theresmore to see, but just the one short seems like a waste, besides with more shorts all together more people will enjoy it much more, and allowing for a better outcome and score.

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[Hey Osvald]

LOL

Ok this was funny and I found it to be pretty amusing with just a little bit of content, so my advice here is ad more content give something to build up to the punch and whatnot, more story all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
making it longer and having a bit more of a plot would make it that much better just a tad more content would be great here, its ok but just needs more.

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[Ackbar : Epic 1 of 3]

Funny

Lol ok this is funny and amusing this is very random and silly lots of stuff going on and honestly im confused but its funny, could use some subtitles though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well could use some subtitles for sure.

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[TT: 009 Mr. Johnson]

Nice concept

The quality of the video is first rate, as is the animation style, There are some areas that you can Tweak, making for a much more positive flash experience. and this had some amusing points and i myself have had a good experience viewing this movie, it has offered alot of fun Visuals, so to start off this review I must say it was a decent entry to start with. These are pretty cool, I like that there are different animations with this and the voices are pretty good and you bring a lot of talent to the table. And here I like what you have made and enjoyed, Now I wouldnt call this the movie of the moment, But it does have its positives and a few negitives, but more positives then the other, So keep doing what you are doing its good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so my oppinion doesnt really matter but you do have the perfect tone and look here, I believe there are still a few things that you can improve on, So I will get to a few things here in a bit. I think you covered all the basis of the flash if anything I wouldnt mind seeing some flashy effects here and there.

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[Ackbar : Restaurant]

lol Random

Well this was reandom I like the jpegs mixed in here along with actual art work thats alwasy a plus, sometimes it was hard to understand what was being said, so maybe some subtitles would be a great option.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the one thing I thought that could use the most improvment was adding some subtitles it would help, and im not saying you cant understand things but it would be a nice option for fans and viewers alike.

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[Bill Murray's Space Jam 4]

lol

Alright I dont know what to think with this one, I know for sure it was random and funny However it was a tad short and while that is ok, maybe adding more too it, but you have the random factor too it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as mentioned adding more stuff and more content aswell as more random factor.

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[Munch's War]

Nice use of Color

So first I will start off with the intro its pretty good was not too much but it was nice to see an intro before the actaul flash starts up, there was not much but still a decent intro made it even more enjoyble, so nice effort there.Everything was drawn in a very simple fashion. Though the animation was nice and smooth most of the time, and was all in a good perspective and so on, so it does have some Potential. I love the color and how you implemented everything the characters are funny and amusing, a good little story here with these characters. Now I of all people certainly dont just give the top grade to any flash works but here you had something of interest, And while I will Summarize this review down, The Conclusion is that its a decent effort of works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So try and experiment with this flash there for sure is Plenty of room for a few changes, But anyways I Will post a few ideas if any, so here are some ideas and some possible advice for improvments, good luck on this and the next work of art you have. To be honest you covered all the main areas of a flash and there is not too much to improve on but maybe I would say ad subtitles but its not really needed.

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[Strawberry's Resign CDO8]

Interesting

Well I understand all the clock day stuff but this was silly, but maybe that was the idea, regardless it was interesting and I like the old design of strawbery clock better but still I got a laugh out of this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well ofcourse more content some animation and just more too it.

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antigenalvin responds:

Thank you. I really enjoy your reviews