XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[StickDudeKillingArena4:Ex]

This was kinda nifty

Well I must say this was nifty and had a lot of different stuff going on, also with some good sound/fx it was pretty good I thought, a good stick fighting flash here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More different scenes would be nice.

~X~

[The Noob Adventures Episode 8]

Awsome

And so I do find this entry to be elegantly carved, and still while there could be some things that can be much better I will get to that in the improvment section, but for now lets get this review going deeper into things. Wow didnt know this was about minecraft I really like minecraft stuff so this was pretty good I thought, the animation was pretty good and it was entertaining so nice job there. So as I get to my Closing Remarks I will just say Showcase your work as best as you can, It was Refreshing and pleasent and is obvious that you know what you are doing. This is a Definite keeper for me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And as for improvment, its always a hard choice I thought, but this was pretty solid, so if I do suggest anything for imrovment it may be just a few things, like maybe some extra special effects and flashy explosions and what not.

~X~

[LF2:The Alliance Ch.2]

Nice

This was actually pretty nice, the "SPRITE" work was pretty good and you showed some good action, you even have a good "STORY" going on here, the "VOICES" could use some work they need more passion and effort. A larger view screen would make this a tad bit better, as it will allow you to see more of the details in the actual visuals, just an idea or two there. nice flash you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the voice work could use some work they need more passion and effort. A larger view screen would make this a tad bit better, as it will allow you to see more of the details in the actual visuals, just an idea or two there. also I would suggest that instead of the story playing out with a next button just let the story flow with no buttons, it will bring more quality to the story itself.

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[hot ham water 6-8]

Kinda short

Well I must say this was interesting I like the song and like the "VIBE" this had on it, it was just too short though, but maybe if they are that short you can ad a number of short flicks and put them all together in one submission then that makes this one submission more of a quality one just something to think about.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ading more short clicps in one flash would be cool.

~X~

[Happy Birthday Dom!]

Very short

Haha dont get me wrong this was very funny and a good flick of a submission if you ask me great art and you pulled off the joke well, but In my opinion this could be better with either more content or other short clips along with this short one, just an idea to think about.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice film here, But I should comment that the things that are of a small concern would be that they are too short and they could use some extras a few more atleast and that would give the whole flash entry more depth, so adding a few more episodes per flash entry would be a good effort on your part. anyways nice effort.

~X~

DJaxsNG responds:

This is pretty old, dude. And it was a birthday gift from DomFera.. back then, short videos seemed to be fine. It's 2016 now :)
The improvement was already achieved. But since my stuff isn't short anymore. It's taking me a lot of time to finish a long animation, that's for sure.

But again.. it wasn't an episode. Just a short animation gift. But I thank you for the critique. :)

[MVC3 F*CK]

This was amusing

Haha this was both cute and amazing the art style and color use was brilliant I love this style and the ausio was great, some decent "VOICES" all around a good flick you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The only thing here would to make this longer infact I can see this going as a series of episodes. just an idea to think on.

~X~

[Banned Toy Commercial]

lol

Well this was funny and gave me a laugh or two, it was just very very "SHORT" and it loops over and over there are a few ways to add to this and fix it. it was a good little clip though. infact that reminds me since it is kind of short you can add other "SHORT" clips along with this one to make it a submission with lots of short animations and that alone will ad some good qaulity to this entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The one thing about this was that it was too short and could either use a longer depth to it or could use other short animations with it, just something to think about when putting more quality to a short flash. Stop action code was really needed with this one, it loops over and over and with a simple stop action code, it could stop that and its fairly easy to put in only takes up one key frame, there are lots of tutorials on the site on how to do this if you dont know, anyways think about adding a stop action code.

~X~

[my first animation.. EVER]

Notbad

Well this ws something nifty and different I like the drawing side of it but this could be so much better with some color some audio or music and also think about adding a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" to stop the looping.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This would be alot better with some added audio and or sound/fx, no sound at all kinda just brings the quality down, so add something of sound and you have a wide selecion in the audio portal at your desposal. It seemed like an interesting idea on it's own, but it was rather short, which took away from the humor a bit,This was really short, so maybe adding more to it and or adding more short clips to this entry making it a longer more fuller flash submission, so its an idea. maybe adding a few short ones on this one entry would be a better choice. So i see that this movie starts and loops, you can fix that with a stop action code, what that does is stop the loop and it will play when the user/viewer clicks on the play button, now you should have a play button and a replay button aswell, anyways just an idea to make this better.

~X~

[Spider-Man Animated Short]

Cool

Now this was pretty cool I like the spiderman theme here and this animation actually looked really good the audio seemed like it could be better though, nice effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe adding more quality to the sound and audio it would get static sometimes.

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