XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zelda: UO Epis:7]

Nice work

Its hard to get this started off with the right words, so ill just go ahead and say that I have had some fun with this entry, you pushed the efforts, and showed us some interesting things, now ofcourse there were a few issues were things could be better, but overall I thought you did a good job on this one and showed some effort thruout the entry. This was prettygood, the artwork and characters are pretty impressive the animation was notbad, I think the only issue I had was the "VOICES" they are notbad but could be better. So after seeing this a few times I thought it was alright some stuff I was not too fond of but other stuff I really liked what you showed here, and theres even more potential to it aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was certainly A decent film here, I do Recommend Some Tweaking, on the improvment side of things, theres not much to say on the matter since most of it was pretty straight forward but. The voices could be better more actiong on the parts or something to give more improvemenst in that aspect of things.

~X~

[Alfred Gets Fixed]

Funny

Well you have something interesting here, it was interesting and you added some nifty visuals, I really like the direction you took here and it all made for a decent little flash movie. You have all the Material, and you have presented it well, No I mean Wonderfully well done, This was a good find in the portal. Funny film here it was entertaining the animation was spot on and the music was just right aswell, you can "FIX" the "LOOPING" butother then that this was not half bad. Well here we are at the end here or almost to the end of the review, and What I got from this experience of the flash was that it was an interesting one and you know what you are doing and you have put those forward with ease, some other things could be discussed and so on for improvments. So in my Closing Remarks you have something good here keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a good flash lots of great stuff, but still could use some extra efforts and details, so below are a few ideas that may help, hope to see them used, it would only help in making your flash much better. This flash needs a stop action code, it will stop the looping that it does, adding a replay at the end of the movie will help aswell, just a good idea that should bring abit more quality to the flash. that was the onlything I found.

~X~

emily-youcis responds:

Lol dude I made this 10 years ago when I was 16.
Check out my new shit, I think I improved. : ]

[Valentine's Day 2009]

Touching

This is like an Advanced piece of work, so your hard work does show in the visuals, and thats what really impressed me the most, You have Executed everything very well, and this flowed like majic, so nice job there, I am Excitedly reviewing this and hope to review more of your work sometime soon. While this was a touching story and the artwork was pretty good, I did think you could have added more improved animation, there was not too much of it, nice work though. OK so seems like there was some time and effort put into this thats all fine and dandy but still I came across some thing that could be better, but overall it was a good flash entry and I can see it being upgrded for more enjoy for everyone watching.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really found your flash interesting but still has room for improvments, so with these ideas I hope you can make it somewhat better, hope the ideas do help as you do have a decent flash entry here. Just keep up the quality some nice effort in cleaning things up is always a plus aswell, so just think about those ideas and roll with it. This could use more animation not just little bits here and there but more animation all around.

~X~

[s0und has a nice dick]

lol

Well this one was a tad different then what you normally submit but this actually had some depth and quality, it could use some more in the back rounds and maybe even subtitles.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some subtitles and some back round work is a start in the right direction.

~X~

[The Protomen - Unrest]

Mega man

This was one great Discovery of some interesting ideas and an even better concept as it all plays out, I really like what you do and what you have done here, Sound seemed kind of static-ish but you had some nice visuals with all the sprite action and whatnot, this had a very video game -ish feel so nice efforts there. And thats the end of that one, A good presentation good knowledge of the animation and flash skills wich really payed off and I was pretty impressed with everything presented here so nice effort indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thought you had a good game here there was some slight fixes and upgrades you can put in, nothing to take away from your flash or the ideas you do have, just that there could be some basic improvments for the better, just a few tips to make things better. so here are a few maybe one or two ideas, to make things somewhat better. Add some quality to the sound as it was kind of statiish.

~X~

[German Xmas Market]

Random

This is Perhaps one of the most interesting movie types I have seen in a while, when I first came across it! What I found good about this was how you can learn alot from a simple flash such as this one. This actually reminds of another flash I checked out, Some parts could have more of a Refine about it, but you did an awsome job. And here was something random some funny and you really gave it the random factor, was onfuesed about some things and such, but Thats what stood out to me. Anyways I was enjoying this flash here you put in some effort you put in the time and everything seemed to flow and work well with each other thing going on, and there was some interesting stuff happening.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this was pretty good of a flash but could use a few more changes, fixes and adjustments to make it even better, and here are just a few Recommendation that I think would help improve on it greatly I would go as far as adding more random stuff and more scenes with that random factor effect.

~X~

[Meet the Spy]

Great view shots

Here you have a good entry, something people can really get into and enjoy, it has some replay value or in this case more of a re-watch value but it was entertaining like that and makes for a good submission, now thruout this review I may suggest a few ideas, but I must say this was pretty good and I found it to be an entertaining one, keep that up. Great view shots on this one the characters were pretty good, maybe a few shades and details on the characters themselfs but its notbad work here. I have almost come to the end of this submission, and somethings I found pleasent, and some even more pleasent, all and all it was a pretty decent entry, You know how to Produce some good stuff here, It is obvious though that this could still use some touch ups and i may explain that in the improvment sections but if not cheers to a good flash presentations here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ideas and suggestions they are just possitive ideas that could improve on your flash, so just think about a few of them and maybe you could impleent one or two or even more of them. More shades and details on the characters.

~X~