XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ackbar : Restaurant]

lol Random

Well this was reandom I like the jpegs mixed in here along with actual art work thats alwasy a plus, sometimes it was hard to understand what was being said, so maybe some subtitles would be a great option.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the one thing I thought that could use the most improvment was adding some subtitles it would help, and im not saying you cant understand things but it would be a nice option for fans and viewers alike.

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[Bill Murray's Space Jam 4]

lol

Alright I dont know what to think with this one, I know for sure it was random and funny However it was a tad short and while that is ok, maybe adding more too it, but you have the random factor too it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as mentioned adding more stuff and more content aswell as more random factor.

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[Munch's War]

Nice use of Color

So first I will start off with the intro its pretty good was not too much but it was nice to see an intro before the actaul flash starts up, there was not much but still a decent intro made it even more enjoyble, so nice effort there.Everything was drawn in a very simple fashion. Though the animation was nice and smooth most of the time, and was all in a good perspective and so on, so it does have some Potential. I love the color and how you implemented everything the characters are funny and amusing, a good little story here with these characters. Now I of all people certainly dont just give the top grade to any flash works but here you had something of interest, And while I will Summarize this review down, The Conclusion is that its a decent effort of works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So try and experiment with this flash there for sure is Plenty of room for a few changes, But anyways I Will post a few ideas if any, so here are some ideas and some possible advice for improvments, good luck on this and the next work of art you have. To be honest you covered all the main areas of a flash and there is not too much to improve on but maybe I would say ad subtitles but its not really needed.

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[Strawberry's Resign CDO8]

Interesting

Well I understand all the clock day stuff but this was silly, but maybe that was the idea, regardless it was interesting and I like the old design of strawbery clock better but still I got a laugh out of this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well ofcourse more content some animation and just more too it.

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antigenalvin responds:

Thank you. I really enjoy your reviews

[Happeh Clawck Dai]

um ok

Lol this was amusing not much here but some words but it was actually to the point and it was interesting so nice work here but maybe next time adding some more content, but anyway amusing entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well some extra content and visuals for sure.

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[These Pancakes Are Tiny]

This was kind of interesting

You have some good characters here and very smooth art here and the jokes are pretty funny too, some subtitles could be inserted for that extra feature but you have a decent little flick here, and I look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You also may want to add some "SUBTITLES" in some areas of confusion with the sound of the voices, was not a big deal but subtitles would come in real hand in those lacking areas, so just another option to work on. But to elaberate more on subies, I must say they do bring in a nice feature and fill the flash with some quality, so it for sure would not hurt it. so anyways you have something decent here.

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[Dark Knight Interrogation]

Fantastic

A decent presentation, one that I can empathise with and see that its on the road to better things, some things can be Refined more and with more detail, but i really liked all the effort and all the work here, there was some points that could be much better but for the mostpart this was pretty entertaining. haha this was funny and very amusing the characters are pretty impressive aswell, I think this could use some subtitles but other then that this was pretty decent work. And here we are once again at the end of a decent flash I like how you are going with this one and it does seem like you are going in the right direction.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here in this little session of the review I like to get some ideas thrown your way, including some helpfull hints and tips, and they should help so here you are, go wild with them if you like. Maybe adding some subtitles with this one, I could also see this as a series of small flashes or something like that.

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just2pale responds:

I hope I've improved somewhat since I uploaded this movie in 2008. :p Subtitles are always a plus, I just never thought of putting them in any of my animations. I may look into this.

Thank you for the review!

[Little Aviator]

Very good stuff here

This wasn't amazing, but not terrible either. Infact it was somewhere in the middle but dont get me wrong I really like the style and even shows your effort and how well you are willing o take this, I was enlightened with this nifty flash movie, and all that it represents and thats all good as it was a decent entry. Very good animation here and the "VOICES" are awsomly perfect and so fitting for the story, you really gave it that feel of being in a different time and such. I was most amazed with all the little stuff this flash had to offer, it was alot of little things that really made me enjoy this flash, so a good effort put fourth and was pretty good i thought keep at it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok so lets make this even better this submission has some good potential, And the facts are in that this could use some more changes, And I hope I can help you with that here today with a few ideas. Kinda ended shortly wish there was a tad more to the story, other then that it was pretty impressive.

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