XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ackbar : The Movie]

Deflector shield lol

Well here we are on the last one in the series and it was just as funny as all the rest, While I have griped over a few things and how short these are, they are still funny stuff, I hope one day we see more of these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well you know me longer, more scenes, more story, subtitles etc.

~X~

[Ackbar : The Trailer]

Funny

The trailer looks pretty funny especially the han solo/indie scene, aswell as the explosions lol, you have for sure given me a good laugh with these, very entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As always I would love some longer scenes and more story aswell.

~X~

[FW:]

Amazing work

An entertaining flash submission here I like the content you got going on with this one, its pretty interesting, and while its not the most perfectioned flash around i still thought it was pretty good, maybe later I will suggest some new ideas, but for now I think you did a good job on this one. I was Excitedly awaiting what would happen nexton this one. Here was some pretty amazing work lots of action fun stick battles and some nice effects all arounds. And with all that said I sadly come to a close on this review, or atleast almost, below are some improvment points hope they are used or even considered somewhat, but anyways this was a pretty decent flash entry could have used some more effort, more style and more all around detail.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe the onlything you really need to work on would be some backround effects, there was some good effects but more focus on the backround would be a plus.

~X~

[Ackbar : BBQ]

Nice

Aww I see you have added a new logo page, and even added some subtitles, but these were still pretty short but glad to see these are still going.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make them longer, and more content but Im sure I have mentioned that before.

~X~

[The Game that Stole X-Mas]

Funny

This was funny kind of short almost like a "TRAILER" but the smooth art and cute characters are pretty good and made for a good little X-mas story here so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe make it longer with more content it was funny though.

~X~

[Tomm-E]

Very creative

This was a really cool submission, While not as good as some other stuff, it's still very nice to look, So it was a good Discovery There was various strong points some weaker points aswell, You have some good content and Material here on this flash and made it all worth the while, Later I will Recommend some ideas but thats later and only if it needs them. Now this was very creative here, I like all the robots and the whole newgrounds theme was nice, even liked some of the old music themes, I think you could ad more "EFFECTS" to spruce things up like sparks around there movements and such, more effects would be great. What can I say more, you won some awards for this great flash, the award speaks for it self and shows off your effort in making this, so great effort and great flash. So first of all great flash here, You have shown the effort and presented a good flash here, I found it amusing and entertaining, allthough this could use abit more to it I was still enlightened by it, and hope to see more from you soon. This was pretty awsome. But certainly Could use more work and more effort in some spots and what-not. Good luck on everything else.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There is allways room for improvment and while your flas was pretty decent there were a few stuff and details that could have some slight more effort, So I suggest a few ideas and tips below hoping that it will only make things better,try some or all of the tips and ideas out, and let your flash shine even more. so good luck on improving tis, it looks like it can be even better. Spruce things up like sparks around there movements and such, more effects would be great.

~X~

[Mariohana]

Cute

Always love mario and the theme song is from that old mario super show from back in the day, notbad one the animation was pretty good and matched up to the music pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Wouldnt mind this being a tad bit longer maybe even bring in some other mario bros characters.

~X~

[Kirby: Cake Adventure]

Entertaining

How to start off this review of this interesting yet mystery of a flash here, you have alot going on here, some stuff I was not on par with but its how it was presented so you do have something decent here and i quite enjoyed what you have presented, you have done a Wonderfully and Enticing job here and glad I found this Discovery of a flash, good job. Haha this was cute, I do like the "BLACK AND WHITE" theme here but I could see you adding some color into this maybe just a bit of touch up of color like a spot here and there, like a small item or object while the rest is the black and white theme, just an idea to think about. The animation was actually pretty decent most of the time and could use some adjustments on other areas, I will Clarify some ideas and tips later in the improvments section, But honestly this was a pretty decent submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe a good idea maybe a not so good ideaa. And there is some pretty good ways on going about it aswell, so give it a try, the extra effort will be a plus to all. A new idea for you, A decent flash you have here, even the black and white style is pretty good, makes the whole flash kind of unique, if you add some color, maybe just spots here and there or random items or stuff, maybe a focus on red or blue or even blue, but mixing in some color would be great, give it a try.

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[Ackbar : Pirate]

lol

The lazer turtle is pretty funny I only seen a few of his scenes but again a nice flash here with some amusing humor as you always put fourth just kind of sad that it is comming to an end soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well these are not bad just wish they were longer.

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