XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snail Jesus Rides Again!]

Random

This was cute and random at the same time as it had some nice random factors and whatnot, lots of amusing pics aswell overall this was amusing and I had some fun watching it aswell as reviewing it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind seeing less jpeg stuff and more artsy style of stuff.

~X~

[The Important Mission]

Cute Movie

Now here is something with some good appeal and some decent Potential to even go further then it is now. Though the rest of the animation was mostly fine, and shows off the artists animating skills aswell as bringing some artistic value to it, it sorta keeps you on your toes with everything going on, and that was all on the plus side of things. Haha this was cute and amusing I reviewed one of these earlier and it was pretty good as is this one and you bring some good effects and a good lil story aswell as being a cute flash. with a few more adjustments and fixer ups it could be much better and even more popular with a larger group of people to enjoy, but anyways it was a decent flash, hope to see some changes for the better and even see this get even more popular then it already is, I Enjoyed your presentation and look for more of your work soon. so keep up the quality and keep up the effort in your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Converting some ideas here and there with no Trade-Off is always a good idea. And so its the simple ideas that seem to make things work best, And I hope you can use some of these simple yet successful ideas, It will be a plus to your work and this project. I would think about making these shorter since you have like a series of flashes here.

~X~

[Rwd: 023 Silent Night]

Cute

Alright this was cute, the animation and the music was pretty nifty, I think that this could be longer though as it was a tad short, but other then that it was kind of amusing, Decent flash and very well deserving of the achieved awards on here, that was pretty neat, like i said a decent flash shpwed off great quaily.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer with a tad bit more content.

~X~

[scr00g mcduc]

Amusing

ok so this was kind of amusing it was a tad short, I could see this being longer with much more random stuff and whatnot, but I liked it it was as I say amusing content. for the mostpart I like what you have presented here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More "RANDOM" more humor and making it a tad longer would be great.

~X~

[Captain R: Game Ranger 2b]

LOL Cute

I am not going to deduct any points or fault you for the simplistic visuals, Infact I liked it for its simple feel and touch, I Did however enjoy the Animation work presented in this submission, It felt very fitting with how there was alot of Focus and stuff going on. Haha this was really funny you made some good humor out of this the "ZELDA" theme is always a plus, infact all of these are pretty good. This was notbad at all, pretty decent flash here, I enjoyed it from the get go, there are some things that could be worked on in order for it to be even better, dont get me wrong its pretty good as is but with some more extras it would be even better, but anyways decent flash I look forward to more from you. I was pleased with this besides a few basic things.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there will not be any sort of quick solution that here, but this is a section that you can find some helpful tips. So I do hope you use some but anyways here are some possble improvement ideas. Maybe a larger view screen to see more details and whatnot, but other then that you have covered all the basis.

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[Max & Watch]

Amusing

Well this was kind of amusing I like the mix of jpeg and art it seems to work well, and the music choice here seems to really work well with this whole film, its very upbeat and flowed well. A decent little flash video you have here, the effort shows off well.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
That one art style dancing character is amusing I could see you making more tunes with him and his dance like videos.

~X~

[Pico: The Shitty Power]

Very Intense

That was very nicely done. There was alot of great value to this Movie, but there were some weaker points that could be addressed aswell, that will be explained later but as for a start to this, this was pretty impressive to start. And eventhough im just getting started on this review I must say it was apleasure watching your flash, it was entertaining. Well I must say that this was very intense and started off right away, I like this action packed flick, keep up the good work. I really enjoyed this flash and all that you have presented here, there was alot to see and it was overall fun so great job all around below I have left a few ideas that may help to improve on this flash, so keep up the good work and I look forward to more. from you and more of this type and style you did here, more effort never hurt either.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I have some Proposed Changes maybe you can Visualize and Re-Invent some of them So I have some ideas on your production here, But it takes some effort on your end, but I believe with some extra effort you can bring out the best of this flash, now here are some ideas. I thought everything was pretty good, the music you had at the end was great maybe that should be throughout the whole movie instead of just the end.

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[McCain/Palin Voters]

It was an interesting take

Notbad of an animation entry here, it had alot of style alot interesting stuff going on, The animation and art style reminds me of some old great flashworks from awhile ago, but what I liked about this and that one was that it was a unique piece, and very stylish just like this one is, I will Recommend some extras and some slight improvments on this if it needs ofcourse. I will say that this was an interesting take on things, wish we knew what we know now back then lol but anyways the racist jokes are ok but I wouldnt label that on everyone but still an amusing flash here, I really took a liking to this flash, and grew on me there was lots of nice stuff on this, and overall got a good feeling from it and was great to see, now ofcourse it could be better and with some more effort it can be just that, so hope soon to see more of this and much more of your work, anyways untill then keep it real. and keep making these kinds of nifty flash submissions.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I Wrote up a few ideas Despite if they will get used, but some of them you may Re-Invent into some positive results, So anyways Hope all the tips, and ideas helped, For the mostpart this was pretty good and it has potential to be even better with such suggested improvments. here is what I came up with. Maybe more simple jokes then just all racist types the race card is easy to use but im sure humor can come from all directions.

~X~

[A Tournament for a Bride]

This was cute

Ok so I found this flash to be pretty interesting and slightly entertaining, its one of those flash pieces thats grabs your attention and keeps you there, I like the style and direction you took with this. Some really nice animation and character art, it has that "CUTE" factor that some flashes bring to the table, the sounds and voices are great but there was some "STATIC" that could be cleared up maybe it was the "MIC" or something. nice cute flash here though. So with all that said, this was pretty decent, allthough it could use more stuff and such, also suggested below, it was still pretty good just needs a tad more effort but it will pay off just keep working on it, and always do what is fun to you because that will make for a good flash so anyways keep up the awsome work, creativity is your friend.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I will enlighten you with a few tid bits of knowledge I may not be perfect in my reviews, but I do have some insight on how things can be improved so here is some things to think about. there was some slight static issues with voices but not too big of a deal.

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